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hey guyz , i m tina and i luv this show. well i dont spend much time in the this forum. but since the track of Adi maithili statted i luved the show so much. o i canme up with a story in my mind hope u will like it.........
Maithili is broken from inside sicne pranay has betrayed her. he is in complete control of Mallishika. prnay asked Maithili to move out from his room since malishika is goign to saty there. she did not said anythign but moved from there.... she ws heartbroken and did not noe wat to do.
Maithili is sitting beside the window looking outside... thinknig about the moment she spent with Pranay. the man she loved more than any1. the man she can die for. the man who asked her to marry him. the man who betrayed her in love. the man who sleeps with other women. she still loves that man who refused to accept her as his wife... the man who treat her as she is nothing... a tear rolled down from her eyes whcih were tired and were hungry for some sleep.bu those scary dreams didnt let her sleep. dreams of pranay hand is slipping form hers. mallishika cam into her room.
malishika: why r u crying ? for wat ? listen Maithili ek din jo maine khoya tha u got that but now i got mine back. so lets be frank. pranay is mine only mine..
Maithili didnt answer anything. her voice was lost sicne prnay has stopped talking to her. malishika made a face and went away...suddnly Maithili's phona rang. she picked itup....it was her freind . her best friend Adi..
Maithili wasnt able to speak since she was crying but some how she controlled on her voice and pretended to be happy...
Adi: listen , i ma coming back saturday. will u come to recive me at the airport. i have lots of things to talk about. we will have fun... and plz don't bring Pranay.. u noe we don't go along really well... and plz u do come.
Maithili: ofcourse Adi i will be there? i have lots of stuff to talk about too.. i will talk to u later . umm gotta go bye. she couldnt control more and she started crying....
on ther side Adi was surprised the way Maithili acted on the phone: that's weird she didnt even said bye. oh well guess she is in hurry . probably she is with Pranay. i bet she is happy with him...
next day morning Maithili made the breakfast, but pranay came with a new surprise. he brought the divorce papers with him.
Pranay: listen Maithili , i found my love. and i have no place for u in my life. na i want u to set me free from this relationship.. its all fake and i want a real one with mallishika. so sign it.
Maithili dropped the bowl she was holding in her hands. she couldnt believ that...
Maithili: pranay u cnt do his to me. i am ur wife and it is my right to stay in this house and to be called ur wife....
Pranay: i noe Maithili u loved me but why dont u forget all this and start a new life. listen i am being fair since u have helped me alot. u were a good fren of mine. but i ma sorry i cant keep this relationship anymore...
Maithili wnet on her knees and pleades Pranay not to do this ... she loves him very much and cant live without him... plz let me saty in this house so i can see u everyday. that will be enogh for me to live... pranay wanst in the mood for all this so he left from there leaving a broken and crying Maithili behind him.. a week passed by . Maithili was worrid since Adi was coming today and he did not noe anything... her phone rings and it ws Adi..
Maithili: hi adi
adi: hey Maithili, hey can u do me a big favour can u plz arrange a plce for me to live for today since mom and dad went away and they didnt left nay key for me.. plz .
Maithili: hey Adi why dont u live with us .. ..
adi: plz no i dont; want ur husband to kcik me out.
Maithili: no nothing will hapen like that. and also every1 else went out of town for some marrige of relative and Pranay is too busy.. we will talk an have a chat. wat say
Adi: well wat else i can do. if it is for my besy fren then why not... and listen dont come here to pick me up but cook some food for me. i ma dying form hunger... iw will be there in half hour. i cant wait after that . u noe me right. i want to see food on the table b4 i reach there plz plz plz..
Maithili: ok ok i will send a car to pick u up. and i will prepare the food.....
adi: ohhh thanx see ya
Maithili: see u soon...
