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thnx for replying sun423....i have been w8ing for reply for ages!! thnx soo much!

recap - kashish and sujal have got married.

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kashish is sittin on da bed and sujal comes and sits infront of her then takes her jewllery off and kisses her and then they hug and come off the bed and sujal kisses kashish hands and then they kind of do a romantic hug and sujal kisses kashish on the lips and they sit on the bed staring at each other and they kiss each other on da lips and hug and fall on the bed.

in da morning..............

kashish wakes up and sits up in the bed. sujal does the same and puts her arm around her and thye cuddle up.

kashish - i love you sujal.

sujal get kashish's face and kisses her on the lips.

mama comes in.

mama - laffin* sorry. tum dhonno jaldi se neeche ahajaho.

sujal - haan mama.

they get changed and go downstairs.

after breakfast.

kashish - mama main sochrahi thi ke main office chordoon.

mama - kyun bethi?

kashish - mama im the bahu of this house now and being the bahu i need to take my responsabilities,

mama - haan yeh sabh toh teekh hain liken....acha kashish...do what you want to do.

kashish - haan mama.

sujal - kashish toh hum challe???

kashish - haan. mama main chalti hoon.

mama - haanji.

at da office -------------------------

breaktime....

kashish goes to sual cabin.

kashish - sujal yeh hain mera resignation letter.

sujal - kashish r u sure you want 2 leave??

kashish - haan sujal. abh tum yeh leh loh aur hum jhaate hain.

sujal takes the resignation letter and they leave for home.

at home---------------------------------

mama - arrey tum dhonna bhot hi jaldi agaiye!

kashish - haan mama. mama maine office resign kardiya hain. i hope ur ok with tht.

mama - its ok kashish. abh tum meri maddhat karna haan!!

kashish - smilin*haan mama.

mama - acha tum dhonno uphar jaho aur fresh hojaho. main khaana laghaati hoon.

sujal - haan mama.

they go upstairs and after freshenin up in their room........

sujal - kashish tum jaho main abhi aatha hoon.

kashish - kya hua sujal??

sujal - kuch nahi main bas office ka kaam check karna chaata hoon.

kashish - haan suj...

kashish faints.

sujal - kashish??!!!!

sujal catches her and puts her on their bed.

15 minutes l8er.

veena - doctor kashihs teekh toh hain na???

dr - haanji woh bilcul teekh hain. aur...

sujal - aur??

dr - congratulations. yeh maa ban ne wali hain.

sujal - kya???!!!!!!!!!!

mama - sujal! sunna!!!

cg - hai rabbha!! main ek daddha ban na walla hoon!!!

mama - haan chetan! aur main ek dhaddi!!

kashish is waking up and shes sayin.

kashish - suj...suj...sujalll.

she wakes up puttin her hand on her head.

kashish - sujal. kya hua??

sujal looks at evry1 givin them a signal to go out the room lol. they all go out and sujal closes the door.

kashish gets up.

kashish - sujal??? yeh sabh kya hain??

sujal tells her evrything.

kashish - sach!!!

she gives sujal a hug.

kashish - crying* sujal!! hum maa baap ban ne walle hain sujal!!!

sujal kisses her.

sujal - haan kashish.

they hug again.

thoda saa pyaar hua hain....
thoda hain bhaaki....

7 motnhs later they have the godhbari!!

godhbari--------------

in da morning sujal wakes up first and he has been doing for the past 7 months and makes kashish a breakfast in bed and juice lol.

sujal comes in with da tray lol.

kashish - sujal aaj meri godhbari hain aur...

sujal - aur kya kashish??

kashish - main chaati hoon ke hum dhonno aaj shopping ke liye jaiye, humare bache ke liye.

sujal - haan kashish yeh godhbhari ke baat hoga. tum naashta karro...main abhi tumara juice lekhar aatha hoon.

kashish - nahi sujal aaj main juice nahi peena chati. tum mujhe neeche leh jaho.

sujal helps kashish off the bed and they go downstairs.

mama - arrey kashish sambhaalke! aho aho bettoh.

they sit down and kashish cuddles up wiv sujal lol.

cg - yeh godhbari 3 hours mein hain! come on! lets get ready and decorate the house!!!

