Fan-Fic (Part II) Rain Scene Continued...

Darkness, Rain, Angad & Kripa Alone making way for some romance (Part II):

(After stepping outside the car)

Kripa (to herself): I think I've committed a mistake…main poori raat barish main to nahi khari reh sakti na…(confused and a lil bit angry on herself for being so quick in making decisions and thinking lateron…Gives a why-doesn't-he-care look to angad who seems least interested with closed eyez)….Ab kya karoon? Main waqai pagal hoon …(feels like crying…her clothes soaked totally in rain water…she sits besides the car on the road feeling helpless and tears slowly pouring down her face)

Angad (who is pretending to sleep, opens his eyes and is shocked to find kripa nowhere around the car…being such a sweetie that he really is from inside, he steps outside the car in a hurry and begin looking for her, Upon finding her sitting on the road, He has a sudden feeling of compassion for Kripa…He feels a bit angry on himself for using those words that compelled her to take such a stupid step…Next is what he could have never thought in normal circumstances, his heart made him to do the unusual things ahead…but still he kept on making excuses for his every act to himself for the mere satisfaction that he is still the same ANGAD who hates kripa….)

Angad: Pagal ho gai ho kya??? Itni baarish main beemar ho jao gi…chalo gaadi main ja ker baitho…

Kripa: Nahin wo tumhari gaadi haina..issliye tum jab chaho kisi ki bhi insult ker ke nikaal sakte ho…mujhe tumhari gaadi main nahi baithna, tum ja ker baitho..tumhain kya...? Main barish main beemar hoti hoon to hoti rahoon, main nahi aaongi…(thinking to herself)…"Kya samajhta hai ke main itni asaani se maan jaoongi, main bhi Kripa Sharma hoon…Nakhre dikhaye baghair to kuch ker hi nahi sakti"

Angad: Bachpana mat kero kripa…(Thinking to himself)..."Teri to Aisi ki Taisi, main larkiyon ke nakhre bardaasht nahi ker sakta aur wo bhi is jaisi chipkali ke".... (thinking this he takes her from her arm, opens the door of her side and literally pushes her onto the seat, Kripa cant do anything infront of angad and feels somewat happy n cared by angad from inside but doesn't let it show on her face…)

Angad (sitting in car): Tumhara dimagh to theek hai? Itni baarish main koi bahir nikalta hai?

Kripa (still having tears in her eyes, that's what I call crocodile tears…dil main laddu phoot rahe hain aur ooper se natik ho raha hai): Tum nai hi to kaha tha…tabhi to …(saying this makes an aweful face as if she going to cry)

Angad (scared of seeing a horrible face as a consequence of her crying, immediately says): Maine to aisay hi kaha tha…mazak kiya tha…ab main sach much main to nahi chahta tha ke tum sari raat bahir guzaro….agar tum beemar ho jati to……(gives a pause)

Kripa (dreaming of some romantic dialogue from Angad): Tooo ???

Angad: To mera kya hota (saying this in a really low tone)

Kripa: Kya kaha tumne?

Angad (shattering all her high hopes): Maine kaha ke agar tum beemar hojati to mujhe daadi se daant khani parti…

Kripa (totally disappointed): Oh Acha!

Angad (thinking to himself): "Uff bhagwan…kabhi kabhi gadhe ko bhi apna baap banana parta hai….per ye to gadhi hai...khair ab kya bataoon is pagal ko ke main apnay show ki publicity campaign kharab nahi kerna chahta..agar yeh beemar hojati to meri campaign ka kya banta…agay kaunsi achi shakal hai iski, phir to bikul hi sari hui ho jati…"

Angad (totally justified of his acts in his view): Tum ab araam kero..so jao!

Kripa (feels a bit annoyed as to things aren't turning out to be the way she wanted them to…thinking n thinking she falls asleep)

(Angad after sometime falls asleep as well)

Now its morning, angad and kripa are both sleeping and their heads leaning towards each other in a really cute way. Kripa dreaming:

Kripa's Dream Sequence:

Kripa is outside the car dancing in rain and enjoying….Angad is in the car staring at her…suddenly the current strikes and kripa pretends to be afraid….Angad steps outside and starts singing "Ek Larki Bheegi Bhaagi Si, Soti Raton main Jagi Si…Miilee Bechare Angad Se…Koi Agay Na Peeche….Tum Hi Kaho ye Koi Chaal Hai….hmmmmm"

(Upon hearing the truth from Angad's mouth, Kripa wakes up with the first ray of sunlight gently touching her face…only to find angad close to her)…Kripa releases a sigh of relief upon finding that reality is atleast better than her nightmares!

Cheers,

Will try writing something better and funny next time, till then Chao!

Love,

Take care

that was brilliant and simply stunning, simply stunning 😆, it felt as if you were probably inspired by hindi cinema, not sure which film though, but that was really cute!!👏👏

Quote= "Kya samajhta hai ke main itni asaani se maan jaoongi, main bhi Kripa Sharma hoon…Nakhre dikhaye baghair to kuch ker hi nahi sakti"- so true, lol 😆, nakhre aur ulte facial expressions!!!😆

Jots 😃

Originally posted by: IMP TNG

"Angad(thinking to himself): "Uff bhagwan…kabhi kabhi gadhe ko bhi apna baap banana parta hai….per ye to gadhi hai..

Kripa is soooo sweet. She deserves better than that. You guys are sure out to get her🤢

that was sjus soooooooooo touching..u gave nagad a new look..lolz..he seemed more caring and xtra cute!!!.... keep up the gud work n keep ritin more

Originally posted by: KYPH_fan

I wish in your fiction stories Angad treated Kripa better.😭

Kripa is soooo sweet. She deserves better than that. You guys are sure out to get her🤢

Actually I thought that line was one of the funniest 😆 one in the story.. and really enjoyed it...

Simply stunning is just poking fun @ the show...not @ Kripa...

hey simpley stunning

its KP

u r hillarious

cant wait for more of the ACTUAL romantic scenes

keep up the good work

will wait for ur next part

love KP