kth in my style part-7 hope u like

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here is the next part hope u all likeeeee plz comment😭

Recap:Sujal drops kashish at her home and on the way tries to talk to
her but she is not interested...

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sujal never felt so helpless...kashish is walking off and he doesnt
even know what to do....he wants to do something...wants to say
something...he wants to make her listen to what he has to say.....in
a fit of rage he runs to her and grabs her arm from behind...

kashish is astonished with this unexpected thing...she looked at him
with mixed emotions of anger,fear,hatred etc and etc...her eyes
conved so many things to him...they kind of challenged him...he got
so angry and provoked looking at her eyes that he forgot abt what he
wanted to say...he dragged her back to the car and made her
sit...then he also came and sat and drove off to the sea
shore...kashish is resisting all the way but to no use...sujal pulls
kashish out of the car and makes her stand...she is totally in a
dazed state and just staring at him like as if she is looking at some
monster or something...

sujal:now listen to me kashish...listen to me properly....i want to
tell u, i know what u r going thru...but do u know what i'm going
thru?...do u know after that day i never slept peacefully?do u know
that..........anyways forget it...there is no use even if i tell
u...i know that i'm ur gunegaar...but why dont u give me a chance to
explain?

Kashish:explain what?i'm not interested in anything...nobody is my
gunegaar...i've nothing to hear nor to say...and i dont have to know
what everybody is going thru...cos i simply dont care....

Sujal:now he is totally out of his mind...u dont care?really...then
what is this...he pulls the mangalsutra out that she nicely concealed
inside....tell me what this means?

kashish looks at him with disbelief...not believing tht he can ask
such a thing....she just pulls the mangalsutra from his hands and
says"how dare u ask me this? u thot i've started loving u and
respecting this and that's why i have it with me?u dont know how much
i curse myself for not being able to throw that away....but dont
worry very soon i will be able to do that also....right now this is
no less than a snake around my neck....i hate it and i hate u....dont
ever try to talk to me again...and dont dare touch me....i know how
to take care of my life and this piece of necklace that u 've put
around me forcefully is not going to stop me from enjoying my
life...what did u think of urself?just because u wanted to talk to
me, i will start dancing to ur tunes?just forget it..okay...dont even
dream abt it...i can do a lot of things to u...all these people who
love u so much,who dont know ur real face and how cruel it can
be...just imagine if i expose u to them what will be ur
position...but ghabrana mat...mai aisa kuch nahi karungi...i dont
want to have anything to do with a evil person like u...just get
lost..." she leaves him there stunned and devastated and goes and
sits in the car...

sujal stood there for a minute totally shattered...he drags himself
towards the car...without even looking at kashish, he drives her back
to home and drops her off there...kashish gets down banging the door
behind her...and walks off towards her home...

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next day umesh is feeling a little bit better and he wanted to be
dropped off to his home..so sujal took him home and asks shruti to
take good care of him...umesh insists that sujal shld come everyday
to meet him...sujal nods and leaves...

umesh:pata nahi sujal ko kya ho gaya tha...kuch khoya khoya sa lag
raha hai...

sujal is walking towards his car and kashish enters just then...both
of them look at eachother...sujal walks off without any expressions
on his face...

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kashish comes in and is very happy to see umeshji in a better
state...she goes to him and says good morning...

umesh, eversince he saw kashish, wanted to ask who her parents
were...but scared of what her reaction cld be....because kashish
always meant business and never allowed any scope for personal
things...

Today he cld not stop himself anymore...he asked kashish to come
along for a walk to the near by park...they took pinki also along
with them and also raghu kaka....when raghu kaka and pinki were
playing umesh made kashish sit next to him and asked her abt her
parents...

kashish always saw a father figure in umesh and did not find anything
odd in whatever he had asked...so she told him everything abt her dad
and mom and how there taken care of by her maamaji shyamlal vora...

umesh is totally shocked....he doesnt want to show it but he is
totally helpless..."so so...kashish is my...oh my God"

Kashish is surprised with this reacion...she asked him what happened?

umesh:nothing kashish...listening to ur story i'm not able to control
myself...