Maithili is i the kitchen preparing the food.she was lookin somewat happy since her best frend was cming.. on the other side.. malihika was getting ready in her oom fo ra party to go with pranay.. Maithili prepared food and serve it on the table. she wne t back to kitchen when malishika came down and sood by the table waitng for pranay.. Maithili was crrying some food and it was pretty hot. her hands were buring and she wasnt looking where she wsa going and suddnly she bumped into Mali..he food accidently fell on her dreass. she looked at Maithili who was scared and apologising...
Maithili: sorry , woh main actually , and it was hhot and i didnt saw u there.. sorry plz i ma sorry.
Masli looked at her with anger and she satted yelling at her...
Mali:U stupid blind gurl. cant u see where u goin. u sopiled my dress. it was a gift from Prnany. oh my gosh. i dont noe why the hell u r still in this house.
suddnly prany came in to the house..
Pranay: wat happend Mali
Mali preted to cry and told him that Maithili spoiled her dress which he bought for her so they coudnt go out togethr.
Pranay looked at her with anger: how dare u to do this tumhari inti himmat. ur useless fr this house but cant u do even a single work without doing any mistake.
Maithili: i am sorry pranay.. u r misundersatnding me. i was jsut trying to put the food on the table and i slipped and then... umm plz forgive me...
Pranay: listen Maithili, u r not my wife anymore. i gave u a chance to brake this realtion but u did not. and u noe wat u r getting on my nerves and i think u shoudl leave right now bcz nobody else can become his wife but Mallishika...
Maithili coulndt take it naymore. the anger inside her satrted to boild more and she coudnt take it anymore....
Maithili: enogh is enough Pranay. u r staying with this women without marrige but i dont say nayhitng bcz i noe u r happy and i ma happy if u r... but it still hurts when i see u with her... i am ur wife noe her... and u now wat ppl call a woman who live with a man without marrige .. a w***e.
pranay yelled: shut up Maithili and he slapped her.
Maithili fell on ground and was shocked. Pranay again slapped her and this time bolld start to coming out of her lip.... prany dragged her out ogf the house and through her out. but suddnly some1 catched her b4 she could fall. can u guyz guess who.....
thats it for noww
will continue
next time plz do comment
luv
tina
Maithili is broken from inside sicne pranay has betrayed her. he is in complete control of Mallishika. prnay asked Maithili to move out from his room since malishika is goign to saty there. she did not said anythign but moved from there.... she ws heartbroken and did not noe wat to do.
Maithili is sitting beside the window looking outside... thinknig about the moment she spent with Pranay. the man she loved more than any1. the man she can die for. the man who asked her to marry him. the man who betrayed her in love. the man who sleeps with other women. she still loves that man who refused to accept her as his wife... the man who treat her as she is nothing... a tear rolled down from her eyes whcih were tired and were hungry for some sleep.bu those scary dreams didnt let her sleep. dreams of pranay hand is slipping form hers. mallishika cam into her room.
malishika: why r u crying ? for wat ? listen Maithili ek din jo maine khoya tha u got that but now i got mine back. so lets be frank. pranay is mine only mine..
Maithili didnt answer anything. her voice was lost sicne prnay has stopped talking to her. malishika made a face and went away...suddnly Maithili's phona rang. she picked itup....it was her freind . her best friend Adi..
Maithili wasnt able to speak since she was crying but some how she controlled on her voice and pretended to be happy...
Adi: listen , i ma coming back saturday. will u come to recive me at the airport. i have lots of things to talk about. we will have fun... and plz don't bring Pranay.. u noe we don't go along really well... and plz u do come.
Maithili: ofcourse Adi i will be there? i have lots of stuff to talk about too.. i will talk to u later . umm gotta go bye. she couldnt control more and she started crying....
on ther side Adi was surprised the way Maithili acted on the phone: that's weird she didnt even said bye. oh well guess she is in hurry . probably she is with Pranay. i bet she is happy with him...
next day morning Maithili made the breakfast, but pranay came with a new surprise. he brought the divorce papers with him.
