Akhelay chalay- Poem by me

Page

of

2

Simply.confused

@Simply.confused

Rocker

26

Posted: 19 years ago

#1

Hey Guys

This is my try on urdu/hindi Poems 😉😉😉 hope u like it ...

Akhelay chalay hum rahano per
na koi saathi
Na koi rahi...
Na koi manzil...
Na koi sahara....
Akhelay Chalay hum rahano per...

Kya khel hai yeh zindagi ka
ek pal main hi sab laygaye apnay saath
jab laynay tha to kyu nhi liye mera ghum...
kyu nhi liye yah ansoon ...
kyu nhi li yah tanhaiye....
Akhelay Chalay hum rahano per

Abb yaken karon to kiska karoon
Garion per bharosa kasia karon
Apnay hi parhaye niklay...
Karon to kya karonn
Zindagi na is rastay per la kar choda...
Mudh kar peechay bhi nhi dekh sakta
Akhelay Chalay hum rahano per

Yeh Rasta hai meri zindagi ka
Kuch pal yaadon kay, Kuch khushiyan..
Kahin ghum .. to kahin hasi...
Na rahi mila... Na hum saaya....
Zindagi say gila karen to kasia
Akhelay Chalay hum rahano per

😆 ok my urdu/hindi isnt that gr8 so bear with the mistakes 😆

luv ya all

Samia

Reply

Quote

Frequent Posters

Vandana

@Vandu4ever

Stunner

35

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#2

wow
too good!!
awesome 👏 👏 👏

Great job!!

Reply

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

sikha

@FanofAngad

Rocker

25

Posted: 19 years ago

#3

very nice.
gud job Di 👏 👏 👏

Reply

Quote

Simply.confused

@Simply.confused

Rocker

26

Posted: 19 years ago

#4

😳 Thank u Vandu ....

luv ya
samia

Reply

Quote

Simply.confused

@Simply.confused

Rocker

26

Posted: 19 years ago

#5

Originally posted by: FanofAngad
very nice.
gud job Di 👏 👏 👏

Thanks shiku... 🤗

Reply

Quote

sikha

@FanofAngad

Rocker

25

Posted: 19 years ago

#6

Di
ur hindi is superb. i didnt know that u write such a nice poem.
😳

Reply

Quote

Suspended

Posted: 19 years ago

#7

This is so nice Samia, wow I love it. 😃

Reply

Quote

Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

Trailblazer

44

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#8

thats are really nice poem 😊

Reply

Quote

Scarlet Glow

@Scarlet_Glow

Rocker

25

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#9

hey Samia! how r u?

awwwwwwww very nice Samia! i love it! 😳 very cute!

👏 👏 👏 👏

Love,

Dharti!

Reply

Quote

ghunoo

@ghunoo

Inactive

15

Posted: 19 years ago

Samia honey, that is fantastic !!!

Very well written and truly heart-felt

Reply

Quote

Related Topics

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".