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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part....keep it up.....i wonder wut kash's rxn will b.....do update soon....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx so much guys!!!! lol! babi rani!!!

recap - sujal asks kashish out for dinna and at da dinna sujal confesses his love.

conitinued -

sujal - I LOVE YOU DAMMIT!

kashish - crying*

kashish walks away.

nxt day at office

kashihs arrives.

receptionist - maam.

kashish - yes

recep - sir has now given you a cabin maam.

kashish - well you can tell him that i dont need it cause im resigning.

recep - r u sure u wanna resign maam

kashish - yes. give this to sujal. its my resignation letter. tell him i have got a new job now.

recep - yes maam.

when sujal goes down for a meeting.

recep - sir!

sujal - what now anjali?

recep - kashish maam has resigned.

sujal - kyaa??

recep - yes sir. here is her esignation letter.

sujal takes it. he tries to find where she's gone.

meanwhile...kashish-------

kashish goes onto the *famous bridge* lol and is crying and finkin bout da night where sujal said his stuff and about her good times wiv jai.

thoda sa pyaar hua hain(sad)

meanwhile sujal-------------

sujal is regretting bout dat night coz if he had neva sed it den she wudnt of resigned.

sujal goes home.

nxt day.

sujal doesn't go to da office and tries again to find kashish.

kashish has a new job at a restaurant. when it was her break. her friend let her stay in her room so she went to her friends room

kashish knocks on da door,

door opens and jai is there...wearing a robe!!

kashish - jai!!!!tum!!!

jai - kashish!!! tum yahan kya karahi ho.

girl - jai darling!!! who is it????

kashish - aur yeh larki!!!!!!

jai - darling! no shes...

kashish barges in and finds her friend in a nightie dress.

kashish - crying* jai!!! i cant believe u can do this 2 me!!! and sanjana!!! tumne mere saat itna bharra dokha...kyun!!!!

goes out the room. kashish walking on the road and its rainin like mad.

kashish - mere saat kyun!!! kyun!! mujhe jai phar itna bishwaas tha!! aur usne! i can't believe it!!! aur sujal...maine usse itna bhaara dokha diya!!!just for jai and he......

sum1 comes across kashish on his way home. the car stops. so does kashis when she sees it. the window opens.

person - kashish!!!tum kya karahi ho. its rainin like mad here aur tum.

kashish - sujal!! tum...cryin*

sujal - kashish...

sujal goes out of the car and turns her round by puttin his hands on her shoulders...like he does.

sujal - kashish. kya hua. tum aise???

kashish luks up at him

kashish - su..su.sujal main...

sujal - is this about what i said last night kashsih? im sorry kashish. mujhe aisa nahiin khenna chaiyye tha. im sorry. knowin tht you still love jai and always will, i still...sorry.

kashish - cryin more!*sujal!!!

they hug.

thoda sa pyaar hua hain...

nxt day.

sujals house when he comes down for breakfast.

mama - sujal. tumme kal raat kahan te?

sujal - main office peh tha mama.

mama - haan liken

sujal - mama actually there was traffic aur main..

mama - acha. naashta karro main chetan ko bhulaati hoon.

office ----

kashish joins again and gets a cabin nxt to sujals!!lol.

breaktime------

sujal goes to kashishs cabin.

kashish talking to a man,

man - so maam shall i publish it.

kashish - maine kahan na. mujhe nahiin patta. sujal ka cabin mein jaho.

man - liken usne kahan ke main tumare cabin mein jaho maam.

kashish - acha publish karro.

man goes out and kashish sees usjal at da door.

kashish - sujal!! tum.

sujal - kya hua?? main tumare cabin mein nahiin aahan sakta??

kashish - nahiin sujal aisi baath nahiin hain.

sujal - kya baat hain. aaj tum bhot muskaraari ho.

kashish - smilin*

kashish bout 2 walk out da room and sujal get hold of her hand and pulls her towards him.

sujal - kashish. jaane se phelle, ek bhaar khedo ke tum...

kashish - main kya...

sujal - ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho.

kashish walks out da room laffin.