Pranay: listen Maithili , i found my love. and i have no place for u in my life. na i want u to set me free from this relationship.. its all fake and i want a real one with mallishika. so sign it.
Maithili dropped the bowl she was holding in her hands. she couldnt believ that...
Maithili: pranay u cnt do his to me. i am ur wife and it is my right to stay in this house and to be called ur wife....
Pranay: i noe Maithili u loved me but why dont u forget all this and start a new life. listen i am being fair since u have helped me alot. u were a good fren of mine. but i ma sorry i cant keep this relationship anymore...
Maithili wnet on her knees and pleades Pranay not to do this ... she loves him very much and cant live without him... plz let me saty in this house so i can see u everyday. that will be enogh for me to live... pranay wanst in the mood for all this so he left from there leaving a broken and crying Maithili behind him.. a week passed by . Maithili was worrid since Adi was coming today and he did not noe anything... her phone rings and it ws Adi..
Maithili: hi adi
adi: hey Maithili, hey can u do me a big favour can u plz arrange a plce for me to live for today since mom and dad went away and they didnt left nay key for me.. plz .
Maithili: hey Adi why dont u live with us .. ..
adi: plz no i dont; want ur husband to kcik me out.
Maithili: no nothing will hapen like that. and also every1 else went out of town for some marrige of relative and Pranay is too busy.. we will talk an have a chat. wat say
Adi: well wat else i can do. if it is for my besy fren then why not... and listen dont come here to pick me up but cook some food for me. i ma dying form hunger... iw will be there in half hour. i cant wait after that . u noe me right. i want to see food on the table b4 i reach there plz plz plz..
Maithili: ok ok i will send a car to pick u up. and i will prepare the food.....
adi: ohhh thanx see ya
Maithili: see u soon...
Maithili is i the kitchen preparing the food.she was lookin somewat happy since her best frend was cming.. on the other side.. malihika was getting ready in her oom fo ra party to go with pranay.. Maithili prepared food and serve it on the table. she wne t back to kitchen when malishika came down and sood by the table waitng for pranay.. Maithili was crrying some food and it was pretty hot. her hands were buring and she wasnt looking where she wsa going and suddnly she bumped into Mali..he food accidently fell on her dreass. she looked at Maithili who was scared and apologising...
Maithili: sorry , woh main actually , and it was hhot and i didnt saw u there.. sorry plz i ma sorry.
Masli looked at her with anger and she satted yelling at her...
Mali:U stupid blind gurl. cant u see where u goin. u sopiled my dress. it was a gift from Prnany. oh my gosh. i dont noe why the hell u r still in this house.
suddnly prany came in to the house..
Pranay: wat happend Mali
Mali preted to cry and told him that Maithili spoiled her dress which he bought for her so they coudnt go out togethr.
Pranay looked at her with anger: how dare u to do this tumhari inti himmat. ur useless fr this house but cant u do even a single work without doing any mistake.
Maithili: i am sorry pranay.. u r misundersatnding me. i was jsut trying to put the food on the table and i slipped and then... umm plz forgive me...
Pranay: listen Maithili, u r not my wife anymore. i gave u a chance to brake this realtion but u did not. and u noe wat u r getting on my nerves and i think u shoudl leave right now bcz nobody else can become his wife but Mallishika...
Maithili coulndt take it naymore. the anger inside her satrted to boild more and she coudnt take it anymore....
Maithili: enogh is enough Pranay. u r staying with this women without marrige but i dont say nayhitng bcz i noe u r happy and i ma happy if u r... but it still hurts when i see u with her... i am ur wife noe her... and u now wat ppl call a woman who live with a man without marrige .. a w***e.
pranay yelled: shut up Maithili and he slapped her.
Maithili fell on ground and was shocked. Pranay again slapped her and this time bolld start to coming out of her lip.... prany dragged her out ogf the house and through her out. but suddnly some1 catched her b4 she could fall. can u guyz guess who.....
thats it for noww
will continue
next time plz do comment
luv
tina
Indian Idol 16
