KTH story (Remake)part 5 - pg 17 - Page 13

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Posted: 18 years ago
o thanx lot for lykeing my idea 😊 . i no the videis will bw kinda dificult but the pix ill be fun intersestinggggg 😊 n ya by tora sa pyar i mean the written lyrucs not the videos😳
n plz do conitinue this topic n conti ue writting cuz am enjoyin it .not only me but all the SK fans n rajeevian r having fun 😳


rajeev rox 👏
Edited by me2kool - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: captain_kia

nice really a good one keep posting and waiting for the next sujal kashish meeting 😊



thanx kia
me soo happy that u like this part😳

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ana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf

summo and ana veryy good parts...

awesome now lemme go and find another writer..lolzz arre dunt think anything else..

this is my duty i need to find it everyday...next part ke liye..



thanku amby
me happy that u like
and yup.................find new writterz yaar.............we too wanna read exciting parts😳

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ana

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: krazy_khyati

Awsomeeeeee part Ana di!!!!!!!!! Absolutely fantabulous 👏



no thanx khayatii
luv it baby that u like this..........and love to see u here😳

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ana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me2kool

ooooooooooooo uu rockkkkkkkk dearrrrr
kya story likhi haiiiiiiiiiii mind blowing!!!! 👏 👏 👏
u made my dayyy 😳
i hope kth kistory yoon hi hoti aur piyush atraction 😆 😆 ko bhabhi hi bulata 😆 😆
lakin ab ya ti ekta miyan ki den thii


i can bet agar ya telecast ho to ekta walay say ziyada chalayy
.i can betttttttttt

i have a sugestionnnnn.if posible u can also add some cool pix (lyke rain dance n others or singles) and u can also add thora sa pyar songs or other songg.it ill make it a bit more interesting


rajeev rox 👏



thanx dear
see.............we make a diff.............ad never wanna follow ekta bai......😆

u will surely enjoy it further

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ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys.. me here with 5th part of kth remake....
pehle recap dekhthein hai:- the last part had sujal's confusion over his feelings for kashish...kashish very happy about her job...and then piyush teasing sujal... ab dekhthein hai aage

KTH Remake..PART-5

sujal aur piyush reach the conferance hall.. jahaan par cg is fuming with anger... and lalit usse calm karne kii nakaam koshish kar raha hai.... ab cg sees sujal and starts shouting at him...
cg:- sujal what is this... itni irresponsible kaise ho sakthe ho tum.... tumne time dekha hai.. itna late kaise ho sakthe ho tum.. and why the hell are you not answering.....
sujal bas cg ko coolly dekh raha hotha hai , he comes sits on his chair and says :- kya kahoon main aapse... yeh tho aapka roz ka kissa hai.. ab roz yun cheekthe chillathe rahenge.. bhale hii aap roz roz ke iss cheekne chillane se na thakhe par aapki baatein sun sunke tho mere kaan pakh hii gaye hai...
cg ko sujal kii baatein sunkar ghussa aa jaatha hai aur woh kehtha hai kii :- sujal.... lagtha hai tum apne pita ka lihaaz karna bhool gaye ho....
sujal:-oh....tho aapko yaad hai kii aap mere pita hai... is baat ko tho world ka 8th wonder bana dena chahiye.... mujhe tho laga tha kii Mr.Chetan Garewal ko apne kaam , business ke alawa aur kuch yaad nahii rehtha....... {he taunts sarcastically}
cg:-{shouts} sujaallllllllllllll.........
ab before jhagda kuch aage bade piyush beech mein boltha hai:- yaar sujal hum logo ko conferance jaldi khatam karna hoga kyunke iske baad humari goenka's ke saath meeting hai.....
is baat par sab sehmathi bharthe hai.. then all of them continue with the meeting... meeting mein bhi sujal aur cg ke beech cold-war chalthi hii rehthi hai... kyunke woh ek doosre ke ideas se bilkul bhii alag sochthe hai..

