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Posted: 20 years ago
#31
hey sanjay cool news tht mehraal& natz are helping u... u r ryte mehraal is good at writing.. and natz i am zillion % sure tht natz will also cum up with amazing stuff... i personally thnk natz is very gud at writing(no offense 2 any1)

post ur nxt part soon S-M-N

i am sorry sanjay i coldnt help u wid the pre-shaadi stuff... i aam hopeless when it cumes 2 shaadi eatc
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Posted: 20 years ago
#32

Okay so I'm back... with Natz & Mehraal helping me... this sure will turn into one hulluva story!!!!

I'm posting 2 parts together to make up for my absence

PARTS 10 & 11:


Kashish is escorted downstairs… she is looking dazzling… even Sujal can't help noticing… us ki khoosbsoorti aur nazakat… us ka bholapan aur masoomiat Sujal key dil ki gehraiyon ko cho leti hai… but then… his thoughts are shifted towards Monica… 'voh is dress main kitni khoobsoorat lagti… Kashish sey bhi ziada…' but then thinks… 'who am I kidding? Jab main khud jaanta hoon ki voh aisey dresses nahiin pasand karti thi… haan lekin pehanti zaroor… meri khushi key leay hi sahi… par pehanti zaroor' Monica's face comes in front of his eyes… by the time he jolted back to reality… Kashish is standing right in front of him.

Neha: {gives the ring to Sujal} Kashish ko ring pehnao…

Sujal ring ley kar Kashish ko pehnane wala hota hai, when a girl enters… she shouts: 'RUK JAO'

Sab mur kar us larki taraf dekhte hain jo un key oor barah rahi hoti hai… Kashish is angry she knows what this is all about and she knows what to do… Anjali, Niki, Sam, Varun are tensed… Chetan and Paddy are smiling… everyone else is wondering what's happening…

Girl: ye sagai nahii hosakti…

Akash: kon ho tum? Aur sagai kyu nahiin hosakti?

Girl: main kon hoon aap Sujal se poochen… Sujal batao na… batao main kon hoon… batao hamara rishta…

Sujal: I'm sorry… main ney aap ko pehchana nahii…

Girl: {in tears}… nahii pehchaana? Ab tum ye bhi kaho gay ki mera honey wala bachaa tumhara nahii hai…

Akash: WHAT??? {everybody is shocked} kia kaha aap ney?

Girl: ji sahih suna… I'm pregnant… aur bacha Sujal ka hai… ye mujhe dhooka de kar aapki beti sey shaadi kar raha paisey ki leay…

Akash: oh my God…

The Malhotra family is shocked…

Pratab: ye ham kia sun rahey hain Sujal?

Sujal: main is larki ko nahii jaanta… main khud issey pehli baar dekh raha hoon…

Girl: jhoot… JHOOT… JHOOT… JHOOT…

Ajay: jo bhi ho… ab ye aap ka problem hai… we have nothing to do with you isleay please… {he points towards the door}

Pratab: ye sab kia hai Sujal? {he is shouting}

Kashish: agar aap log bura naa manen to main batati hoon ki yahan kia chal raha hai… {she is furious at everyone because nobody is on Sujal's side}

Kashish apney cell phone se call karti hai… :'ji… aap andar aa sakte hain… ji voh yahan hai'

The police enters… everyone is shocked… Kashish to inspector: yehi voh larki hai

Inspector: you are under arrest…

Akash: koi bataey ga ki yahan kiya chal raha hai?

Kashish: main batati hoon papa… yeh larki aik professional con girl hai… logon sey paisey ley aisi harkaten karti hai… mujhe kaafi din sey pareshaan kar rahi thi… main ney police ko contact kiya… to unhoo ney kaha ki ussey range haaton pakarna zaroori hai… Sujal sach bol rahey hain… voh is larki ko nahii jaantey voh nirdosh hain…

Sab ko ehsaas hota hai ki unhoon ney Sujal par shak kiya… sab maafi maangtey hai… then… the ring ceremony…

Ring ceremony key baad jab sab dinner kar rahey hotey hain to Sujal corners Kashish.

Sujal: thanks…

Kashish: is main thanks ki koi baat nahii aap par bharoosa karna ab mera dharam hai… (there is love in her eyes)

Sujal: phir bhi thanks… Kashish… tum ney mujh par itna bara ehsaan kia aur main badley main… dekho ab bhi waqt hai… back out karlo…

Kashish: never… haan lekin aap sey badley main aik cheez mujhe chahye…

Sujal: kiya? (there is suspision in his eyes)

Kashish: aap ka bharosa aur dosti… can we be friends? (apna haath agey barhati hai)

Sujal: (without hesitation) you got it! (shakes her hand)

Kashish is on top of the world… that night… when she dreams… she dreams of Sujal… & only Sujal… and smiles in her sleep…

Sujal on the other hand although really is thankful to Kashish for what he did cannot get Monica out of his mind… that night someone shouts in his dreams: 'CHEATER… CHEATER… CHEATER!!!!' He wakes up… soaked in perspiration… takes a couple of anti- depressant pills and falls asleep… he is again not able to sleep well…

Soembody is not able to sleep at all… Chetan & Paddy…

Paddy: Kashish ko pata kaisey chala?

Chetan: sab meri galti hai mom… voh larki Mumbai main bohot famous con- girl hai… Kashish ko tang kar rahi hogi… I should have taken up someone with a low profile…

Paddy: damn it! You're useless…

Chetan: mom… fikar not!… ab bhi bohot kuch baqi hai… main ye shaadi nahiin honey doon ga… aur agar ho gayee… to chalne nahii doon ga… wait and watch!

The engagement was on Sunday. Today's Monday.

