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Posted: 19 years ago
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Here's the latest poem I wrote for Angad/Zeb and Kripa. You may decide whom this poem suits more. I hope you all will like it and ya, don't be lazy to reply, I need your help, so if I need to improvise, I can next time!

My soul is like the deepest sea
I lose myself within your love;
I breathe within your heart.

Love is buried in my soul

My heart swims in your hatred,

But, I still exhale out of your heart.

I inhale your love: it is my air,
My ingredient, my world.
I know no other ambiance;
I have no other dream.

Your love is fire to my body

The ingredient for me is to escape

I know no other way

To minimize this excruciating dream

I know there is outside your love
A world of rocks and sand;
And I could live there, too, but oh!
How poor and thin each breath!

I will live around you,

With thorns and knives

And I will burn too, Oh yes!

How poor and thin each breath!

How rich my world, how beautiful,
Alive within your love,
Each moment filled with dancing light
Refracted through your eyes!

What poor resolution, how gruesome,

Dead in my soul

Each moment filled with vengeance

sprouting from our love

Take care!

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 think it suits Angad.

Good posts Soni.

Love
Maya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww lovely poem jenny luved it it suits angad more 😃 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome poem.
1st to angad
2nd to krips
3rd angad
4th krips
5&6 angad
7&8 ANGAD
DID U LIKE MY SUGGESTION 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awsome poem...a-1!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nIsHaZz_21

aww lovely poem jenny luved it it suits angad more 😃 👏 👏

Ni😡sha, who am I?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: galpal

beautiful poem ,soni!
okay, the first stanza will suit kripa more, the second suits zaib/angad, the third suits kripa again and the 4th and last stanzas are for zaib! do u like my solution?
pallavi

Even I think so, it kind of intertwines with the two.

Love

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni595

Ni😡sha, who am I?



oh shorrry soni di i keep geting u confused wit jenny😆😳😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice soni...awesome
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nIsHaZz_21



oh shorrry soni di i keep geting u confused wit jenny😆😳😕

You and Happe think alike😆 it's okay, you're my little sister, so I got to forgive you

Take care!

Soni di

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