kyunki.... hamari kahaani part 1

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Pls appreciate my story cos ive really worked on it. as said the main characters are karan nandini tanya bhhomi manthan parth n otheers in virani too.

The story is beginning when tanya has been kicked out by karan and karan nandini are living with their children with their son parth back. Here it is.

Episode -1

At SN....😎
All the members of sn are at the dining table having breakfast. damini, ganga and mohini are all congratulating Karan and Nandini after there son parth has returned. both r very happy..😊mohini howevr says that they have to be careful of tanya as she might strike them.karan and nandini luk disturbed while tulsi consoles them.

Bhoomi and Manthan room..
....😊

manthan is in his room thinking and recalling all moments he spend with his mom tanya. tears roll down his eyes
😭. bhoomi comes n gives him a hug and tells him to forget the past. he agrees and says now nandini is his mom.

Karan Nnadini room...
karan has nandini in his arms and both r romancing. karan holds nandini by her chin n says that he demands a kiss.
😊😳😊. nands blushes n tells karan that they have a son whos going to see this n wht will he think. karan doesnt listen n as soon as they kiss parth cumes😎😎😎.(manoj aka prem from kzk). he says that if they r done with romancing he wants to join the virani business.both kn are very happy...😊..😊..😊

At sn hall- manthan and parth confro
manthan bumps into parth accidently. parth gets irritated and says that is he blind.? manthan tells him it was an accident and he shud mind his tongue as hes older to him and he is younger . parth tells manthan to shut up. he warns manthan not to cum in his way. manthan goes away without saying anything.😲😲😲. parth vows to destroy manthan as he wants karan property and revenge wht tanya did with his parents. he says may sab ko iss manthan kay khalaf kar doon ga. he laughs off😡😡😡

a mansion-
a woman has a pic of nandini and blood all over it. the woman is none other tanya. tanya says that nandini stole my love, my son and my daughter from me n she will now destro nandini. tanya promises to hurt nandinni mentally and physically and destroy her.

epi ends on her face.
Epi ends......Rate d epi..........
05- excellent
04-very good
03-good
02-Fair
01- very bad........


pre cap- nandini gets kidnapped by tanya and tanya beats her badly.😡

i hope u guys enjoyed. will be writing soon enough. give me ur views and write wht u think abt the intro.if any queries message me.
So do not Miss & leave ur comments......TK care ...Regards!!!
Luv to all ........😊
Bye !!😊







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Posted: 16 years ago
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ye galat hai nandini kyun maar khaaye tanya se

kn abki baar alag na ho
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Posted: 16 years ago
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rate would be 4 b'coz tum nandini ko tanya ke haathon pitwaaoge and kn ko alag karoge isliye
plz kn ko alag mat karo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys just wait n watch
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was excellent. U write very well. Poor Manthan...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i will rate excellent 5 wow why that witch tanya beating up nandini lovely episode

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