~A Moment Like This~(AM one-shot) - Page 3

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

😍 😍 😍 😍 Ahhhhhhhhhh, Sid.

Adi is so so so....dreamy? 😳 You are a brilliant writer, and I'd bug you to add to this, even if it's a one-shot, but it's so wonderfully encompassed, that the end does seem like a perfect end 😍 The way you closed it was just beautiful, more better than any other alternative I could think of, and the song is so tugging. Absoloutely loved it, Sid! 😍

Thnx so much Fatty! 😳 *sigh* Yes he is so dreamy 😍.lol those lines you highlighted are my fav lines too............Actually this was meant to be a one-shot only and their track is so unpredictable in the show right now that I wanted to end it in such a way that even though he's still married to G,both AM know that in the end ,somehow,they will be together as they are meant to be.😳

Thnx again.Glad you liked it.

amazing sidra! kash, kash ki asa hi hota!!!! but nope, writters had to go and screw them up! god how i wish they would bring them back together! omg your one shot ff was beautiful! it has given me hope. im already a fan of you writting, so all im going to say is thanks for this, and hope you continue "time" soon!

Originally posted by: psawyer

Hey Sid - glad you got this up...came online this morning and skimmed through it, sounds really good...Promise I will save it and read it properly within the next few days; moving back to uni is so annoying Will comment in full later!

Thnx Vas.😳

Yeah moving back and all is a real pain.

Originally posted by: tsamhita

mind-blowing sid!!! 👏 👏 bows to you 👏 👏 i was acctually not feeling well when i was surfing IF...i read your one shot and i acctually feel fine now 😆 😳 but its sooo good 😳 😳 ...now if only the producers were ot read this! 😆

Thnx alot Sam!😳 Glad it made you feel better.

And plz plz continue Hate to Love soon.😆

@Sid:Sorry yaar..but I just love raita..especially,when it's connected to AM😉😆...and Sid,Sam wont continue her FF,until u dont update ur FF 😡 😆...U know,the last tym I read ur FF,was 2 months bak😡...

Originally posted by: Robin_M

amazing sidra! kash, kash ki asa hi hota!!!! but nope, writters had to go and screw them up! god how i wish they would bring them back together! omg your one shot ff was beautiful! it has given me hope. im already a fan of you writting, so all im going to say is thanks for this, and hope you continue "time" soon!

Thnx a lot Robin!😳

Yes I will try and continue Time soon.Just caught up with projects these days.

Originally posted by: sidsk

She had only taken 3 tiny steps when someone suddenly stepped in front of her and a subtle,masculine scent washed over her.
She stilled..........she did not need to look up to see who it was.She already knew.
She looked up hesitantly taking in his black attire.She noticed that the colour of the shirt he was wearing inside was quite similar to hers.She wondered absently how they ended up wearing the same colours.
Her eyes met his..........and she froze.

His eyes glittered with something so intense that she suddenly felt breathless.He was the other reason that she didnt want to attend this party.....because she did not have any more strength to push him away from her.

Faster than lightening,long fingers encircled her wrist in a firm grip just as the soft strains of music filled the air.

No,he was not going to let her escape him today.

He circled her slowly and stopped in front of her.Taking her left hand,he rested it on his shoulder.Entwining her right hand with his left,he rested his other hand on her waist and pulled her close, slowly starting to move to the music.

They moved in sync with each other as if they had practicing this dance since ages.

She could have lived in his moment forever, just swaying with him,unaware of anything else but them.She felt at peace for what seemed to be the first time in ages.

Gazing into her eyes,he finally saw what he had wanted to see for a long time............the same thirst and longing that he knew was reflected in his eyes.

He pulled her even closer,his fingers on her back sending shivers up her spine.

He sighed softly into her hair and settled his arms more firmly around her as they swayed to the music.

Her breath hitched as she felt his warm breath on her neck.How could this be wrong when it felt so right?

He turned her around so that their faces were almost touching each other.

His hands came up and framed her face.............the intensity in his eyes shook her to her very core.Unknowingly her hands tightened on his.

He took her hand and held it to his chest,so she could feel how fast his heart was racing.

