MADI FF Kya mujhe Pyar hai UPDT PG 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i really like ur fanfic.. plz continue soon 😊 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey tina very nice fic
i liked it very much
plz cont soon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww thanx guyz. i think u guyz are njoying it. whcih is a good thing for me to continue.... thanx once again...


here is the next part..

maithili was about to fall but somebody caught her from falling. maithili lifted her head up and was shocked... it was Adi, her best fren and she knew that he cant see her like that.. maithili tried to hide everything. but Adi shut her upp... maithili looked into his eyes whcihc were red wid anger nad asking her why did she lied to him..

Paranay was shocked to see him there too..

Pranay: oh i see . why were u getting ready and all. bcz he was coming.. this guy. waht kind of realtion u guyz have inbetween u too. huh.. oh let me guess. he is ur luver..

maithili couldnt believ her ears. did Pranay just said that? yes he did.

maithili: pranay , woh sorry i forgot to tell u than Adi was coming..

Pranay couldnt control his anger whcih was there since maithili dint told him anything about Adi's arrival. he lifted his hand up to slap her one more time. maithili again tried to save herself by covering her eyes even though she new that ntn can sve her. but b4 that cruel hand could do it's deed. another hand stopped it from hitting maithili ... it was Adi. u can teel by looking at him that how much anger was there in his eye. he blood satart to flow faster and the grip bcame more tghtinng. Pranay could feel the pain .. and was trying to get rid of that powerful grip. bu he couldnt'. Adi threw up his hand into air and turned around. he stopped and closed hi eyes and think about wateva Pranay said about him and maithili. he tighten his fist and opened hi eys. he turned quickly and gave a tight slap on Pranay's face...

maithili was shcoked to see this and so was Pranay. Adi hold him form his collar.

Adi: i neva thought that u can hink something really low... i new that u werent a good man but i though after maithili came into ur life. u will change by urself. but i was wrong. i should have told maithili b4 everything... how dare u to slap my frend,. like that.. i m leaing u alive bcz i noe that she loves u more than anything.

Adi pushed him back and start to walk toward maithili and helped her to get up and take to her room. but Pranay stopped him.

Pranay: dont u dare to bring her back to this house since it doesnt belong to her anymore... she is ntn for this house but a servant ans we dont need her anymore.

maithili: {start to cry} plz pranay . plz dont this to me.. i luv u pranay and i am ur wife. i can't stay without u . plz pranay... Adi tum jao i will sty with him plz leave me alone woth him. atleast i will be happy here bcz i will see him everytime.. plz pranay stop doin this to me...

Adi: maithili lets go . waise bhi i dont trust this guy anymore.. i m afraid that he will do something to u.

Pranay: haan haan . take her away mujhe bhi is useless ki koi zroorat nahin hai...

and he went back to maithilis room to bring her stuff. and brought a bag and thoru it out..

Pranay: get out of my house else i will do soemthing that u wont will be imagine.. get out.

adi took maithili and start to walk outside. maithili was emotionless but was walking with him... adi took her stuff and his stuff left the house...


well thats it for now.. i will wrtie something tomorrow.. so plz leave comment

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg wow dats was gr8 👏 👏 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg! It's great! I love it and I want to read more!!! 😃 😃 Can't wait until your next post!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
that part was great!!!!!! plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
that was awesome!..continue soon ROCK ON ADI!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
poor mets, but dont worry, yor prince charming is here!!! lol continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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brillant , i want too punch pranay arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
adi mets rockssssssssssssssss
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
awssommme.I liked ur fanfic.
continue soon 😃

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