Tere Bin Saans Bhi Ab... Ajnaabi Si Hain- Ronakshi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: basket_101

This was so beautifully written! The angst was portrayed in a realistic manner as well, which I truly enjoyed.

This is the first question I'd ask if I were in Sona's shoes tbh - What if?

She's seen the extent of his love/guilt for Raima, so it's only natural for her to raise this very simple, yet such a crucial question.

You've done it so well, great job really!

Thank you so much 🤗I honestly would too! It’s so important for her to ask him that before committing to anything! She needs to put aside her feelings and think realistically. I really hope she doesn’t get carried away in excitement and become heartbroken again! Anyway thanks again! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

Wow this piece is so sensible n heartbreaking too. You hv produced a gem...This was wonderful. This indeed is necessary for Rohit to clear the past mess n then move on or else everything will be sp complicated again. You handled the subject and incident so maturely and sensibly. The intimacy between these two their hug, i could feel it. And the last para was amazing. Rohit is such a pure soul so as Sona but have to thru so much due to situation.

That was a good one, although I don’t want to see them go through this. Don’t know what CVs are going to do with Rohit! But you have written it so well that I kind of got emotional reading it. 😊👏 Thanks

Aparna

So perfectly written! I can only hope the show can match up!

ur stories nvr fails to bring out some emotions frm within👏 fabulous writer u r😛🤗

heart breaking 💔

This one broke my heart but it also one of the neatest works I've had the pleasure to read.. 👏

Originally posted by: asmitasb

Wow this piece is so sensible n heartbreaking too. You hv produced a gem...This was wonderful. This indeed is necessary for Rohit to clear the past mess n then move on or else everything will be sp complicated again. You handled the subject and incident so maturely and sensibly. The intimacy between these two their hug, i could feel it. And the last para was amazing. Rohit is such a pure soul so as Sona but have to thru so much due to situation.

Thank you so much 🤗 Yes, I really hope the upcoming track is well thought out. It will make all the difference in terms of how Ronakshi and their relationship is going forward. I really felt their pain while writing this, I’m glad it came across! I agree that neither of them deserve this! I love both of them so much and I hope the writers do justice! Thanks again for the lovely comment!

Originally posted by: apinbox

That was a good one, although I don’t want to see them go through this. Don’t know what CVs are going to do with Rohit! But you have written it so well that I kind of got emotional reading it. 😊👏 Thanks

Aparna

Thanks Aparna! Yes, it will be painful to watch them go through this and I hope the writers have something real, mature and unique planned! Honestly, I felt emotional writing it so I’m glad you felt it too! Thanks for enjoying my work!

Originally posted by: dancedanceRR

So perfectly written! I can only hope the show can match up!

Thank you so much! I really hope the writers do a good job on this track! It will decide whether or not I continue watching! I don’t want to have to quit cuz after so long I fell for a show and a couple! The Ronakshi magic is impossible to ignore!