3 hours l8er the priest and guests arrive.

vasu - aho aho pandit ji.

when the ceremony finished and they were partying.....

kashish - jai!!!!!!!! sujal dekho!! jai yah phar....

sujal - kya!!!

vasu - arrey jai tum agaiye london se!!!

jai - haan aunty. so arent you going to call me in and introduce me to your daughter in law.

vasu - yes of course. come in. yeh hain kashish...aur sujal.

jai - thinkin to himself*kashish!!!! aur sujal ke saat!!! godhbari!!!!

vasu goes away.

jai - main soch bhi nahi sakta ke tum mere saat aisa karogi!!!

kashish - jai! tum yahan phar kyun aiye ho!!!

jai - dont you dare shout at me!!! tumari godhbari hain na...toh main tumari godh bari ko kaisa banaata hoon, tum bhas dekho.

sujal - jai!!!

jai - aur tum sujal....you will regret sujal garewal...you will regret for...

sujal - kisliye jai! kisliye!!! tum abhi aur issi waqt yah se nikaljaho varna..!

jai - varna kya! tum mujhe marroghe?? marroh!!! cummon!

jai stomps out.

vasu - arrey sujal...kashish...jai kahan gaiya??

sujal and kashish walk away.

after the godhbari they go shopping.....(this will snatch some scenes from kth for example sujal wanted their child to play with a dog but kashish wanted it to play wiv a teddy)


kashish - sujal yeh toy shop.

sujal - haan haan challe.

thye go into da toy shop.

kashish - sujal dekho!!! bhot hi cute teddy bear hain na!!! challo hum yeh lethe hain humare bache ke liye,

sujal - nahi kashish humara abcha ek dog se khelegha!! teddy bear nahi! humara bacha sabse alag hoga.

kashish - nahi sujal!! please...mere liye.

sujal - acha leh loh.

they do all their shopping-----

2 motnhs l8er -------

kashish and sujal in their room at night.

kashish lying down in the bed. sujal comes out the bathroom.

kashish - sujal...

sujal - haan kashish.

kashish - sujal mujhe bhot dhar laghra hain. yeh bacha...

sujal gets the towell of his neck and lies on the bed next to her and they cuddle up.

sujal - dharro mat. sabh teekh hoga.

kashish - SUJAL!!!!

2 hours l8er.

dr - congratulations, usse ladka hua hain.

sujal - kya!!! sach!!

mama - sujal sunna!!!!

dr - you can go n meet her now but one at a time plzz.

sujal - haan.

sujal goes in and sits down on the chair nnext to da bed.

kashihs wakes up. she gets up.

sujal - sambhaalke sambhaalke!

kashish - sujal...kya hua??

sujal - humme ladka hua hain kashish,

kashish - sach!!!

they hug.

kashish - woh kahan hain???!!!

sujal - woh baby room mein hain.

kashish - sujal usse lekhe aho please. mujhe usse dekhna hain.

sujal - haan.

sujal gets the baby and gives him to kashish after givin it a cuddle and a kiss lol.

kashish - kitna pyaara bacha hain na??!!

sujal - haan kashish.

kashish - bilcul tumara jaisa hain, liken uske aankhein mana ki hain.laffin*

sujal kisses her and the baby.

she gets discharged...
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fanx for replying.....

recap - ok da baby is born and kashish has just been discharged.

kashish is sitting on da bed wiv da baby in her hands and sujal comes in with food.

sujal - kashish tum khanna khalo.

kashish - sujal mujhe bhook nahin hain...

sujal - kashish...

sujal comes and sits down on da bed and put da baby in da cot and feeds kashish.

in da morning...

kashish - sujal aaj office amt jaho.

sujal - why not?

kashish - sujal mian chaati hoon ke hum dhonno shopping ke liye jaiye....sameer ke liye..

sujal - liken......acha main nahi jahonga. tum neeche jaho aur naashta karro. main sameer ko lekhar aatha hoon.

shopping.....

sameer is crying....

sujal - kashish tum sameer ko mujhe deh doh....

kashish gives sujal sameer.

the baby shuts up and he put him in his pram.....

kashish and sujal in a toy shop....

kashish - awww!!! dekho na sujal......hum yeh teddy bear lehnge sameer ke liye....