yeh tho hui office kii baat ab zara dekhthe hai kii kashish ka kya haal hai... kashish apne interview hone ke baad ghar pohanchthi hai.. ghar par uski behene hothi hai kyunke unke exams aa rahein hai tho classes nahii ho rahe hai unke tho they are back early.......... kashish ke aathe hii mehak poochthi hai:- dii aagayi aap... itni dhair kahaan laga di.. aap tho us sujal garewal se milne gayi thi na unko thanku kehne aur unse yeh kehne ki aap unke paise louta degi.... tho kya kaha unhone....
kashish hides her happiness and decides kii woh apni behno ke saath zara mazaak karegi , so she keeps a dara huwa expression and says kii:- mehak woh unhone kaha kii.... kashish yeh kehkar chup ho jaathi hai , yeh baat dekhkar kashish kii behne ghabra si jaathi hai aur sab kashish ke pass aathi hai....
charu:- kya kaha uhone dii....
mouli:- kya unhione aapko paise loutane ke liye mohalat dene se inkaar kar diya.....
kanan:- batayiye na dii.....
mehak:- dii..kya hua hai..batayiye na humein... aapki yeh khamoshi humko darra rahi hai...
kashish ab bhi kuch nahii kehthi.. woh apne behno ke pass ke aage chalne lagthi hai phir woh kehthi hai:- main sujal garewal se mili thi thi.. aur unhone mujhe....mujhe......
mouli:- aapko kya dii.....
kashish:- unhone mujhko job offer kii hai......{she says very excitedly}
all the sisters together shout:- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...............
kashish:- haan sujal garewal ne mujhe apni personal secretary hone ka offer diya... aur maine accept bhi kar liya...
charu:- wao dii...yeh tho bohat achchi baat hai...
kanan:- haan dii... lekin aap humko itna darra kyun rahi thi....
kashish:- woh main tho bas dekhna chahthi thi kii kya tum log darr the ho yaa nahii....
mehak:- dii hum tho sachchi mein darr gaye...
in paanch beheno kii masti-mazaak bas chalthi hii rehthi hai.... aur unke beech kii baatein bhi kabhi khatam hothi hii nahii...

cut to sujal:-
sujal ke office mein ab bhi meeting chal rahii hothi hai.... sujal , piyush,lalit aur cg conferance hall se bahar aathe hai...
tab sujal ke saame ek young college going ladka aake khada hotha hai........
sujal:- hey kido... tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho..kuch kaam tha kya...
rishi:- hi Big-B... main tho bas aapse milne aaya hoon....
sujal:- sachchi rishi ?? tujhe koi kaam nahi tha mujhse...
rishi:- nahii main tho yahaan se guzaar raha tha socha aapse miltha chaloon...
sujal:- achcha chal mere cabin mein chalke baat karthe hai....
rishi:- nahii Big-B.. abhi tho mujhe dosto ke saath bahar jaana hai..woh mera bahar wait kar rahe hai....
sujal:- rishi sach sach bata tu yahaan kiss wajah se aaya hai...
rishi fumbles to say jab piyush beech mein kehtha hai...
piyush:- bata de rishi..sujal na tho tujhe dantega aur na hii tujhe kha jayega... ab bata bhi de...
rishi smiles and says kii:- Big-B mujhe thode paiso kii zaroorat hai...
sujal:- kido tu manager ke pass chala jaa woh tujhe paise de denge....
rishi:- thanks Big-B you are the best.... {he hugs sujal} bye everybody....
ab rishi wahaan se chala jaatha hai.....
tab cg kehtha hai:- sujal yeh rishi tumhari wajah se hi bighad tha jaa raha hai... jab dekho tab woh paise barbaad karne mein hii tula hua hotha hai...
sujal gets irritated and says:- woh mera bhai hai... aur main nahii chahtha kii joh takleef maine zindagi mein dekhi hai woh rishi bhi dekhe... aur rahii baat paiso kii tho main ek baat clear kar doon rishi ke liye joh bhi paisa jaatha hai woh mere account se hothe hai..company yaa aapke account se nahi.. tho aapko un paiso kii fikar karne kii koi zaroorat nahii hai... {ab sujal turns to piyush and says} chalein piyush..humein dhair ho rahi hai....
piyush :- chalo...
sujal bas wahaan se chala jaatha hai with loads of attitude....

dekhthe hii dekhthe raat ka waqt hotha hai.. sujal office se ghar lout raha hotha hai... tabhi barish ghirna shuru ho jaatha hai... sujal just feels the rain water on his hand aur usko kashish kii yaad aa jaathi hai... sujal kashish ke khayalo mein kho jaatha hai...the way kashish was playing in the rain... kashish kii smile.... sab kuch sujal ko deewana bana rahi hothi hai.. woh khud ko kashish ke khayalo mein bhasaye rakhkhe hue apne ghar pohanch jaatha hai... doosri taraf kashish apne ghar mein khidki ke pass khadi hothi hai... aur woh sujal ke baare mein soch rahii hothi hai.... jab sujal ne usse kaha kii agli baar aap baarish mein bheegay tho soch lijiyega, ke kahin aapko phirse thaiz bikhaar na hojaye.. sujal kii yeh baatein kashish ke kaano mein goonj si rahi hothi hai... kashish dekhthi hai kii uske kamre mein abhi bhi sujal ka coat pada hua hai.. she just goes and takes the coat in her hand , kashish feels the coat.. aur kashish ke chehre par muskurahat aa jaathi hai.... yeh baat tho kashish bhi nahii jaanthi kii joh woh kar rahii thi kyun kar rahi thi.... both sujal , kashish ek doosre ke baare mein hii sochthe hue rehthe hai.... kashish apne bed pe baite sujal ke baare mein soch rahii hothi hai.. jabki sujal apne kamre ke khidki ke pass rukhkar keeps thinking of kashish....

