OS: Agony Part 2 update 8/12/2019 - Page 2

Wow 😭

My Sippu's heart is aching.

Eager to see how Sona treats his invisible wounds

Some intense Ronakshi moments on the way, I guess 👍🏼

Update soon 😊

By the way, who is DS?

You nailed it Viju🙌 I was dying to read this os from the day you were supposed to upload.. Finally I managed..And this was something I must say..My heart went out to Rohit literally

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Words!!! Girl words

This was utterly one hell of magnetic writing. I read it twice☺️ The emotions and the words went hand in hand.

Penning Rohit's reaction was the most beautiful one!

Loved it to the core,vijju❤️ Continue asap

Originally posted by: malarmia

Wow 😭

My Sippu's heart is aching.

Eager to see how Sona treats his invisible wounds

Some intense Ronakshi moments on the way, I guess 👍🏼

Update soon 😊

By the way, who is DS?

Badi Mom

Thank you everyone for your awesome comments. I am glad you all liked it. Really appreciate your love. I hope you guys will like the next part. I wanted to wrap it up but I feel there is more to it, more is needed to do justice to the pain.

Enjoy!

Part 2

She stared at him, trying to see through him but it felt like there was a shield that stopped her. Was he going to distance himself from her. How would she breath without him. He who she loved, and more he loved her unconditionally like no one else. She knew everybody around her had reasons for being with her but he was with her because he loved her for what she is. He had let her be the way she wanted to be, he had let her free.

She moved her shivering hands slowly towards his face fearful of a rejection. But to her surprise he didn’t stop her, was he willing to listen? But soon she realised he was just physically with her in the very moment but emotionally he was stranded elsewhere.

Taking a deep breath, mustering up the courage she touched his face, she knew she had to tell him why she signed those papers.

As soon as her cold hands touched his soft warm cheeks, she felt a change in his demeanour, he flinched. Was he disgusted by her touch, was he going to push her away. For the first time in the last couple of hours he looked into her eyes, his eyes bloodshot red, tears rolling down, anger crawling up his nose flaring his nostrils.

It was her turn to flinch as he wrapped his wrist around her arm ever so tightly. A rush of pain crawled up to her response system. She didn’t scream, but her eyes conveyed pain. As soon as he read the discomfort in her eyes, his hold loosened. He could not hurt her- never. He wanted to give her the chance to let her explain herself. He didn’t know why? A part of him wanted to distance himself from her, he felt but deceived. But his heart fought against all for her, he could never see her pain no matter what.

Calming his senses, he took her by shock as he hugged her tight. She was taken back not in a bad way but certainly shocked. He was holding on to her ever so tightly, as if she would vanish into the air if he let her free.

She could hear his sob, getting louder every passing second churning her heart into pieces seeing him in pain.

‘Sorry Sona’ he mumbled making her move out of his embrace. Did he just apologise? She asked herself not sure.

‘I am so sorry’ he repeated caressing her arm, ‘did I hurt you?’ he asked looking up at her with concern.

And she was blown, the guilt pumping out from her heart into her circulatory system. Every nerve, fibre in her body had the essence of guilt in them. How could he love her so much? She should be apologising to him for breaking her promise. And here this man was seeking her apology for causing her a nonexistent amount of pain.

‘Rohit’ she said cupping his face, it had never been so difficult to take his name. Not even when they were in the worst of terms, it felt like every letter in his name took a lifetime to come out of her mouth.

Tears were rolling down her face and his ‘I am sorry’ piercing her heart, she said, ‘I love you Rohit, meine ye sab sirf humare pyaar ke liye kiya’.

He wiped her tears, he knew it, she had done this for them. His heart triumphed over his mind, a battle was won.

‘Uss din Papa mère ghar aye the, with those agreement papers, at first I didn’t want to sign those. But when he told me that mumma ne tumhare CA se baat ki thi about your finances. I was shocked. He could not trust me because of that. And I felt it makes no difference, because humari shaadi kabhi tutne hi nahi denge hum log, Mujhe humare pyaar pe pura bharosa tha’.

He looked up to her. She looked deeply into his eyes. What they exchanged was beyond the understanding of this world, she was fearing the following question, while he was formulating the question. The silence remained almost choking them.

‘Why did you not tell me about this?’ He asked, she crushed her eyes close, she knew this was coming. She knew there was no answer to this question.

‘Sonakshi’ he called, her eyes sprang open, did he just call her ‘Sonakshi’ and not ‘Sona, a part of her broke. She knew they had grew apart, she knew something had crawled between them. Or may be he was just too lost to realise.

‘’Tell me, tumne ye baat Mujhe Pehle kyun nahi batayi’.

Nothing but silence followed.

‘Because I didn’t want to hurt you’ she had managed to let those words seep out of her mouth.

‘You think it’s not hurting me now?’ He screamed making her take a few steps back. His eyes blood shot, nothing but anger flushing through his cheeks and nose. She was taken back by his outburst. She was scared of him.

*to be continued*

my hero is hurt not because she signed those papers but because she hid it from him.

This is just torturous and beautiful at the same time..

I am really in short of words to comment how beautiful it is nd what I felt through it... The pain all in me now.. I literally had tears.. I could see Rohit that way.. I could see Sona that way.. Nd it breaks me..

No, nothing should come in between them.. At least not those mere papers..

Ahh.. This is painful and fab.. At same time... Ur writing is just amazingg..

Continuee soon... Vijju.. Looking forward to it.. 💘❤

Love, Alisha 😘😘

Hey, Viju! This is fantastic! The way you've captured the various emotions that both of them are going through is painfully accurate. It's a constant war between knowing why she did it and why didn't she tell me. Looking forward to the next!

Awesome update

Love it

Originally posted by: ishra_bestluv

Badi Mom

Oh, I see.

Thank you.