sujal - excuse me.

shopkeeper - haan sir,

sujal - tum es teddy bear ko pack karlo please.

sk - haan sir....yeh hain 200 rupees.

sujal gives him the money and turns to the pram to take it from the shop when....

sujal - kashish!!!

kashish - kyas sujal!!

sujal - sameer!!!! sammer kahan chalagaiya!!!!

kashish - sujal!!! smaeer!!

kashish is crying and sujal calls the police.

kashish - crying* sujal.....sameer.....

sujal - kashish....kuch nahi hoga....tum fikhar math karro.

kashish - sujal...woh jai!!! jai ne hi sameer ko kidnap kiya hain!

sujal - KYA! liken.....

kashish - sujal mujhe phoora yakeen hain ke jai ne sameer ko....sujal...complaint likkho!!

sujal gets a fone call.

sujal - hello?

person - fikhar mat karro....sameer bilcul teekh hain..... liken...

sujal - jai tum!!

jai - tumne joh mere saath kiya na,

sujal - if you do anything to sameer!!!

jai - fikhar mat karro sujal. main sameer ko kuch nahi karoonga....liken.....

sujal - kitna pessa chahiye tumko!!??

jai - money!!! nahi!! mujhe kashish chahiya sujal.....kashish. aur haan! police ko naa bataho....varna tumara sameer.....gaiya!

fone disconnects.

kashish - main kahan na!! jai ne hi sameer ko kidnap kiya hain.....complaint likkho sujal....please!!!

sujal - nahi kashish. kashish jai ne..

sujal tells kashish wht jai said.

kashish - kya!......liken......(crying)

sujal kisses kashish and they go home and tell the family wht happened....

mama - jai!!! liken jai toh...

vasu - jai!!! yeh kya batamizi hain....jai toh mere sabh se achi dost ka beta hain!!! jai aisa kabhi nahi karsakta!

sujal - aunti jai ne aisa kiya hain!!! aur......

lalit - aur kya sujal bethe!!

sujal - usne kah ke.....

sujal tells them what he wants in exchange....

CG - KYA!!!

veena - sujal police ko abhi bataho!!!

sujal - nahi mama...

kashish - crying*

mama - hum kuch karlenge.....sujal tum kashish ko kamre mien lehjaho......

sujal takes kashish to their room.....

nxt mornin....

sujal gets fone call from jai and.....

jai - hmmm...very good...tumne police ko toh phone nahi kiya liken kashish ko mujhe nahii diya.....mujhe kashish ka intezaar hain sujal....

sujal - intezaar karte raho jai....tum kashish ko kabhi nahi paho ge....

jai - tutututututututututtut....main kashish ko pahoonga sujal....tum dekhte raho!

fone disconnects.

kashish - behind sujal* jai ka fone tha?

sujal turns around and hugs her

sujal - haan kashish....hum kya karre kashish???

kashish goes out da room. sujal fones jia...

jai - kya!

sujal - main tumme milna chaata hoon.

jai - kyun?

sujal - main tumme kashish dhoonga aur tum mujhe sameer doh ge...

jai - kya! toh tum maangaiye ke tum aur kashish...34...rizvi road....shimla...

sujal - teekh hain. main aur kashish tumme 7 o clock millenge....

kashish - sujal! tum...

sujal - kashish kuch nahi hoga....

7 o clock at rizvi road.......

jai - sujal!!! kashish!!

sujal looks at sameer and he is in jais hands....

sujal walks forward and gets sameer...

jai - yeh loh sujal.....kashish....tu mere saath aho....

sujal turns around...takes kashish's hand and runs....

sujal - kashish!!!

jai - NAHIIN!!! UNNE ROKHo!!

goons chase sujal onto the road....goons beat sujal and sameer up!!

sujal - kashish!!! tum jaho.....please...tum... KASHISH!!!!!

4 HOURS LATER....

doctor - maam, your husbands condition is very serious.... and you child....

kashish - kya hua sameer ko!!

doctor - kuch nahin maam.....liken hum dhonna ko nahi bacha sakta....you will have to chose maam....your husband...or your child???

kashish falls down to the ground crying....