2 b continued-------

lol hope you liked it!!! k and s gettin closer!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
so finally jai ka patta kat gaya.....awesome....keep it up....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
tooooooooo gooddddddddddddddd............i liked it very very very much..........keep up the good work... 👏
please continue soon..me waiting for the next part... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
it was really cool..........and nice.......continue writing 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx for replyin. i know dis is a quick reply but i didnt have anythin else 2 do. ok.
plzzz read dis one its another gud one!!!
recap - jai and kashish break up coz kashish found him in a robe with her best friend sanjana after sujal confesses his love for her and then kashish and sujal get 2gether.just had some romance in da office*

continued -

at sujals house ------

sujal his mum and his dad and lalit and rishi and vasu sittin in da front room when kashish knocks on da door.

sujal - kashish!! tum..

kashish - sujal woh...

mama - sujal yeh kaun hain??

sujal - mama yeh ek employee hain. aho kashish.

sujal introduces his family to her.

mama - aho kashish bethi betho. tum kuch peeyogi??

kashish - no thanx. actually sujal tum kissi papers ko sign karna hoga.

sujal - daydreamin about...*huh. haan kya??

kashish - papers peh tumare signature chahiye.

sujal - kis papaers phar.

kashish - yeh.

sujal signs the papers and kahsis is bout to walk out when..

sujal - kashish!! stay for a bit.

kashish - nahi maine kahi jaana hain

sujal - acha main tumme bhaar takh chordeta hoon.

outside*

kashish bout to go into da car when sujal holds her hand.

sujal - sach sach bataho. when i need to sign some papaers then yug mittal comes to give me them. toh aaj tumne??? kya tumne yug se poocha tha ke woh tumme jaane doh. mere ghar phar. so you can...

kashish drives away smilin*

mean while, as in the drama it happens. mama feels that sujals in love and is predicting that it is kashish because of the way he re acted wheh she came.

when sujal comes back in side.

no one is in da front room except mama.

sujal - mama sabh logh kahan gaiye???

mama - mujhe kya patta. apne apne kamre mein.

sujal - oh.

sujals about to go up to his room when...

mama - sujal rukho.

sujal - haan mama

mama - sujal yeh kashish...

sujal - kashish kya mama??

mama - sujal tum aur kashish.....are you reali good friends???

sujal - ermm......haan mama.

mama - tumne usse kabh mille te??

sujal - 3 weeks ago mama. unne r and g companies ko join kiya tha. mama. tum mujhe kaise sawaal poochri ho??

mama - sujal. tum usse pasand karte ho??

sujal - smilin* haan mama bhot.

mama - aur woh??

sujal - woh bhi mama. for the past 10 days...

mama - kya sujal mujhe bataho.

sujal - hum dhonno.........

mama - main samajgaiyi. kya kashsih ke maa baap jaante hain??

sujal - patta nahi mama.

mama hugs sujal.

nxt three weeks...

evry thing is the same. sujal and kashish r now realllliiii close and both of the parents kinow abhout how much they love each other....

at da office

kashish goes to sujals cabin.

kashish - sujal aaj ek meeting hain, mr kartik ke saat at 2 o clock.

sujal - acha. on ur way out tell anjali bout it ok.

kashish - haan sujal.

sujal - aur kahsish.

kashish - hmm.

sujal - i love you.

at da end of da day.

sujal - kashish ghar mat jaho.

kashish - kyun?

sujal - emm, ek business meeting hain pearl restaurant pher. toh...

kashish - acha main abhi wahan jhaati hoon.

sujal - nahi nahi mainj tumme lekhar jhaata hoon.

kashish - liken mera car.

sujal - yeh ill tell someone to sned your car to your house.

kashish - haan.

sujal puts his hand out.

sujal - tum hum challe.

kashish takes his hand and they go to da restaurant.

sujal covers kashishs eyes anmd takes her in.

kashish - sujal tum kya karahe ho.

sujal get his hand of and at da pearl restaurant there were balloons and disco smoke every where and they were the onli ones there.

kashish - shocked and smilin and laffin lol* sujal yeh sabh kya hain!!!???

sujal - happy birthday kashish.

kashish - sujal tumme yaad tha!!

sujal - haan kashish.

btw there is music in da background. they dance.
after they;re sittin on a sofa cuddled up when kashish and sujal get a phone call at da same time by there parents.