07:30 a.m SINGHANIA HOUSE

Neha enters Sujal's room… he's ready to leave for the office.

Neha: Sujal… tumse kuch baat karni hai….

Sujal: mom… mujhe office jana hai (he hasn't forgotten that nobody had supported him- nobody but Kashish)

Neha: beta… I hope kal jo hua… tum hamein maaf kardo gey… sab itna jaldi hua ki…

Sujal: it's okay mom… main office key liyey late ho raha hoon.

Neha: theek hai jao… lekin Kashish ko us key ghar sey pick karlena…

Sujal: ok.

Sujal reaches Malhotra House. It's 07:45 and he doesn't want to be late for the office, he calls Kashish…

Kashish: hello…

Sujal: main tumharey ghar key bahir hoon… jaldi bahir aao… office key liye late ho raha hai…

Kashish: aap ander nahiin aaen gey?

Sujal: nahiin 8 bajne main 15 minute baqi hain… hurry up…

He hangs up. Kashish comes and they set out for the office. Kashish tries to strike conversation but Sujal is quiet.

Kashish: aap sey aik baat poochon?

Sujal: haan…

Kashish: do you love me? (she says to herself: please haan kehdena… tell me you love me)

Sujal stops the car. Kashish is surprised at the sudden jolt. Thinks: 'uhoh…. Trouble… galat sawaal!'

Sujal: tum jab saari sachai jaanti ho to ye kaisa sawaal hai?

Kashish: bas yunhi… kia aap kabhi kisi aur se pyaar kar payenge? (there are tears in her eyes)

Sujal thinks: kal jo is ney meray liye kia… aur phir sachai janey ke baad bhi mujh se rishta jorney ko raazi hai… mujhe is ka dil nahiin torna chaheiye… sach main jaanta hoon… magar is ka dil rakhney ke liye…

Sujal: (lightens up… spark in his eyes, a little smile dancing on & off his lips) depends… ki voh insaan mujh se kitna pyaar karta hai…

Kashish: (loosens up coz of his positive attitude) aur kisi ka to nahiin pata… but mera to definite chance hai…

Sujal: let's put it like this Kashish… I have a certain past, and if you can live with it… I'm sure zindagi ka safar saath kaatney main bohot maza aaey ga…

Kashish: aap hamesha mujhe apney saath paen gey…

Sujal: feel like eating icecream… kahiin chalen?

Kashish: nothing better…

Ab baqi key din kiya hua… koi bhi jo Sujal ka background jaanta hai nahiin predict karsakta…

Kashish & Sujal never turned up at the office… pehley icecream khaney gaey… phir beach par… then, shopping… itni shopping karey ki mano pura Mall khareed liya… then Chinese for lunch… then a movie, then Kashish felt like doing some more shopping… shopping kartey kartey 9 baj gaey raat key… they decided to settle for some dinner, aur finally raat ko 10 bajey Sujal, Kashish ko, ghar chorney aaya…

Kashish: thanks a lot a Sujal… ye meri zindagi ka sab se ziada yaadgaar din hai…

She said his and hugged Sujal… he didn't know what to do at first he was blushing, but okay… he returned the hug.

Sujal: anytime… lekin aaj office miss hogaya… this was the last time…

Kashish: kabhi kabhi office miss karna achi baat hoti hai…

She kisses him on the cheek and runs away before Sujal had time to react. For the first time… Sujal was really attracted towards Kashish… he went home…

Sujal: mera bhi sab se ziada yaadgar din… (he's grinning from ear to ear)

Sujal closet ki taraf barhta hai… he's searching for something when he finds a framed photo of Monica & him… it was a four year old photo… Sujal apni easy chair par beth kar voh din yaad karta hai…

Sujal and Monica had holidays, with nothing to do.

Monica: Sujal… let's go to LA…

Sujal: LA? Wahan ja kar kya karen gey?

Monica: we'll have a ball yaar… come on! Be a sport… Hollywood… Beverly Hills… the glamour! I've never been there… please take me!

And they had used the Free Way to the coast and driven all the way to LA… Monica had been really fascinated by MGM studios and that photo had been taken in front of MGM's symbolic lion. They had a week of real fun, stayed at Beverly Hills Hotel, at Sujal's expence, and dined at the best places… where Monica saw a lot of singers, actors, producers… Hollywood Moguls… as they were called.

By the time Sujal came out of his fantasy… he had forgotten all about Kashish and her love… he thought: 'main itna stupid kaisey ho sakta hoon? Kis ko bewakoof bana raha hoon? I love Monica not Kashish… main us key barey main soch bhi nahiin sakta!'

That night he again dreamt of Monica, and her bloody body.

Kia Kashish ko us ka pyaar milay ga? Watch out!!!!

Hope that you guys like it... Next part will be written by Natz

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Posted: 20 years ago
#33
story is awesum... rocking .... plz make sujal love kashish.... monica was a stupid lady.. seriously sujjal usse pyar karta hai??????
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Posted: 20 years ago
#34
Wow, this story is really good!!! Plz continue...
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Posted: 20 years ago
#35
yaar plz sujal ko thodi si akal de do....and make him luv kashish and not tht stupid monica

and s-m-n.... ur stry rox
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Posted: 20 years ago
#36

heyyy gudddd yar 👏n now wen mehraalz gona help u den

it will becum more guddd😃

luvvv,dina!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#37
hey.......i still cudn't c da pix.......i really wanna c em......plz do sumthin.......cuz ur story seems gr8....thx alot...
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Posted: 20 years ago
#38

wounderfulll 👏

luvvv,dina!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#39
natz dear wher r u????????????????????????????
i cant c da pics 2 sanjay.. plz post it
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Posted: 20 years ago
#40
welcome to the forum harpy😊keep posting! and i like yur pic😊

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