RoNakshi FF: A Little Like Magic, A Lot Like Love, IMP NOTE on PG 10 - Page 5

What a start!

Ronakshi knew each other since they were kids

How will they meet after 23 years?? I'm curious.

What will Rohit ask as his third wish?

Please update soon ❤️

Wow I love the plot! It’s very interesting Mandy! Eagerly waiting to read more . Thanks for the update

Aparna

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

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Ah, ha! The much awaited story is finally here! And what an angsty way to start! Sona’s plight makes me feel bad for her but I’m curious to know who is this new girl and how did Sona end up breaking Rohit’s heart. Seems promising! I see you’ve updated the first chapter as well. Can’t wait to read it but need to rush right now as I’m heading out. Aaand, Sona has a friend here, yayy!

Cheers.

Thanks Sarcy 🤗 U will know who is this new girl (spoiler - its not Raima for sure 🤣) about Sona, this phase is momentary 😉 the story has a happy ending promise!

Originally posted by: @HORCRUX21

It is very interesting concept and gripping story. I am very eager to explore more in your version.Funny part I am from dehradun so it gives me more reason to read this fiction😀

Thank you for reading dear and if I need any info in Dehradun I know now who to reach out to 😉

Originally posted by: atikna

As I read this... I felt like I was with little Rohit and little Sonakshi ... Seeing them with my mind's eye ...

Beautifully written .. two small kids ..this is an awesome way to start ... We connect with them from their childhood

I felt sorry for Rohit that his mom was leaving him when she had promised him

I was laughing along with Sonakshi for that ice cream prank ...

Loved it Mandy ...please continue

How many chapters are there in this story ?

Thanks Anki 🤗 The first chapter is the foundation for my story and it was important that readers connect with 5 year old Ronakshi. Not sure if I was successful but glad u liked it dear 😊 Yes Veena is not able to give time to Rohit but she is helpless too dear. U will surely get to see things through her eyes sometime soon. Approximately there are 12-14 chapters.

Originally posted by: IFLove

This was such a cute one, Mandy 😘

I was totally in awww mode when Rohit was being a sad baby and couldn't stop smiling reading about Sona's masti😂 They r so adorable!!

Rohit's stupid logics are so cute😂 and Sona's no non sense attitude is chummeshwari😙😂

I m so eager to see how these two grow up to keep that promise❤️

Veena seems to be a strong lady...woman handling a construction business is really commendable👏

Love Sona and chachi's bond. (I'd prefer calling her chachi rather than suman to avoid confusion). Just one request, please give Sona some other nickname...when chachi calls her baccha, I remember siyappa aunty's naagin eyes and her over grown bacha raima🤣

Btw narenika se itni nafrat, story shuru hone se pehle hi maar diya bechare ko🤣

Thanks Anu 🤗 Here there is a swap of personalities and not just profession. Rohit is a simple sweet guy who belongs to the glamour industry and Sona is a practical no nonsense cardio surgeon 😆 U will probably like her more in the upcoming updates if u liked her attitude now. Veena is a strong lady and she single handedly runs Sippy Enterprises which is no ordinary feat. About Suman being her chachi, Suman's persona matched chachi's yaar and not the character I had in mind for Sona's mom. That is why I made her chachi Pari and Pulki will make an appearance but here they r Sona's cousins. Ajith will be Rohit's cousin and best friend. So he is Akash and Deepa's son here 😆 Raima is an overgrown bachcha here and u will see how 🤣 She is no obstacle here however but she plays an instrumental role in bringing Ronakshi together 😆 But she is that terrifying ex any guy dreads of but in a hilarious manner 🤣 Kya kare? Ab saare log Narenika se itne pyaar jo karte hai 😆

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

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Originally posted by: Arpita05

Very interesting concept..loved it specially because you started the story from their childhood.Curious to know how Sona will keep the promise she made to Rohit.

Please update the next part soon.And thanks for the PM.

Sona will not only keep up her promise of fulfilling his third wish but she will also fulfill Rohit's first wish and u will see how 😳 Thanks for reading dear 🤗

Originally posted by: roshni_az

Wohhhoooo what a start mandyyy😘😘

I just luved the fact how you just made a role reversal for Rohit and Sona.. I mean seeing a complete different couple here (well not a couple till now)..

You nailed it with the description of their childhood.. That unspoken friendship between these two little innocent souls was like awww ❤😘

I luved how you kept Veena and Suman completely different from the show in your world of imagination. Looking forward to read more about them😇

Lastly as you mentioned it was a manan story first I did find some resemblance like shooting star rockstar niyonika manik's relation nandini's childhood.. So for me it's double bonanza😆 Reading one story about two couples in my favourite reel couples list

Good work babes. Your writing is really commendable 👏

Rosh the role reversal will be more prominent when they grow up as well 😉 I enjoyed writing their childhood part and I am glad u liked it. I guess it was more suitable for MaNan but even there the characters were different. Nyonika there was a nice woman actually and Manik was never a jerk like he was in the show. Nandini too wasn't a meek character and trust me I had a lot of fun writing on this Nandini and imagining her to be the kickass character which she wasn't in the show (this is not to say I didn't like Nandini in the show. I did but here in my FF there was a role reversal with MaNan too). For some reason I cannot write a story which is an extension to the show or a diversion to an ongoing track. I like writing my stories and imagining these characters in them. Not sure if readers like it though.

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Thanks Sarcy 🤗 U will know who is this new girl (spoiler - its not Raima for sure 🤣) about Sona, this phase is momentary 😉 the story has a happy ending promise!

For sure, it's not Raima. 😆 If it was Raima, I wouldn't be curious. 🤣