She trembled with the significance of the moment.He rested his forehead against hers and they swayed with their eyes closed as the last few lyrics rang out.

The huge applause that followed the end of the song and the DJ's loud voice burst their

He strode into the garden in front of him hoping a walk would calm him down.
After walking around restlessly for a few minutes,he realised that it no use.He was still seething and very much tempted to go back into the party and finish her off.
He turned a corner.............and stopped at the vision in front of him.
She was sitting in front of a fountain.........trailing her fingers in the water and watching the ripples it created..................Just like fate had created ripples in their life.
The light reflecting on the water cast a soft glow on her face.The little white lights around the garden and the soft moonlight from above made the whole picture seem ethereal.
And just like that all anger left his body and he was enveloped in a sudden calm.He stood still not wanting to disturb her peace.
But,like always,he couldnt help himself.He walked up to her and sat down beside her.
She didnt get up and walk away like he expected her to.She seemed so engrossed that he doubted she even knew he was there..........which wasnt true since she had felt his presence the moment he had turned the corner.
After what seemed like a long time,she looked up at him............and to his utter surprise,her lips curved ito a soft smile.
He smiled back at her.............and then,in that very poignant moment,Adi and Maithili knew that things would somehow be fine. *************

😍 😍 😍 *sigh..........*

Extremely sorry for the delay, Sidster😳 life got in the way🤢😆

But....wow...this was amazing...just amazing.

The whole ambience of the party - the only two there in a crowd full of strangers....it was beautiful 😍 To top it off, Labon Ko is one of my fave songs😳 and suited the situation perfectly....and I just LOVE that final sentence: it felt like my - our - hope had also been restored😳

Thanks so much for this, Sid - it was beautiful and poignant and oh so mesmerising😳 Will remember it for a long time 😍

And now....enough of the grace period😡 gayye woh din, Sidra-ji, when I would say "Don't worry, take your time"😡😆😆 Its....high Time...don't ya think?😉😆

omggg wowwwwwwww
dat was awesum!!!
👏 👏 👏
i jus loved it the way u were descrbing was jus wow 😳
cnt wait 4 moreee 😳

Siddu,

You never cease to impress me do you?... Gosh woman, if anyday your work ends up published, I require a signed copy!
The title itself, "A Moment Likes This" gives a weird sense of memory at work... I know its about the present, but for some reason, its like reminicing the past... Weird, I know... but its me right?😆 But its such a perfect title... All that AM need, is a "moment like this"... nothing said, just letting things be... no restraint... no confinement... no nothing... just the moment reigns. What a thought!👏
The silent connection... the knowing... as she steps in and she realizes without her eyes at work who is standing before her.
"What if the person next to me is a guy?"😆
Especially loved this sentence, "His eyes glittered with something so intense that she suddenly felt breathless."😍
The whole dance sequence had my senses heightened😆😳 Wow... simple, yet so sophisticated...
She could have lived in his moment forever, just swaying with him,unaware of anything else but them.She felt at peace for what seemed to be the first time in ages.

Gazing into her eyes,he finally saw what he had wanted to see for a long time............the same thirst and longing that he knew was reflected in his eyes.

I loved how you captured their thoughts. Somewhere there is the realization of what is happening, but its marred by the calm... the feeling of right... How could this be wrong when it felt so right? I honestly wonder that too!😕 The song is a personal favourite... Theres this sufianic touch to it that's so capturing and Kay Kay's voice is magical, I swear... it was so perfecto!👏 When he takes her hand to his heart... *sighs* That's when time stops...

Adi's "attitude" towards Garima was so dark and amazing and perfect and why can't it be so in the show?... Ugh, why didn't he kill her? *pulls hair*... sara kissa hi khatam ho jaata!

The garden scene was so... serene?... Very peaceful and there was a deep essence of hope and like you wrote, that perhaps things will somehow be fine...

Simply exquisite... beautifphul as always kudiye... You're damn good at this!

👏

When's the next needed dose?? *innocent pout*

Cheers,

dc

@ Vasu.. Indeed! I second that thought... Indeed, Time awaits none!

Cheers,
dc