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Posted: 19 years ago
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Omg... i just watched the promo... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ i feel so sorry for Zeb... even though he hates her... he gets hurt by hurting her... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— dont worry Zeb...Kripa will pay for wht she has done..

And kripa ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก... tum angad ho ugh ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก get over it ladki... tumko jab pata hai ... Angad to phir kyu nakhre.... He didnt marry u cuz of ur nakhree ๐Ÿ˜‰ thats why he left ... ouch that was mean ... anyways according to the situation i came with a small poem ... hehe ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† guys bare with me ... i am no writer... like other member here ... wwho r just simplyyy gr888 at writing .... ๐Ÿ‘

so here goes nuttin

Our paths were never meant to cross
You went Ur way but I stood there waiting for u
Neither were u wrong.
Neither was I wrong...
The time we were together was wrong
You were at the other end of the shore
I was at the other end...
The Sea of Hatred grew us apart
What happened between us?
Neither I nor u know...
We had just let the world decide for us

Was our thread of love so weak?
That in a blink of an eye it broke...
We were like 2 flowers in a field close together
That was never meant to bloom...
We were a perfect imagine in the sea of our love
That got struck by a stone and the image got distorted...
We were like a broken glass
That was never meant to be mend
We were like a dream
That was broken by a blink of an eye

What kind of play has the destiny has played with me
The one I love is near me but I cannot touch them
My ship of love has just reached the shore
But sank before it reached to the corner of my island
I wish the time could just turn back
Where we were together and stop there
I realized the meaning of love to late
Now when my heart aches for you r not near to hear my heartbeat
This was the play of my destiny...
The one I loved is right there
But I am afraid to touch you....
Cuz if I do I have the fear of losing you...

samia
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Real love hurts.
Real love makes you totally, vulnerable and open.
Real love will take you far beyond yourself;
therefore real love will devastate you.
If love does not shatter you,
you do not know love

p.s do comment... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


tc luv ya all
samia


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Is this a fan fiction?

If it is, write soon and loves words you have used above, keep it up!

Love
Soni
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Posted: 19 years ago
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๐Ÿ˜ฒ SaMiAAA...U TuRned Out TO Be A LIItlE PoEt....OMG!!! LuB UR PoEMs!!! So TouChiNG!!!.... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ WONDERFUL JOB!!!


MUAHHHH
LUB YA!!!
Edited by PyAriViBu21 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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So good and touching my jaan...wow u r a wonderful writer...I luv every bit of it...

Yes, Angad wants revenge from Kripa, yet he is hurting himself doing that...this means he still feels for Kripa and bad...my heart goes for Angad...what pain he has for hurting his love...tru lover I tell u...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni595

Is this a fan fiction?

If it is, write soon and loves words you have used above, keep it up!

Love
Soni



awww soni so sweet... nah its not fan fic yaar i cannot write half as good as u guys do๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ... and come with amazing story lines๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. .. this something i just wrote .... thank u for reading it and liking it ... ๐Ÿค—

love ya
samia
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: PyAriViBu21

๐Ÿ˜ฒ SaMiAAA...U TuRned Out TO Be A LIItlE PoEt....OMG!!! LuB UR PoEMs!!! So TouChiNG!!!.... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ WONDERFUL JOB!!!


MUAHHHH
LUB YA!!!




aww vibu thank u so much .. me no poet ... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† but thank u
๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: queenkumar

So good and touching my jaan...wow u r a wonderful writer...I luv every bit of it...

Yes, Angad wants revenge from Kripa, yet he is hurting himself doing that...this means he still feels for Kripa and bad...my heart goes for Angad...what pain he has for hurting his love...tru lover I tell u...




aww sanguuu dii.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ thank u so much..... my dll goes mmmm .. hehe... for him ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† bechara he want revenge but then its like taking revenge on himself.. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww thank u jenny and angeleyes ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— glad u liked it ...


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Posted: 19 years ago
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sangu diiii i love ur avi๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ... we can say that its one and only Angad/ Zeb ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† kripa main itni sense hoti ... so she would have guessed it long time bak... hehe ... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† but its the same scene bechari prithvi na blindfold laga diya ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

sammyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

that was sooo sweeettttttttttttt

beautifull jaan!!

ur a great writer!!!!

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