'Time' AM FF - Pg 49 / 24 Oct - Ch 23 - Page 20

Yay!!! You updated! 😊
That was just Fantastic absolutely awesome. 👏
And Beautifully written. 😊
I just loved the way you have described Tanu in this fic and specially how she "wondered". 😆

Can't believe Maithlli still wanted Pranay back.🤢

Please try to update soon this time.

PS: Wonderful JS siggies and avis!👏 😊 He is looking so hawt and evil !!😳

Anjali 😊

loved this part!!! 😳 adi seems soooooooooooooooooo charming 😳 😳 and cute 😳 😳
but whats this i hear metz still wants pranay back 🤢 😆 adi's gonna win her over with his charms 😳 and tannu is suchn a firebrand... 😆 i like her 😉 😆 shes gonna get AM together isn't she 😳 and i hope Shravan joins her 😃 😆 😳

ohh sid, what can i say my dear? no words! beautiful!
firstly i wanna say YAY you continued, and that too with 2 parts! i was getting worried you werent going to continue this, but im glad you havent forgot about your brilliant ff! cuz it is just too good!
gosh now i remember why i hate pranay and malishka so much!!! err annyoing as hell! but im really glad that you threw tanu into the mix, i really love her attitude towards her "cousin" and the way shes so suportive of mets! its great!
oh adi *sigh* how i miss him! the part you said about old adi being easy going and new adi being sort of dark, it totally comed across as that! you have done a great job seperating the 2 phases of his character! and this makes me wonder all the more, what happend to cause this change in both adi and mets?!??!? the suspence is gonna kill me haha
i just loved the way adi shut pranay up! good job! and he is starting to fall for her!!!!! awwww its sooo cute! the way he was staring at her, touched her cheek, wanted to kiss away her tears, how he carried her to her room! my god, so touching! you can really feel adis emotions! its tooooo good yaar!
now please try to continue soon, dont keep up waiting too long! thanks again for the awsome part!

After a lot of false starts, here I finally am 😆 😆

Beautiful updates, Sid, really - esp. the second one. Though I loved Tannu in the whole update, esp. her thoughts re: Pranay and Malli, and her "two moms and grandmom" 😳 😳 , the minute Adi walked in I was mesmermised...I kept forgetting that at this point (coz its a flashie), they weren't in love, and for a moment I was like "huh, what did I miss?" when he made the "why am I thinking about her" confession to himself 😆 😆 but as they go, it was a pretty decent flashback, incorporating bits of the real show (their thoughts and desires, really) but of course adding your own fictional element to it. Just loved Adi telling Mets about his date, and watching her sleep, and carrying her in his arms, and wanting to hold her close....*sigh* you get the picture, right? 😆 😆 Amazing...loved the whole chocolate-coffee scenario, and the detail with which you write AM is impeccable 👏 👏 I never feel like I am reading two alien characters, or that the AM of your ff are completely different from the AM of the show. Even though the AM in your ff have different experiences to the ones in the show...deep down they are exactly the same, and that's what counts.

Update soon, Sid, coz that was awesome 😳

omg sid..this was the best part ever!!!!!!!! 👏 ...i loved it!! 😳 ..i could actually picture everything happen in my head..it was soo mesmerising n captivating i turned everything off..the tv..music..everything..n just read..ive never been that quiet in my life 😆 my fav part was when adi was explaining to mets what she should smile about..i had the biggest grin on my face 😆 lol..i wish this part was actually in kggk... 😭 i would love to watch it..i am for sure gonna come bac n reread it!!...great job!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: sadizzle

👏 👏 👏 ~AWESOME~ 👏 👏 👏
Thanx soo much for FINALLY updating!!

lol thnx alot Sadizzle😳

Originally posted by: sp79

Awesome👏 I felt i was watching the two, absolutely loved Tanu in this one. And the contrast between the past and present Adi is beautifully written and comes through making it that much more special.😳

I am going to reread this again countless number of times, of course till ur next update.😊

Shwetha

Thnx so much Shwetha!🤗 Im glad that difference is coming across.

Originally posted by: kollaries4

kewl.. wicked... awesome.. finally u continued!!

Thnx!😊

Originally posted by: *angel94

Yay!!! You updated! 😊
That was just Fantastic absolutely awesome. 👏
And Beautifully written. 😊
I just loved the way you have described Tanu in this fic and specially how she "wondered". 😆 ....Thnx for your kind words Anjali.Gald you liked it.😳

Can't believe Maithlli still wanted Pranay back.🤢...lol this is Maithili we are talking about.Would have been out of character for her if she had just abruptly stopped loving him.....as sick as he was.🤢

Please try to update soon this time.