Kashish:admiring him for his compassion...umeshji i'm so lucky that i
got a boss like u...u r a very nice person....

umesh:not able to hear anything....so kashish who else is there at ur
home...

Kashish:my mom,maamiji

umesh:and...

kashish:and and my brother also...but he doesnt stay with us
anymore...while saying this she has tears in her eyes...

umesh:why..

kashish:sir,from the beginning he is very rebellious...he has grown
up hating our father...what to do...its not his mistake also...

umesh suddenly says..ok kashish can u take me back to home...i want
to take some rest...

kashish thot he is tired and also feeling bad for her...

they all go back to home...

umesh in his room....

"so savita is right here...gosh..how much i searched for her after
that..no wonder i felt so close to kashish...she is after all my OWN
DAUGHTER"

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kashish is talking to chandru...they r standing in front of a shop at
a corner...chandru is looking even more handsome and masculine now
with his goggles and all that...kashish is having tears in her eyes
and she is verymuch worried for chandru...

chandru:kashiiiiish...please yaar...dont cry...i told u i'm okay
right...

kashish:what ok..do u know its been almost 3 months that u came
home...u know how much mom loves u right?

chandru wiping her tears asks her not to be worried and also tells
her that he will not be able meet her like this in open...

while they were talking a pair of eyeballs is observing them...and it
belongs to Mr.sujal Garewal....there is jealousy oozing out of those
eyes....he is not able to bear the love and concern that kashish is
showing to this man...and worst thing is, that man touched her to
wipe her tears....he is fuming with anger and wanted to give her a
tight slap...now he understood what she meant by very soon she will
be able to throw away that mangalsutra...he is very mad and want to
kick the hell out of everybody around,specially that man who is
behaving so close to kashish...before he realized both of
them left from there on a bike...

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Dearest Piyush,

Sorry for not being able to write to u so far...i know we promised to
eachother that we will write atleast one letter every month...

How r u doing?hope u got adjusted to the new surroundings...i'm sure
u found some new and nice friends there...

Here i'm missing u verymuch....As u know u r the only friend i
have...i miss u more than u miss me...Thanks to u, the job that u've
shown is occupying my time nicely and i'm wnjoying my work...i love
the people there specially umeshji...by the way he recently fell
ill...but now by the God's grace his doing much better...

Things at home are also slowly getting better...mom is doing okay and
chandru got a new job in bombay...though i dont know what kind of a
job he is doing,i just hope its good....

U dont worry abt me and concentrate more on studies...i know u r
going to come out with flying colors and come back and join ur office
and take over ALL THE RESPONSIBLITIES....(kicking sujal
out...well,she did not write that but that;s what she meant)

chalo that's all for now...will be waiting for ur reply...

luv,
kashish...

folding that letter smiles to herself at the thot of how sweet and
innocent piyush is....

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Sujal is doing somework in his office and the phone rings...

sujal:hello

"hi sujal"

sujal:hi piyush...how r u...what man i tried calling u the other day
and i believe u were busy...what's the matter?i hope u r not
focussing too much on extra curricular activities...

piyush:arre nahi yaar...aisaa kuch nahi hain...just went out with
friends...u know me right...

sujal:yeah i know u that;s why i'm more worried...

piyush:hoffo now will u stop that...dont behave like my big brother
yaar...u r my best friend...

sujal:okay..okay...tell me what's up?

piyush:hey how is umesh uncle doing now?i heard he is not keeping too
well...

Sujal:surprised...arre who told u?i did not even tell that to uncel
and aunty...

piyush:nahi..u remember kashish...arre wahi jisko mere saath dekke
thumhe bahut boora lagaa thaa...anyways she is now working for uncle
as his assistant and she only infromed me that uncle is not well...

sujal:clasping the phone tightly...oh...so she is still in touch with
u?

piyush:arre yaar chodo bhi...she is a very nice girl...but a little
gusse wali hai...just like u...but please yaar dont have any hard
feelings for her...i cant afford to lose any of u...u both r close to
my heart...

sujal:....quite....

piyush:sujal...kya hua?line kat gaya to nahi?

sujal:ha ha i'm listening...

piyush:ok yaar tell me how uncle is now...

