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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Robin_M

ohhh wow! that was soooooooooo good!😳😳blush allert!!! the ending just about stopped my heart! 😳😳 hope i don't kill ya!😆😆i cant wait to find out what adi's gonna say to her!ha ha! it'll be something to stop her heart! haha im totally loving the jealousy factor, and now that you are saying theres going to be more of it, im super excited! 😆😆i'm damn sure you'd like th etwist i have planned ill be looking forward to the next update and the major twist!😛will post soon😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome cant w8 for nxt part 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anjaneajnabi

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awesome cant w8 for nxt part 😃

aww thanks hun!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Chapter 31

A: you're soo….

Maithili held her breath, she didn't know what to expect.

A; you're soo…*uggh!!!*

Maithili widened her eyes..

M: what!!!

Adi burst out laughing

M: adi!!!!! Maithili yelled as she pushed him away

A: i..i can't believe you thought I like you!!

Maithili frowned in rage..

M: I hate you!!!!!

Saying so, she threw her brush at him and ran off inside.

She was not happy!!! This was the worst day of her life!!! She sulked and moaned as she dressed in the costume. "why is this frikking zip not pulling up!!!" she yelled frustrated. She hated all this!

"shouting is not going to help…" she heard a manly voice behind her…

she frowned even with her back against him..

"you.." she seethed again…

she turned towards him with utter disgust in her eyes..

"me…" he said advancing towards her, but this time she didn't move back…her steps moved towards him..

"get out Adi!!" she spoke in a firm voice…

A: just came to tell you, we have to start the dance in five minutes…so hurry up!" he said retreating..

Oh how she hated it when he acted as if nothing was wrong...as if nothing had happened..

But if one thing, he was right...yelling was certainly not going to help…she didn't even understand why she was so frustrated…and even if she did, she wouldn't want to look back on it.

She got onto the concrete platform upstairs. Adi stood behind her and held her waist. The music began and Adi and her were lowered from top.

The vocals began and both reached the ground.

O mahiyaa

O mahiyaa

O mahiyaa

O mahiyaa


Adi twirledMaithili in his arms and both their hands gripped. He pulled her into his arms and placed his hand on her hips

feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
youth forever
Soniye

feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
youth forever
Soniye


He turned her out and both started dancing separately in perfect sync

O aja mahi dhunde yeh ankhiyan
tak tak rava hai main thakia
jogan banke pal pal main tarsu
mil jao tum mil jaye duniya
ho 0 0 0
tu hi deewangi tu hi awaargi
rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi..

tauba tauba ishq main kariya
tauba tauba ishq main kariya
tauba tauba ishq main kariya
tauba tauba ishq main kariya

Adi pulled maithili in his grasp again. His lips lingered upon her bare neck and collar bone… "what the hell is he doing??" Maithili thought…

she tried not to squirm under him and tried to look as unaffected as possible…

feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
youth forever
Soniye

He lifted her in his arms and swung her round. She glided into his arms and by her waist, he perfectly hoisted her up and turned round.

feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
youth forever
Soniye


O maahiya

O mahiyaa

O mahiyaa

Both danced separately again

o maula mera dil na toote
maula mera pyar na roothe
maula meri preet na choote
ishq mera faryad lagaye
maula mujhe kutch na suhaye
maula sudh budh ud jaye
maula hothon pe duaaye
ishq mera faryad lagaye
oo ruh ki tajgi husn ki sadgi
rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi

tauba tauba ishq main kariya

tauba tauba ishq main kariya

tauba tauba ishq main kariya

tauba tauba ishq main kariya


feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
you forever

alla yeh barse ankhiyan
alla roshan kar duniya
alla daman main ho khushiyan
hai wari main tujhpe jaoo
hai alla mera deewanapan
alla ho gayi bairagan
alla mil jaye ranjan
tere dar se khali na jao
ho tu hi deewangi tu hi awaargi
rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi
tauba tauba ishq main kariya - 4

Both were dancing in full swing…being twisted and turned in each others arms…dancing separately..

feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
you forever
Soniye
Adi glanced over at maithili and was shocked as he saw the back of her silver blouse opening…the zip came down with every step of hers…He had to do something, or before the song ended, maithili would be..

feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
you forever
Soniye

He had to do something quickly...he didn't know what to do…

Tauba Tauba
feel the fire
Tauba tauba
my desire
tauba tauba

The song would be ending soon,

Tauba Tauba
feel the fire
Tauba tauba
my desire
tauba tauba

Adi grabbed maithili into his arms, twirled her half way and dipped her to the floor in his arms..

Maithili froze perplexed…he wasn't supposed to do that!! This was not the ending pose!!! She was about to revolt when she felt her stomach lurch…she felt his soft hands pacing her bare back. Her grip round his collar tightened as she shut her eyes. She felt his lips sink to her neck and brush past. She slowly realized what he was doing…his fingers caught onto the zip of her blouse and slowly pulled it up. She smiled faintly looking at his eyes

A: keep it natural…

He whispered in her ear

A: no one will know it ever happened…

Maithili smiled and nodded. The zip now fully closed, Adi and maithili got up from their position and stood up. The cheering of crowds, made them laugh and enjoy so much, that they didn't even notice adi's hand still clinging to maithili's waist and maithili's arm round Adi. They went inside and quietly sat in the green room. The judges were deciding who had won… "and the winner of this competition is…ADI and MAITHILI from JD college…

Applause and laughter were heard as Adi and Maithili came on stage to receive the award. Both equally excited, they hugged each other on stage and took the award.

Maithili squealed in excitement as she rang up her house..

M: mamma!!! I won I won!!! I won the competition!!!

S: wow beta!! That's excellent news!!!

Shruti put the phone down and turned to Prem..

S: prem, maithili and adi won the competition!! How great is that!!

P: Shruti…

Prem said in an angry tone of voice..

S: kya hua prem…shruti questioned him worried

well, all i can say is, get ready for the twist😉😃😆

Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
greattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
abh prem ko kiya huwa
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh u evil little moster !!! addin a twist!!! 😡 (joke) 😆 that was a gr8 update n do con soon!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
OK...so that post was getting a little toooo long so stopped quoting that one.

OK...so in this one I think Prem is going to change his mind abt AM being thoghter and getting married so I think he will bring in another guy for Metz etc and that is I think ur big twist.

And Haila! Adi being careful abt Metz zipper! 😍 And protecting her! 😳 😳

And yes...No point of PM where there is no Manoj! PM = Manoj and Tina! 😳 😛 😉 !
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Posted: 17 years ago
sammi awesum!!!! 👏 👏
kya dance tha wow
and i loved da song lol havent heard 4 ages 😆
o yh adi zipping mets bac was realli gd he saved her aww 😳
hmm prem gussa i wonder y?
cnt wait
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
GREAT YAAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏


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Posted: 17 years ago
AHHHHHHHHHH what is this yaar!?!?! leave us hanging just as its about to take on the twist! typical ekta style!!!! hahah now please continue soon and dont leave us hanging until monday like ekta does (like we have to wait till monday to see the families reaction upon seeing om! grrr) just loved this part, adi is my hero! how amazing of him to help mets like that, gosh i want my own adi! haha im not gonna try to guess the twist or why prems angry, but i cant wait to find out, so pleaaaasssse continue soon!

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