Here's the latest poem I wrote for Angad/Zeb and Kripa. You may decide whom this poem suits more. I hope you all will like it and ya, don't be lazy to reply, I need your help, so if I need to improvise, I can next time!
My soul is like the deepest sea
I lose myself within your love;
I breathe within your heart.
Love is buried in my soul
My heart swims in your hatred,
But, I still exhale out of your heart.
I inhale your love: it is my air,
My ingredient, my world.
I know no other ambiance;
I have no other dream.
Your love is fire to my body
The ingredient for me is to escape
I know no other way
To minimize this excruciating dream
I know there is outside your love
A world of rocks and sand;
And I could live there, too, but oh!
How poor and thin each breath!
I will live around you,
With thorns and knives
And I will burn too, Oh yes!
How poor and thin each breath!
How rich my world, how beautiful,
Alive within your love,
Each moment filled with dancing light
Refracted through your eyes!
What poor resolution, how gruesome,
Dead in my soul
Each moment filled with vengeance
sprouting from our love
Take care!
Soni