Ronakshi TS: The Storm - Page 2

OMG ! I honestly don’t know where to start from ! Can I just say that I love you ?! Girl you are MAGIC ! If I’m not mistaken, you wrote Os’s on Shivika right ?

Anywayyyyy your work is AWESOME ! As you said, it is quite a sensitive topic and unfortunately not everyone talks about it as much as they actually should as it is a very important topic for EVERYONE ! Besides, you portrayed it so beautifully I had tears in my eyes. God I’m falling short of words ! It was EPIC.

You NEED to continue it ! The way you portrayed Rohit is what we need in today’s world. No unnecessary judgement, no pointing the finger at the girl because « uski hi galti hogi » just pure love.

THANK YOU FOR THIS !

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Whoa great writing,wonderfully depicted all that feelings of the troubled two individually. Yes it is a sensitive topic but written quite carefully and well handled in my opinion. I say,you should really continue😊 and do write more.

Already guessed the culprit by the way,and cannot wait to know what Rohit sippy would do to that looser. Keep going. You write great.

Aww Thank you so much my love. I'm so glad you liked it🤗

Originally posted by: KaranSG_01

Beautiful.

You have taken up a very different and sensitive concept and handled it beautifully. I haven't seen mardaani 2 but I am eagerly looking forward to the next part.

Yayy thanks a lot.❤️ And you MUST. Watch mardaani 2 if u can handle dark movies. Such an eye opening movie, I loved it :)

Originally posted by: Blackwind

The description is so on point.Loved it.I had goosebumps while reading it.Please continue.

Thank you so much 😘

Originally posted by: Shanayass

OMG!!!! This was beautiful..beautiful beyond words!! U have choosen a very mature, different and sensitive topic and handled it also very nicely!! I am really really looking forward to it!! After a long time i felt something very deep while reading something!! Such plots actually excites me to another level! Pls update soon and don't keep us waiting! Keep it up girl!!💖

Hii mushfika..I am shanaya!! R U new to the forum??

Omg!! You have no idea how happy I am reading your comment. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. 🤗

Originally posted by: sohit-mishbir

A veryy sensitive topic, but you have hanfled it beautifully... And I love this fresh take..

Honestly it raged me the same way you depicted Rohit's emotions.. At the same time I was in tears for even imagining what sona might have gone through.. In fact whenever I read about any girl my eyes always are filled with tears of angst, pain and anger...

So even with this writing.. Every nerve of my body was filled with the same rage... I had tears..

Looking forward to the next part..

You have handled it really really welll and careful, Well done!! 👏

Keep writing, looking forward to it

Time for introduction??!! 😃😃😄😄😄 hiii Mushfika🤗, I am Alisha, you new here??

Hey Alisha! Yeah I hardly make posts on this forum, sometimes silently go through the psots of others. So u could say I'm new haha.

Thanks a ton for such a beautiful comment. I truly appreciate your encouraging words. It only makes me keep writing 😘❤️

Originally posted by: sohit-mishbir

A veryy sensitive topic, but you have hanfled it beautifully... And I love this fresh take..

Honestly it raged me the same way you depicted Rohit's emotions.. At the same time I was in tears for even imagining what sona might have gone through.. In fact whenever I read about any girl my eyes always are filled with tears of angst, pain and anger...

So even with this writing.. Every nerve of my body was filled with the same rage... I had tears..

Looking forward to the next part..

You have handled it really really welll and careful, Well done!! 👏

Keep writing, looking forward to it

Time for introduction??!! 😃😃😄😄😄 hiii Mushfika🤗, I am Alisha, you new here??

Hey Alisha! Yeah I hardly make posts on this forum, sometimes silently go through the psots of others. So u could say I'm new haha.

Thanks a ton for such a beautiful comment. I truly appreciate your encouraging words. It only makes me keep writing 😘❤️

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice start

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks a lot❤️

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Hi mushfika, anamika here. I came across to this story just now and i have no words to describe the beauty of your writing.

When i started reading, i had no idea that youre gonna be writing on such a sensitive topic. People need guts to write on such topics and kight i say you are one brave girl.

I cpuld feel ewch and every single emotion. I loved how described both sonakshis and rphits point pf view. It just added to the significance of the trauma.

Thpse few flashback lines...I had to read pver and over again to believe that it was NAREN who did thos TO sona. I literally gor goosebumps. I watched mardaani 2 and i see what u mean when u said u wanted to show how a culprits mind work. Indeed age doesnt matter yaar. There are news where 2 year old lids are getting raped by old men.

I absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVEEEDDDD the way u described rohits emotions. From being ecstatic about surprising sona to the confusion , to the fear when he heard sonas scream to hisbheart dropping when he saw sona laying on the floor , tp the protective rohit l, to the part where he tried to enquire what was wrong to how his entired belieng filled with rage when he finallynput sona to sleep. The transition was so smooth and so real. I just loved how he said "its okay we are not gonna talk about it now okay". He knew what to prioritize when. At that time, nothing mattered other than her mental state and allnhe wanted wasnto calm her down and put her to sleep.

I love the way you write my dear. Please please please continue this story. I wan to know what hapoens after. This is a masterpiece in the making.

Holy mother of cow! I'm in cloud 9 reading your comment. I csnt thank you enough for each and every word of support and encouragement. Thank you so much, I love you. 😢😘

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Please continue soon dear. And write more and more stories on ronaksshi . It is pure bliss because u handle every emotion and pen itbdown beautofully. I will be wsoting for the next part.

I will Continue soon❤️