PS: Wonderful JS siggies and avis!👏 😊 He is looking so hawt and evil !!😳
Thnx!😳
Anjali 😊

Originally posted by: tsamhita

loved this part!!! 😳 adi seems soooooooooooooooooo charming 😳 😳 and cute 😳 😳 .............thnx alot Sam😳
but whats this i hear metz still wants pranay back 🤢 😆 adi's gonna win her over with his charms 😳 .......hmm really?😆and tannu is suchn a firebrand... 😆 i like her 😉 😆 shes gonna get AM together isn't she 😳 .........ummm and i hope Shravan joins her 😃 😆 😳............lol he hasnt even entered yet...and I dunno when he will🤔

Finally,I got to read tht!😃

**Phew**-Tht was a loooooooooooong part!😆

Now,I'll get back to the track!
Tht was an awesome part,beautifully written😳...Each and every feeling(both,AM)was described so beautifully,I just felt like readin tht chapter again and again(BTW,I've already read tht two tymes😉)...

Tanu was just too gud in this chapter😎...the way she answered Pranay bak,was brilliant👍🏼..."Pranay and Malishka ka big-fat popat🤣🤣🤣!"...

**ahem ahem**-Now,talkin abt "the best part"...All tht "Adi movin Mets' hair' and "Mets in Adi's arms"...was so dreamy and magical😍😍😍...I just couldn't stop blushin,throughout the chapter...

Hope to see the next part,soon😳😳...

Luv,
Amina😊...

Sidra, Sidra, Sidra....what am I gonna do with you ey?! Well, first of all, thank you for writing this ff. Amzingly written. The way you've portrayed their thoughts and feelings and awkwardsness (btw don't you just love the awkwardness?! 😆), is just spot on. And yh, as msot people wrote, Adi was 😍. They way he just got on Pranay's nerves 😆 and how he looked after Mets as if she were his own. Carrying her up to her room, I could sense that happening as soon as I has read that she fell alseep on the counter. 😳 You know what? I LOVE Tanu in ur ff. She is too funny. Love the way she insults Pranay, well I love anyone who insults Pranay! 😆 The whole block about why she should smile was sweet and funny. I could actually imagine him saying all that in his cute but 'Adi' sort of way and Mets just lookin' at him like....'oh, this boy!' but smiling to herself. 😆 Ok, I really miss them. Cheerz for updating.

Sid yaar, this time I'm the one who decided to randomly click on the link in your sig box and BOY am I glad I did, cuz I was missing out on such a gem of a story yaar!! 👏 👏

I will confess that I haven't watched AM in quite a while, but I loved the way their story had shaped up during the days he helps her to win Pranay...the raita scene, the fire scene and the one when he grabs her and tells her he loves her being among my faves 😳 😳

But reading THIS marvel of a ff you've written here yaar, just brings them ALIVE so wonderfully all over again!! 👏 👏 👏

I just LOVE the charged tension that is so palpable in most of their scenes! And you write so beautifully yaar!! Just the way the scenes flow...it's just brilliant! 👏 👏 👏

You bring out the angst in their relationship so so well yaar!! The story gripped from the get go, and reading thru, I can understand why ppl are so desperate for your updates...which seemed to be spaced quite far apart, nahin? 😉 😆 😆

I really am hard pressed to pick my fav. moments cuz I've really enjoyed all that you've written...but some of the ones I really liked were the scene in the boardroom when they see each other for the first time after so many years, and the one when she bumps into him at the library...just the way you've expressed their thoughts and emotions is just Wow! 👏 👏 👏

And I absolutely LOVED this latest update!! The flashback was so wonderful! I was totally ROFL at how Adi felt like rushing to the loo everytime Mallishka did her cloying act 🤣 🤣...and later the way he is subconsciously analyzing Met's eyes...loved the whole chocolate/mocha analysis he did there 😳 😳 😆...and the moment when he tucks her hair behind her ear and she looks up...beautifully written yaar! and that part about the moonlight glowing around her and just the way his feelings rose subconsciously...*sigh* 😍 😍

This is just brilliant story, Sid!! 👏 👏 👏 Please do continue soon! 😳

Originally posted by: Robin_M

ohh sid, what can i say my dear? no words! beautiful!
firstly i wanna say YAY you continued, and that too with 2 parts! i was getting worried you werent going to continue this, but im glad you havent forgot about your brilliant ff! cuz it is just too good! ...gosh now i remember why i hate pranay and malishka so much!!! err annyoing as hell! but im really glad that you threw tanu into the mix, i really love her attitude towards her "cousin" and the way shes so suportive of mets! its great!
oh adi *sigh* how i miss him! the part you said about old adi being easy going and new adi being sort of dark, it totally comed across as that! you have done a great job seperating the 2 phases of his character! and this makes me wonder all the more, what happend to cause this change in both adi and mets?!??!? the suspence is gonna kill me haha
i just loved the way adi shut pranay up! good job! and he is starting to fall for her!!!!! awwww its sooo cute! the way he was staring at her, touched her cheek, wanted to kiss away her tears, how he carried her to her room! my god, so touching! you can really feel adis emotions! its tooooo good yaar!
now please try to continue soon, dont keep up waiting too long! thanks again for the awsome part!

thnx sooooo much Robin for always reading and commenting.😳 lol how can I forget about this ff? I will continue and finish it.....its my last semester and things are hectic that's why Im unable to update regularly.

lol yeah my hatred for Pranay n Malishka all came bubbling up while writing this chapter.As for the suepnse....you will have to wait some more.😉