sujals fone call.

mama - sujalll!! tum kahan ho??

sujal - actually mama main traffic mein pasgaiya.

mama - liken maine newspeh check kiya tha aur saare roads toh clear hain.

sujal - emmm....

mama - tum kashish ke saat ho???

sujal - nahi!! mama kashish toh ghar gaiyi hain.

mama - liken maine sinha house phar phone kiya tha aur woh ghar nahiin hain.

sujal - errr...mama mujhe nahiin patta ke kashish kahan hain.

mama - sujal jhoot nahiin bholo. mujhe patta hain ke tum kashish ke saat ho kyunki aaj uski janam din hain.

sujal - silence*

mama - laffin*acha main fone rakhti hoon.

kashish's fone call was da same lol.

they disconnected da fone and continued cuddlin lol.

nxtday at kashishs house.

sujals mom and dad go to kashishs house.

papa - arreh veena!!

veena - we've come to ask the hand of kashish.

papa - oh haan. kashish!!!!

kashish - arreh mama!!! tum yahan kaise?

mama - goes upto her.

mama - kashish, main tumme ek bhot hi bharra sawaal poochri hoon.

kashish - haan kaho mama

mama - kya tum, sujal se shaadi karogi???

kashish - smiled* mama i need some time to think about it.

mama - haan kashish beti.

2 b continued----

so now has cum the stage where sujal is gonna marry kashish!!lol...read nxt time for da weddin!!!




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Posted: 19 years ago
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i like this stoyr.....mashallah things r soo perfect...lol
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Posted: 19 years ago
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coollllllllllllllllll..........very nice........ 👏
waiting eagerly for sujal ,kashish wedding.... 😉
please continue soon.. 😃
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!!!!!thanks sooo much for replying!!!!! continued. i know this is long but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz read it.......it has their suhaag raat innit...but donnt just read that...........plzzz.....4 mee.......thankyou sooooooooo much for replyin. i was so scared that no one would lol!!!


recap - kashish finds jai in a room with sanjana her best friend and then she goes wiv sujal and they're gettin reali close and there mum and dad know about it so sujals mum went to her house and asked,.....

mama - kya tum sujal se shaadi karogi??

kashish - mama i need some time.

mama - haan kashish.

kashish - smiles*

nxt 3 days veena get a fne call.

mama - hello.

kashish - mama.

mama - kashish beti!

kashish - mama maine sochliya hain ke main sujal se shaadi zaroor karoongi!!!!!

mama - sach! thankyou soo much kashish. main abhi sujal ko bataathi hoon.

kashish - nahi mama! main usse khud bathaana chaati hoon.

mama - haan kashish, waise woh ghar phar nahiin hain toh tum office peh check
karsakti ho.

kashish - haan mama.

kashish goes to look for sujal but can't find him so on da way to his
house she finds him on da famous bridge.

kashish gets out of the car.

kashish - sujal tum yahan kya karahe hpo?

sujal - kuch nahi kashish. main jai ke baat soch raha tha. haan. usne mujhe phone kiya tha aur usne kahan ke main tumme kaho ke woh tumme bhot chaata hain.woh tumme bhot pyaar karta hain. tum uske paas woppas jaho. kashish tum jai ke paas jaana chaati ho toh jaho. main tumme rokhoongi nahi kashish.

kashish - liken usne mujhe dokha diya tha sujal. usne mere sabh se achi dost
ke saat....

sujal - mujhe patta hain kashish. leave me out of this kashish. woh tumme
chaata hain aur main bhi. now its all in your hands. tum kis se pyaar karti ho kashish?

sujal drives away.

she walks in da rain thinkin of da good times she had wiv jai and she fones him.

girl - hi. at the moment jai is in the shower so iof you want to talk to him talk to me.

kashish - tum kaun??

girl - diya.

kashihs - Diya??

girl - yeh im his fianc.

kashish puts da fone down.

kashish drops to the ground

recap - kashish agrees for the marridge and when she goes to tell sujal sujal tells her that he got a fone call from jai and he said that jai loved her and then kashish called jai and his FIANCEE picked da fone up

nxt day.

sujal goes to office--------

at a meeting......

kashish comes in..

five minutes later

girl comes in and the have a big talk and then at da end.

sujal - kashish!

evry1 is gone at this point.

kashish - haan sujal.

sujal - kashish tumne jai ko phone kiya tha?

kashish - haan sujal.

sujal - tumne kya kaha?

kashish - kuch nahi?

sujal - kuch nahi??

kashish - woh busy tha.

sujal - busy????

kashihs - haan. uske fiancee ke saat.

kashish walks out da room..

sujal is kinda shocked and runs after her.

outside -

sujal - kashish!! rukkho.

kashish - kya sujal!!??

sujal - kashish....mujhse shaadi karogi???