sujal:yeah he is much better...

piyush:chalo say my hi to him..tell him i will call him also...

sujal:okay and u take care of urself...

piyush:sure and please stop becoming a workaholic and find a nice
girl for urself...tum kaho tho mai yahaa se ek english mem ko bhej
doo?ek se badkar ek hai....

sujal:no thanks...u can help urself...

piyush:arre yaar mera tho mem udhar India me hi chod aaya...very soon
i'm going to get her...i'm going to get her naa?what do u think?

sujal:what..er,,haa,,ha,,..

piyush:i dont even know why i'm asking u...i know u dont like kashish
at all...anyways i know one day u will understand how nice a girl she
is....did u meet her at uncles place anytime?

sujal:yeah...but not much...may be once or twice...

piyush:the reason i've shown her that job is so that u can observe
her very closely and remove all ur misconceptions towards her...arre
yaar samjha kar...ur green signal is very important to me...i hope u
got my point...

sujal:ok ok...now piyush i'm getting late...we will talk again
okay...take care buddy...

piyush:alright and u too take care of urself...bye...

sujal:bye....

sujal collapses into the sofa....this phone call left a very bad
taste in his mouth..."so kashish ab bhi piyush se...nahi nahi,,,may
be she considers piyush as her friend...i shld not think negative all
the time"

but he is not satisfied...he wants to do something...doesnt know what
to do though...filhaal to he is getting late so he leaves...


That's it guys...end of part7...howzzat?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part i like the way of writing story it is really gr8 and interesting to read keep posting 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The first thing i will tell u that i waqs waiting for ur next part7 very very eagerly.and now it is here,i cant tell u that how much happy i am to read this next part. U R GR8,I MUST TELL U.Please continue i love this story line.bye iam sullu (sultana_sange).
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It's so good, much better than real kth on tv, please continue to write because I love your story line and I am looking forward to read the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is nice part yaar thanks 👏 👏 i have a question for u r u writing this story day by day r u prepared much before,whatever it maybe ur story telling is very intresting &iam looking forward for the next part 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u now iam going to post the part 8 hope u all like
here is the next part



Here is the part 8 of my story....

Recap:Sujal sees kashish with chandru and misunderstands...sujal and
piyush talk on phone, when piyush asks sujal to observe kashish more
and clear all his misunderstandings towards her as she is a very nice
girl in reality....

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Sujal did not like the conversation that he had with piyush on
phone...its still ringing in his mind and not allowing him to focus
on anything...without realizing where he was driving he just drove
towards umesh's house and went in...actually after that day when
kashish blasted him off, he has decided that he's never going to see
her until and unless she wants to see him....but today again his
heart did not listen to his mind....

When sujal entered umesh's house this is the scene.....

Kasish is laughing out loud and enacting something to pinki and both
of them r lost in there own world...kashish is wearing a very simple
cotton short salwaar and kameez...she looked so heavenly to sujal's
eyes...he is seeing her for the first time so active, happy and
laughing...her smile made him forget everything else...its truly a
million dollar smile...looking at her, a small and sweet smile
appeared on his face too....since he doesnt want to disturb them, he
stood there only and is observing them very closely leaning on to a
wall there...all he can see there is kashish,kashish and only
kashish...he is completely lost in her...

Suddenly kashish becomes aware of somebody looking at her and she
sees sujal standing there looking very intensely at her....she
becomes very conscious and embarrassed...she just stops whatever she
was doing and quitely goes off from there....sujal also just crashes
back into this world...at the same time pinki sees him and as usual
gives him a big hug and clings on to him and asks him to play with
her...

Kashish is trying to forget sujal's face...the more she wants to
forget, the more she is remembering that sweet adorable face that she
just saw...she knows that this will only make her weak against
him,but not able to control herself....

Shruti just came in from outside and saw sujal sitting there and
playing with pinki...

shruti:hi sujal how r u?glad u remembered us after this long...

sujal:hey shruti..how r u...arre nai yaar...i'm coming here almost
everyday...yeah u r getting busy by the day i guess...i dont see u at
home that often now a days...

shruti:hm...very smart...ulta chor kotwal ko daatne lagaa..anyways i
want to give u one good news...guess what...

sujal:i dont know...u know i'm not good at these things...why dont u
only tell...

shruti:ur friend and class mate anjali is coming from USA for a
couple of weeks and she is going to be here with me for a week...

sujal:oh really...that's good for u...some time pass...

