F/F- Adi/M 'Touched by an Angel' Ch11 P14 - Page 11

awesum 👏 👏
wat can i say it was awesum!!!
loved it 😃
cnt wait 4 mire
continue soon 😳

wow that was brilliant hun! sooooooooo good! i loved everybit of it! lol i have close to no knowledge of football, but i must say i really enjoyed their little banters on the sport! reminds me of my fetish with hockey! the phone convo in part 10 was just great! and the mandir scene was my favorite!!!!!!!!!!! tooooo good!
im really glad you didnt delete part 11 cause it rocked! the way they were able to bond and share their fears with each other was beautiful! the flirting of course was great! and the ending was *sigh* so cute!
hmmm i cant wait to see what you have in store for this garima!!!!!!! im sure you wont disappont us lol
thanks for the 2 wonderful part, loved reading them and am really looking forward to more! continue soon!

wow

i really love your ff it is really good

i read the hole thing the other day but ddnt reply 😳 but i jst had to tell u this ff rocks

Thanks so much guys for all your lovely comments. Truly, I am
overwhelmed.

Thanks brownbutt, sadizzle, destinyz, Sidra, mtbenjamin, Sam, angel 94,
Shaz, Robin ,mesmerized. I wish I knew all your names. I'll post
individual thanks when I get back from my holiday.

And that's the reason I'm posting this guys. I'm off tonight for a vacation
and will be back only mid February. So, I guess I'll be able to update only
after I get back. Just wanted to let you all know.

And once again thanks so very much for all your kind comments. They
mean so much to me.

Nandini,

I haven't read the latest one yet (saving it for desert)...

But the last two parts were too good! Adi's thought waves are hillarious🤣... His confusion between thought and reflex is cute. I really liked the bet part and the mandir part was so adorable... A very tranquil scene even though they were totally confused about what was going on. I was crossing my fingers hoping no one would disturb the moment... Now we'll never know what would have happened had Mayuri not shown up... But the friction is garma garam!... The whole convo at the restaurant was terribly sweet. I liked how you showed their interaction and ability to just talk like old buddies. Adi's situation was very thoughtfully conveyed. Thank you for such a wonderful piece... you are so amazing at this!

Cheers,

dc

Hey I've been meaning to post on here for quite a while as I read ur updates a few days ago. Btw, twas no problem at all helping u to carry on updating. My pleasure n I know everyone else in the Niche enjoyed it too, coming up with all those theories, esp. Sid as she needed cheering up too. 😆 😳 It's all in a day's work. 😆 😉
Anyway, I loved ur updates, both of them were truly amazing. As some people may know on here, I'm not that good with words 😆 but let me just say this. Everytime I read ur FF my heart just melts n I get butterflies. 😳 (I don't talk like this is real life btw, so you best be feeling special right now......) Your writing is beautiful. I hope you carry on writing the way you do and I know this FF is gonna be very well remembered. 😉 So I just want to thank you for being such an amazing writer. I'm probably gonna regret writing all this tomorrow so it must all be the truth. 😆 Anyway this is what I write when I'm sleepy. 🥱 Imagine me drunk, (even tho I don't drink) the truth will come out! 😈 Whatever that is...........😕 🤪
Take care. Keep updating. If you need inspiration u know where the Niche is! 😉 😆

I've been purposely avoiding reading your updates so I could accumulate a few at a time to read, because you always leaving me craving for more as soon as the chapter ends...but damn it, so much for delayed gratification! I just couldn't resist anymore and I needed that instant gratification! And it was well worth it!

So can i now just that the mandir scene was absolute brilliance! The chemistry is practically oozing out of your writing! I absolutley loved both parts!! Though I do hope you have a great holiday, I can not wait for you to return and post the next chapter! For selfish reasons, hurry back!
😃

you have to continue, pleaasssseee!

wicked man.. u just ve to continue sooon..

Hey Pleaseeeee update soon. 😭 😭