2 b continued-----

recap - kashish tells sujal about jai's fiancee pikking up the fone so sujal asks her...

sujal - kashish....mujhse shaadi karogi???

kashish smiles and drives away

nxt day at office kashish doesn't show up.

sujal gets a fone call.

sujal - haan mama.

mama - sujal jaldi se ghar aha jaho.

sujal - kyun mama?

mama - kashish aur uske papa aiye hain. tumare haat mahange.

sujal - kya! liken...! ahca mama main abhi aatha hoon.

sujal dc's da fone and smiles to himself and goes home.

mama - sujal! tumme kitna dheer laghaiya. acha andhar aho aur kashish ke papa se mil loh.

proffeser sinha - sujal bheta. aho aho.

sujal bends down to his feet.

prof - khush raho. sujal tum toh jaanta ho ke main aur kashihs yahan kyun aiye hain. sujal...three days ago your mum and dad asked kashish....toh aaj MAIN tumme poochraha hoon. sujal...kya aap mere bethi se shaadi karroge???

sujal - haan papa. haan.

when the preist arrives at sujals house the next day---------

mama - pandit ji , yeh hain sujal aur kashish ki horoscopes. yeh dekho aur shaadi ke liye date deh doh.

pandit - haan ji.........................shaadi ke din honna chahiye.......doh din mein.

veena - shaadi doh din mein hain toh sujal aur kashish shopping ke liye aaj jaane hoge.

prof - of course. zaroor!!

veena - sujal tum abhi kashish ko lekhe jaho.

sujal - abhi!!!

veena - kashish jaho. sujal ke saat jaho.

at da shopping centre------------------

in the shop -------

they buy each others clothes and when sujal goes to meet kashish outside the shop she aint there.

sujal - kashish kahan hain???

he goes to the mens section.

sujal - tumne ek larki ko dekha hain, blue kapre phenne hain usne.??

shopkeeper - haan sir. five or six men took her away sir. maine police ko phone karne ke koshish kiya tha liken unne ne mujhe rokkha.

sujal - omg!!! where did they go???

s.k - that way sir.

sujal tried to find her....meanwhile....

kashish is tied up on a chair with tape on her mouth.

man5 - laffin*

man6 - hmmm....yeh ring...yeh watch...yeh kapre...sabh toh bhot hi expensive hogeh.

man 4 - laffin* bachari samaj nahi payi ke humne tumme kidnap kyun kiya. kyunki mr jai agarwal ne kah ke hum yeh karre. here he comes.

jai gets the tape of kashish's mouth.

kashish - jai!! tum!!

jai - haan! main. how can you get married to sujal huh??? main tumse itna pyaar karta hoon kashish aur phir bhi tum... main sanjana ke saat tha liken maine usse chordiya hin. sirf tumare liye.

kashish - mere liye!! you are engaged jai and still you are saying all this to me!!

jai - shocked*.......erm.......kya!

kashish - dont act as you dont know!!!! diya. usne mujhe kah ke tum usse engaged ho.
disgusting jai!!! i hate you. main tumme nafrat karti hoon!!!

jai - ill kill that sujal!

sujal comes in.

kashish - sujal!!!

jai looks behind him.

jai - tum!!

sujal fights jai and the men, and all the men run out.

jai - stop!!!! you will pay for this sujal! you will pay!!!

jai goes out and sujal unties kashish and then they hug.

kashish - crying* sujal!!!

when they come home ------------------------

mama - sujal ! . tumme kya hua! aur kashish!!!!

sujal tells mama evrything.

mama - hai baghwaan!!! tum teekh toh ho na kashish!