Song In The Background:-

"jo kabhi na tha dil mein......{kashish closes her eyes and she sees glimpse os sujal smiling}
kaisa ehsaas naya hai......{sujal is thinking and questioning himself about kashish}
patthar sa mera dil yeh......
aaj kyun pighalraha hai......{sujal imagines kashish playing in the rain}
baat kya aisa tujh mein.......{kashish bed par utth kar bait jaathi hai kyunke sujal ka chehra uska peecha nahii chod raha hai}
jo mujhe khichraha hai.....{sujal slowly whispers kashish ka naam}
kaisa hai tera jaadu.....
mujhpe jo chalgaya hai....{he has a dreamy look on his face}
kya hua mujhko bhala......
iski kya koi dawa.......
koi mujhko bataye....." both sujal , kashish ek doosre ko dil mein basaye , sone chale jaathe hai....

agle din kii shuruwaat hothi hai.... yahaan sujal office pohanch jaatha hai... aur piyush uske saath cabin mein hotha hai...
sujal:- piyush kya baat hai aaj tu office itni jaldi aagaya.. aisa chamatkaar kaise ho gaya....
piyush:- haan... woh isliye na kyunke mujhko bhabhi se joh milna tha...
sujal:- bhabhi kaun bhabhi.. kisski bhabhi....
piyush:- are janaab meri bhabhi...i mean meri hone wali biwi... aur aapki hone wali biwi.... kya naam tha uska haan attraction....
sujal:- (smiles and says)oye hone wali babhi ke ho chuke devar uska naam attraction nahii kashish hai.... samjhe...
piyush:- haan haan.. wahii.. kashish.... sujal waise tu mujhe bata na kii kaisi hai woh....
sujal:- woh kaun..{confused}
piyush:- are wohii meri hone wali bhabhiejii....
sujal just leans back on his chair and says :- kashishhh.......
isse pehle kii sujal kuch aage keh paatha... kashish kamre mein aathi hai aur kehthi hai:- may i come in sir....
sujal foran seedha bait jaatha hai and says :- are kashish..aao na....
kashish walks in and says :- good morning sir...
sujal:- good morning... kashish inse milo yeh hai piyush rahega... humare business partner.. aur mera sabse achcha dost.. tum lalit rahega ko tho jaanthi hii hogi na yeh unka beta hai...
kashish just passes a smile and says:- hii sir...
piyush[acting friendly says]:- hii kashish... mera naam piyush hai tum mujhe piyush bula sakthi ho... yeh sir bohat formal lagtha hai.. kyun sujal.....
sujal:- hmm...
piyush continues:- waise main tho kehtha hoon kashish tum mujhe aur sujal ko naam se hii bulaya karo... achcha rahega...
kashish:- lekin sir..main kaise....
piyush:- yeh kya phir sir... aur is main kaise ka kya matlab simple mooh se kashish...
ab sujal intervents and says:- kashish piyush theek keh raha hai.... tum humko humare naam se bula sakthi ho...
kashish:- ok... {then she stops for a second and says} sujal.... sujal kashish ke mooh se apna naam sunthe hii looks up at her and their eyes lock..
piyush:- achcha ab tum log kaam karo main tho chala apne cabin mein... bye kashish...
kashish smiles and says:- bye piyush....
sujal , kashish kaam pe lag jaathe hai.... kashish has her back to the door... piyush reaches the door shows sujal thumbs-up , aur smile karke wahaan se chala jaatha hai...and sujal , kashish continue working...

well guys part 5 of kth remake ends here..hope you all liked it.... please tell me if u did not like it... i'll be waiting for your comments.... and amby yaar dekh as me promised me posting the part....

take care..
byeeeeeeeeeeeeee

love
surya.... 😳
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
summi yaar and ana dearest the parts you posted were completely awesome.. me liked it very very much.... simply too good... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Suri diii
thats rocking dii 👏
great work 😳

CG and Sujal larai...........kamal thi 😆 arrogant CG

Piyush and Sujal friendship is cooollllllllll going 😆

luv all dialogues and the song sequence, thinking of them..........was just wow 😛

great part

luv ya

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ana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

Suri diii
thats rocking dii 👏
great work 😳

CG and Sujal larai...........kamal thi 😆 arrogant CG

Piyush and Sujal friendship is cooollllllllll going 😆

luv all dialogues and the song sequence, thinking of them..........was just wow 😛

great part

luv ya

lolz
ana



ana yaar.. no thanku... me glad kii tumhe yeh part achcha laga... i thought i cannot to justice to the part..kyunke tune aur summi ne bohat hii achche tarike se likha tha.... but me too khush kii you liked it.... love ya...🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow jaakkaass yaar ....koool partt...

and i loved the friendship btw sujal & piyush....

eekss yeh rishi bhi na jab dekho paison ke liye aajata hai....

oyee jee producer bahut kuch huwa...lolzz...after watching all scenes and dialouges i must say it was an amazing part...

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