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thnx for replyin guys,

recap - kashish has her baby and she goes shppoing wiv sujal agen and jai kidnaps their baby and thn sujal goes to see jai and then jai gives the baby bck and sujal was supposed to give kashish to him but he didnt and they ran and then jais men beated up sujal and the baby and a doctor said thht kashish had to chose between sujal and the baby....

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kashish is cryin and then doctor comea dn says.

doctor - time is running out maam. you will have ot chose.

kashish - mujhe form dehjiye..

doctor givs da form..

PLEASE TICK >
HUSBAND______
SON______

kashish's tear falls on husband and she ticks it.

operation thetre light goes off...

doctor - operatios successful rahan....liken tumara bacha nahi raha.

kashish - crying* kya main sujal se mil sakti hoon??

doctor - haan maam.

kashish goes in and sits on the chair nxt to da bed...she holds sujals hand and rests her head on it....

sujal wakes up..

sujal - kashish??

kashish - sujal....!

sujal gets up and kashish hugs him....

sujal - kashihs....sameer??

kashish tells him wht happened...

sujal - kya!! lien....tumne....tumne mere jaan kyun nahi liya!!....

kashish put her finger on sujals lip...

kashish - nahi sujal....

sujal gets her finger off and kisses her head...

sujal - tumne mama ko nahi bathaiya na??

kashish - nahi sujal......mujhme himmat nahi hain...

sujal - mama ko math bataho kashish.....

kashish - haaan sujal....

kashish's phone call rings....

MAMA

sujal - chorro kashish....

kashish - liken....haan..

kashish rests her head on sujal,

kashish - i love you sujal..

nxt day sujal gets discharged.....

at home.....

mama - sujal!!!

she runs up to him..

mama - kya hua sujal!!

sujal - nothing mama....just an accident....

mama - liken tum saare raat kahan te!!! aur tum bhi kashish!

kashish runs upto her room...

sujal tells the family evrything and goes to kashish...

kashish is crying...

sujal - kashihs....

kashish - sujal.....!!! sujal....im sorry sujal, maine sameer ko maardalla hain sujal....i have killed my own son sujal.....

sujal kisses her tears....

sujal - nahi kashish.....nahi..

theu hug.....

sujal - kashish, go and rest, main tumare liya khanna lekhar aatha hoon.

after 5 mins sujal comes in with a plate of food....

sujal - khanna kahloh kashish....

kashish - sujal mujhe bhook nahi hain....

sujal - kashish...

kashish - plzz sujal....

sujal goes and sits on the bed and feeds her.....

he puts the tray on the table....

20 mins l8er...

door - KNOCK KNOCK....

sujal and kashish are cuddled up on the bed....

sujal - kaun??

mama - sujal, tumare liya phone call aiya hain, patta nahi kaun hain....

sujal - acha mama. ill get the phone from here....

sujal gets out of the bed and picks the fone up....

sujal - hello?

person - toh tum jeeth hi gaiye ho!

sujal - jai!!

kashish - sujal.....jai??

jai - haan jai....!

sujal - kya....

jai - kuch nahi. mujhe kuch khennna hain..

sujal - bholo....

jai - kashish se kaho ke maine usse pyaar hi nahi kiya. i used her.....

sujal - kya!!!

jai - haan. abh main kissi aur ke saat hoon, aur haan, main usse bhi use karaha hoon. this is my job!!

sujal disconnects then fone and tells kashish wht jai said.....

kashish - i dont care now sujal.....abh main tumse pyaar karti hoon....jai se nahi....

sujal hugs her.....

kashish sees a cut on sujals arm and its bandaged...

kashish - sujal main tumare bandage ko change karti hoon.

sujal - nahi kashish...teekh hain....

kashish gets the aid box and changes sujals bandage....

thoda sa pyar hua hain......thoda hain bhaaaki,



nxt mornin...............

at brekfast table....no1 talks....

all sitting down and suj and kash r in their room...

kashish - sujal....jaldi se thayaar ho jaho,

sujal - kashish, aaj main office nahi jahonga....

kashish - sujal....tum office kyun nahi jaho ge??

sujal - tumme patta hain kashish....

kashish - sujal...acha tum naashta ke liye jaldi se neeche ahajaho....

kashish walks away but sujal gets hold of her hand.......

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