kashish - haan mama.

mama - haan. anyway. kashish, you stay here for the night. khanna table peh hain. kahalo aur sujal after eating, tum kashish ko tumare kamra deh doh aur tum guest room mein sohjaho.

sujal - haan mama.

mama goes upstairs and sujal and kashish eat and in sujals room- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

kashish tum yah peh sohjaho. main jahara hoon.
sujal kisses kashish on the head and hugs her and when he's going out the room kashish falls.

kashish - aah!!(LOL I COULDN'T THINK OF WOT SHE CUD SAY!)

sujal - kashish!!!!!

sujal picks her up and puts her on da bed and puts a bandage on her foot.

sujal - kashish!! tum bhi naa! tum apne khayaal bhi nahi rakhsakti!!

kashish - tum joh ho mere khayaal rakhne.

they stare.

thoda sa pyaar hua hain....
thoda hain bhaaki...

they hug.....
nxt morning kashish wakes up in sujals room, in sujals bed, with sujal....hint hint...lol.....

kashish - shocked*
kashish gets changed and leaves.

when sujal wakes he realises what happened after finding kashish's earrings on his bed,lol

he gets changed and goes downstairs----------

sujal goes into his car and can'tstop thinkin about kashish. he has a car accident.

one of the people - omg!! look evry1. he's had a accident!!

evry1 runs upto him and by a *coincedence*, kashish happened to be driving by...

kashish - sujal!!!!!

people put sujal in kashish's car and kashish takes him to da hospital.

doctor comes out the room -

doctor - miss kashish.

kashish - yes!

doctor - you can go and see him now.

the doctor walks away and kashish goes in to the room.

btw sujal is unconcious.

kashish sits down on da chair. she puts her head on him and cries.

sujal obviously wakes up.

sujal - kashish! tum....

kashish - sujal tum teekh ho na??

sujal - haan main teekh hoon. liken.........

kashish - cryin* tumme kuch hogaiya toh!!!!

sujal gets up.

kashish - main abhi mama ko phone karti hoon.

when kashish was bout to walk out da room and sujal gets her hand and pulls her towards him.....

thoda sa pyaar hua hain....

thoda hain bhaaki....

sujal kisses kashish's tears and they hug. mama comes in....

mama - sujal??

sujal - mama!!!

lol. kashish quickly gets off sujal.

mama - laffin* tum ek dhoosre se bhot pyaar karte ho na???

kashish smiiles.

sujal - mama....

anyways sujal gets discharged and remember......sujal and kashish's wedding is tomorrow!

at sujals------------

btw kashish has gone home......

cg - evry1 get to it!!! shaadi kal hain aur sabh!!!!!!!! come on. sanjana, tell rishi to wake up and veena ko kaho ke woh pandit ji ko phone karro aur usko remind karro ke shaadi kal hain.

sanjana - haan papa.

sujal comes downstairs after evrything is done and is reali suprised

sujal - mama!! yeh sabh!!!

mama - acha lagha??

sujal hugs his mum - bhot mama!!!

on the wedding day at kashish's house.

kanan - di im sooo happy for you di!!

kashish - thankyou kanan. patta nahi kyun liken mujhe ek feeling hain...khabraat - scaredness - ki.

kannan - di!!! its all in ur head. aho. lets get changed.

kashish - haan.

at da wedding..............

thnx guys....i kept you in suspense......

recap - kashish and sujal go shopping for their wedding and kashish gets kidnapped by jai and sujal beats jai up and sujal and kashish sleep together and now is the wedding.

ok i cant b bothered to do the wedding so i am just go0ing to do there suhaag raat!!!!!

kashish is on the bed and sujal comes in and sits infront. he takes he jewellry off and put kashish;s face up and kisses her.....on the lips......they hug.

thoda sa pyaar hua hain......

thoda hain bhaaki.....

thoda sa pyaar huaaa hain...

thoda hain bhaaki.....

after they get changed sujal is waiting for kashish to get changed and when she comes out----

he takes her handand bends down and kisss her ands then gets up kisses her neck. lol i dont know how to say it..........in da morning------

2 b contiued....i hope you liked it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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please continue soon..me will be waiting for you to continue.. 😛

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