AM/FF~Tumse Hi~ pg15 Ch8 Countdown begins - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: k-ekta fan

sam nice ff...

but wht is dis adi is no more...

I knw u will do sumthing 2 bring him bck 😆

hehe you know me too well...of course Adi's gonna b back!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ange94

Finally you came back!😊

Whatt!!!!!!!! you are ending Love to Hate 😳 😡 haha! 😆yeah i #m gonna have to end it some time or the other!😳
Gonna miss it 😭 aww how sweet!
Well this ff seems interesting .(Thanks for the promo) 😊 ur welcome!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: sp79

hey sam🤗,whoot whoot! shweta didi!! you posted!!!😛

welcome back😛. I hope u update love to hate sooooooooooon😳 hehe...i will do!Well this one sounds interesting, so thanx for the promo😊 thankyou😳!

shwetha

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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: mbenjamin

another ff .ah! you did not just diss me!!!😆😆. 😆 😆 ..i'm totally kidding 😳 ...can't have too many AM fanfics esp. since we hardly ever get to see dem in da actual sho .yea i know! there are very few AM ffs..but adi's dead awww😭 not for long!😳...well i'm sure u've got sumthin up ur sleeve 😉 ...great start 👏

thankyou!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15

Chapter 2

"Bhabi?? Iss waqt?"

"ha Pallavi…iss waqt…woh…baat hi kuch aisi thi…"

"Bhabi, is everything allright?"

A single tear dropped from Parvati's eyes

"Nahi Pallavi…kuch theek nahi hai…meri maithili, meri bacchi…"

Parvati heard the screams coming from Maithili's room and immediately put the phone down…

Face pale with fright, it took a minute for her to regain consciousness of her surroundings. Tears streaming from Maithili's eyes as she reached out to her bedside table. She picked up a photo frame and stared at it. Bringing the frame close to her, she kissed it and buried it in her protective grasp.

Distancing the frame from herself, she once again stared at the photo. She smiled remembering when this particular photo was taken

Flashback

"Adi! give it here! I don't like taking photos!! Give the camera here!"

"no no maithili! Just one photo!" he smiled as he pulled her towards himself

A fresh stream of tears formed in her eyes as she remembered him

She got up and stood near the window again… she closed her eyes and let herself remember the incident…Flashes of everything passed through her mind…the music in her mind quickened its pace as she saw her footsteps quicken their pace in her nightmare.. Opening her eyes, she saw his face in front of hers…She smiled slightly as she felt him come alive…

She felt his arms wrap round her while she rested her head on his chest.

Clutching his photo, she cried her heart out…this night, no one could control her, for she had lost control of herself

"I hold it true, whatever befall; I feel it when I sorrow most; tis better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all"

-Lord Tennyson

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The next morning found maithili strolling in the Agarwaal Gardens. The cool air sent shivers down her spine, but she was used to this by now…5 months of wandering in the gardens at 5 o'clock every morning was how her day began.

"Beta…"

Maithili turned round to see her Parvati mamma…

M: jee mamma…

P: beta…kal raat tum…

M: please mamma…i..was crying…

P: ha beta, about that…

M: mamma…I can't get him back, but let me at least remember him.

Parvati paused for a moment, listening to maithili's reply…slowly, she nodded and allowed maithili to go past…

She felt herself drown in guilt…

If only she had dared to stand against Om…dared to stop him, then Adi would still have been here…

Parvati stopped Maithili and spoke

P: Beta…I'm sorry…I really am…if it weren't for me, adi would..

"nahi mamma…" maithili spoke turning round…

"you did nothing wrong…no one…knew…" Maithili spoke, her throat growing dry

Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
hii sam!!i'm reli sad to hear that ur endin ur other AM ff 😭 but if this 1 is as FANTABULOUS as the other 1 then there won't be anythin 2 be sad about 😉 btw loved the parts..sounds ver interesting 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
Ahhhhhhhh, I'm guessing this happens after they run away? 😆 Anyway, can't believe ur gonna end Love-Hate, but all good things to an end huh. 😊
Lovin' this one already, although I thought u said you wern't gonna update until u finish LH?? 😆 Hey! I ain't complanin'! 😆
Continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
omg luv the new ff! im a hooked on ur ff: "love2hate"
I've become ah huge fan of urs! thank you thank you THANK U sooo much for starting a new one! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
omggg sammiiiiiii 👏 👏 awesummm
i love how u express mets emotions
cnt wait
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
Samhita, that was so lovely. Beautifully written. I'm really looking forward to
reading more and more. Thanks 😊

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