I will never let you part -

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Here, I present to you, my latest poem. I wrote this one in a rush, so it's not as good as some others, but I hope you will like it

Zeb's mind

He stabbed your heart

But he is still the colors in your art

He treaded between you and me

But you still walk into his sea

Our souls are married

But our minds varied

I wanted to explain

But you made it plain

After this you walked in mistrust

I slept in dust

Your heart cried

Whilst my soul was fried

Today my heart burns

And your soul churns

At my every move

Your soul hides in a cove

Now this burning is revenge

I want to avenge

My broken heart

You may dart

But I will carry you in my cart

Bu I will never let you part

Tomorrow: a romantic poem on A-K and my secret opinions on tomorrow's episode.

Good night for today!😛

Love

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago
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How do you manage to steal my heart yaar???

Lovely.... Love ya jaan....

Don't forget to write your story about 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: jenny1000

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How do you manage to steal my heart yaar???

Lovely.... Love ya jaan....

Don't forget to write your story about 😳 😳 😳

I won't forget Jenny😉 your story will be written for sure😛

Love

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good Soni 👏 👏 👏 u r a good wirter.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwww.............it's just too good 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing poem jenny, i missed some of your poems, so now me will go back and find em and read em 😳 can't wait to read new ones 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww that was soo sweet!! 👏 very nice yaar! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is really beautiful. This was done in a rush?? Hats off to you for an amazing poem.

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