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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fanfic!

Pranay come to the park to meet mythelli and tell her about his new book offer.

  • P: Mythelli, i got this new book offer and i am so excited, looks like some people do like my book!
  • M: that's great, Pranay, i need to tell you something
  • P: no, i need to tell you it first
  • M: what is it?
  • P: i am going to express my love tommorrow to Mallishka

Mythelli is shocked, shedecides not to tell Pranay anything about her feelings. She holds back her tears and tells him to go prepare for it.

Next day in college:

  • Adi: did you tell pranay about it? do you need my help, think about it
  • M: Its too late, Pranay loves Mallishka, he will tell her about it today.
  • A: and your're just going to let that happen? i thought you could fight for your right, i was wrong, you're scared
  • M: i am not scared, i just want him to be happy
  • A: oh stop with the saaga, if i was you, then i would never allow Pranay to go away
  • M: that's the difference between me and you

Adi stares ahed and walks off. Mythelli starts crying. Janki devi sees her and calls her into the office

  • J: what happened, you seem to cry a lot these days, did anyone do something to you? Kya hua Mytheli?
  • M: Kuch nahin maam, bus, kuch paaney se pehle mai usse kho bathein.
  • J: mai samajh sakti hoon, tum Pranay ke baare me baath kar rahe ho na?
  • M: ha, Janki maam
  • J: mujhe lagtha hai tumhe usse bhool jaana chahiye. Pranay tumhare feelings ko nahin pehchaanta to tumhe usse chod deena chahiye
  • M: i will try.

Mythelli meets Adi in the corridoor and...

  • M: Adi, i don't want your help, i have decided that i will leave Pranay and ignor him for a few days.
  • A: good. Here, you are invited to a pary i am holding for my mother. She recovered. She can speak now, she's normal!
  • M: wow, that's great. I will come.
  • A: the theme is colour, you have to dress in vibrant colours. Pranay is invited too, you have to show him you are much better than Mallishka
  • M: you think i am better than Mallishka?
  • A: ....no........just .... Malliskha is not his type, you're more his type

Adi goes away leaving Mythelli to think about what he just said.

Adi Mytheli fans, this was part 1. do you want me to continue.

this was my first attempt, please comment!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow this sounds excellent!!!! plz plz plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow this sounds excellent!!!! plz plz plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: tsamhita

Fanfic!

Pranay come to the park to meet mythelli and tell her about his new book offer.

    P: Mythelli, i got this new book offer and i am so excited, looks like some people do like my book! M: that's great, Pranay, i need to tell you something P: no, i need to tell you it first M: what is it?
  • P: i am going to express my love tommorrow to Mallishka

Mythelli is shocked, shedecides not to tell Pranay anything about her feelings. She holds back her tears and tells him to go prepare for it.

Next day in college:

    Adi: did you tell pranay about it? do you need my help, think about it M: Its too late, Pranay loves Mallishka, he will tell her about it today. A: and your're just going to let that happen? i thought you could fight for your right, i was wrong, you're scared M: i am not scared, i just want him to be happy A: oh stop with the saaga, if i was you, then i would never allow Pranay to go away
  • M: that's the difference between me and you

Adi stares ahed and walks off. Mythelli starts crying. Janki devi sees her and calls her into the office

    J: what happened, you seem to cry a lot these days, did anyone do something to you? Kya hua Mytheli? M: Kuch nahin maam, bus, kuch paaney se pehle mai usse kho bathein. J: mai samajh sakti hoon, tum Pranay ke baare me baath kar rahe ho na? M: ha, Janki maam J: mujhe lagtha hai tumhe usse bhool jaana chahiye. Pranay tumhare feelings ko nahin pehchaanta to tumhe usse chod deena chahiye
  • M: i will try.

Mythelli meets Adi in the corridoor and...

    M: Adi, i don't want your help, i have decided that i will leave Pranay and ignor him for a few days. A: good. Here, you are invited to a pary i am holding for my mother. She recovered. She can speak now, she's normal! M: wow, that's great. I will come. A: the theme is colour, you have to dress in vibrant colours. Pranay is invited too, you have to show him you are much better than Mallishka M: you think i am better than Mallishka?
  • A: ....no........just .... Malliskha is not his type, you're more his type

Adi goes away leaving Mythelli to think about what he just said.

Adi Mytheli fans, this was part 1. do you want me to continue.

this was my first attempt, please comment!😃

wow.. nice... plz continue😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats really nice.. 😊
👏 👏 👏
Plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyi come here to read updates only as i dun have much time...but i must say i really love the jodi n that's why i luv this ff too...well do continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lovely ...... 😊 plz contunue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome continue soon 😉 adi helping methilli 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks, i love it that all of you love this fanfic, i will write another one soon ,but not today as i have to study for my SATs in May 1st week
but thanks i really appreaciate it 😳

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