Shruti:good for me?what abt u?i dont know anything but u have to make
urself free that one week and take her around..i know she is coming
here to meet u only specially...

sujal:come on yaar...

shruti:seriously sujal...u r cominng tomorw right...we have to go and
pick her up...

sujal:i cant promise u but i will try...anyways where is uncle...i
have some important issue to discuss with him...

shruti:oh he must be in his office...u can find him there...ok sujal
see u tomorw...

sujal:thank God jaan bachi...ab yeh anjali yahaa kyo aa rahi hai?
anyways jo bhi hoga dekha jaayegaa....

anjali is his ex class mate and everybody knows that she loves
him...a couple of years ago anjali's parents went with the proposal
to sujal's uncle and aunty...but since sujal refused they cld not do
anything abt it...sujal actually is not at all interested in these
glitter girls...all he is looking for is a simple girl...(remember
his dream of a simple girl and a simple marraige)

sujal goes into the office room and starts searching for some file as
umesh told him in the morning that he will keep it ready with
signatures and stuff...kashish came out of the rest room that is
there and bangs into sujal....both of them fall very badly on
eachother...sujal tries to get up but since kashish is upon him he is
not able to get up...kashish on the other hand is totally
bewildered...she is so shocked that she forgot to get up...and also
actually without his realizing what he is doing sujal has his both
the hands tightly clasped around kashish....the clock stopped ticking
for a while...both of them r lost into eachothers eyes...

with a jolt she gets back into consciusness and just shruggs off
sujals hands around her very rudely,gets up but the mangalsutra
around her neck came out and got stuck in sujals shirt button....she
tries to take it out but with not much success...sujal finally is
able to remove his button from her mangalsutra...she just runs away
from there...he also slowly gets up,but still can feel her around
him...

umesh came there and brot him back into this world..."hi
sujal...looking for the file..here it is"

Sujal:oh..thankyou uncle...how is ur health now...

umesh:cant be any better...with all of u taking care of me..i can
tell u i'm going to live for another 100 years very happily...

sujal smiles and takes leave from him...
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sujal is driving and suddenly he saw a small comotion there on the
side of the road...he pulled his car and went there to see what is
happening...a small child is getting beaten up cos he stole a small
piece of bread...sujal gets very wild at this and catches the hands
of the person who is beating the child up....

sujal:are u not a human being?how can u beat a small kid like
this...dont u have anything called heart in u?

that man:oye...tum kaun ho beech me...patha bhi hai ke isne kya kiya?

sujal:ha...i know...he only did that out of helpless ness....hunger
can make u do anything....he did not take away all u riches
right...he only took a small piece of bread...

that man:but stealing is a sin...

sujal:ha that's right...but u have to see in what cicumstances he did
it and if possible help him but if not possible who r u to punish him
anyways....u guys forget abt those people who do big big things and
get away and catch people like this and show all ur valour on
them...shame on u...

sujal again:looking at the kid and with a very tender voice...dont u
know that stealing is wrong?

kid:yes sir i know...but my mom did not eat anything for the last 4
days and today also if she doesnt eat anything, i may lose her
forever...i did not do it for myself sir....i did not know how else
to save her...

looks at that man and that man just bends his head with shame...

sujal:where is ur mom?take me to her...and what work can u do?can u
take care of my plants...i have a lot of plants at my home...and i
will join u in a school also...like this he goes away talking to that
kid....

everybody who surrounded them also dispersed...but one person is
still
standing there and that is kashish....she saw a different sujal
today...she did not know that sujal can be so loving....in fact if
sujal did not come there she was abt to do the samething...with this
she developed some respect for sujal...things that she saw all these
days and the love and respect that sujal commands from people is not
for nothing...she thot that the sujal that she knows is different
from this sujal...for the first time she felt that she shld destroy
that sujal and shld make this sujal her companion....

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end of part8...

plz comment 😊 😭

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