'Time' AM FF - Pg 49 / 24 Oct - Ch 23 - Page 6

Originally posted by: desi chic

Siddu... You're flying yaar~! ... That was so poignant. Loved it! Aww thnx😳*rubs hands excitedly*... I love the character's timely reflections... and the way you present them... Very intense... I'm really itching to know of this raita businesss There is no raita busniess😆.I mean there is no specific raaz behind it.Just that shez reminded of a certain sum1😉... I don't wanna grow bald yaar, like this you mean 😆 so don't let me hanging for too long😳 Meri izzat ka sawal hai... 👏👏....dont worry,Im on it

"Each has his past shut in him like the leaves of a book known to him by heart and his friends can only read the title."-Virginia Woolf.

Apt quote... something everyone can relate too... Yeah

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Oh gosh Sidu, this has to be the best chapter till date, I have just been thinking how beautiful write and it's fantastic 👏 👏 👏 Awaiting for the next parrt, please don;t make us wait like Vas does with Love 😉 😳 Fantablous 👏

Aw, you love it really😉😆

Sid - loving the intensity of this chapter😳 My most fave part was the Adi scene, and out of that, this bit:

"The photograph which he had stared at for countless seconds,countless minutes,countless hours.....
......the only picture that he had of her.
......the only thing that reminded him that deep down his heart was still beating.
He looked at the woman in the picture,still a girl in so many ways,sitting on the bench and reading a book,her fair falling slightly over her face,totally engrossed in her reading,unaware of anything else around her.
He looked back outside.
He knew what going back meant.
It would mean seeing her again.It meant going back to everything which he had left long ago and come here.........something he wasn't really sure he was ready for. "

Absolutely breathtaking, sweetie😳😳 Reminds me of a certain other passionate lover 😉😆

You know I don't read any ffs regularly (except my own, naturally, since I have to write them😆😆) but yours and Dee's ffs are the only ones that keep me glued to each part😳 and it wouldn't even matter if I didn't like AM (which I do); I'd still read your ff just to appreciate the excellent writing😳👏