Ronakshi story - Good if it shapes in this way ( Part-3 updated)

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I would like to write my thoughts on how the story should shape from now. This is my first story. Sorry for my Hindi. Please correct me if am wrong.

After visarjan and hungama, Sippys are having a small dinner in Rastogi's house. Rohit couldn't leave Sonakshi for a minute. He was following her where ever she goes and was repeating what ever she does. If she is talking to guests, he accompanies her and talks as if he knows the guests.

KPK's director: Thank God! Everything ended on a good note. See Parvathi ji, as I said earlier, you will be our Parvathi always. Please come to shoot from day after tomorrow.

Sona: Thank you for your support and good wishes. Why is it day after tomorrow. I can come from tomorrow.

Netraji: Sona, I have asked them to postpone your shoot so that you can take rest for a day, relax and to come out of the drama happening since a week. Dr. Rohit!!!

Sona: Surgeon hai netra ji!

Rohit: It's ok Sonakshi, ek hi baat hai, boliye netraji, kya karna h?

Netraji: Arey wah, itna improvement, waise bhi Dr. Rohit, Mera Matlab hai ki Dr. Surgeon Rohit, why don't you do one thing? If you are free, Can you take Sona for a lunch or dinner? You can relax too as you were with Sona all the day, itna sab kuch hua...

Rohit feels very happy and stops Netraji before she speaks something

Rohit: Yes Netraji, I was looking for the opportunity to ask Sonakshi for a dinner. You made it easy, thank you so much!

Netraji and everybody looking at Rohit with a teasing smile and then

Rohit: Mera Matlab h ki, itna sabkuch hone ke baad, to forget everything, ek day out hona chahiye na.

Netraji: Kya, dinner se day out ho gayi!! Ok whatever!!

Rohit smiles in a blushing way

Sona: Netraji, please have your dinner and I will join you in a moment. It's getting late

Sona then joins Sippys who were sitting in her bedroom and checking all her fans gifts. Rohit follows her.

Sona: You people are here, please go and have dinner and I will join you people.

Rohan: Thank God you came Sonakshi, I was waiting to talk to Rohit, he is not leaving you for a moment.

Small silence in the room and everybody started to smile and wink among themselves.

Rohit: Areyy, I was helping Sonakshi.

Ajit: Help Karo Bhai, who stopped you, ek baar Hume bhi dekh leta?

YK: Abhi hi ye haal h toh, pata nahi Shaadi ke baad Kya hoga!

Badi Mama: Chup Karo sab log!! Rohit beta, I am feeling very happy tumhe is tarah dekh Kar, aisi hi rehna. God bless you both!!

Sona: I should thank you everybody for supporting me and being with my family in this tough time.

Nishi Bua: Nahi Sonakshi, We should thank you and more than that, Sorry for misunderstanding you and talking to you in a rude manner. I think no one can do what you did for my Pooja. Thank you is a very small word.

Sona stops Nishi: please please bas kariye, I can see myself in Pooja, I know how it feels. Glad that I could help her. Please aap sab log, ye sab bhool jaayiye and go and have dinner.

Nishi Bua hugs Sona. Every body liked the way how Sona talked.

Pooja joins the hug and says

Pooja: Bhabhi, Thank you so much, I am so happy that you are going to be my Bhabhi!! I will be on your side from now!!

Rohit: Pooji, what!! You are my sister!!

Pooja: Ab se, am bhabhi's sister-in-law. Who are you Rohit?

Rohit holds her ear and says 'ab bol'!!!

Pooja: Abhi bhi, who are you Rohit!

Sona's inner thoughts: Rohit is behaving as if he is going to marry me and smiles.

Sona: Bas Rohit, It's getting late. Please have dinner and you people should go to Malabar hills from Goregoan.

Rohit: Sonakshi, why don't you shift to Malabar hills, I can help you in searching for a house.

All started to smile again!!

Ajit: Bhai, itni bhi kya jaldi h, waise bhi Sonakshi ji will be coming to our house anyways hamesha keliye.

Rohit liked that line. Among these conversations, Rohit forgot that his Sona is fake GF.

Suman: Aap sab log yaha, please have dinner! Sona tum bhi aajao.

Sona: Maa, main change karke aati Hoon, I will join in couple of minutes.

Everybody starts leaving the room and Pulki who was there during the entire conversation whispers in his mom's ear

Pulki: Maa, aap yaha hona chahiye tha, di ki kitni taaref ho rahi thi. You don't believe Nishi aunty was apologizing to di.

Suman was elated as if she has done everything.

Suman to Pulki: Your sister deeds are like that. Bappa ka shukriya h, Sippys ne sab kuch clear Kiya media ke saamne. Pata nahi Kya ho jaati!

Rohit was still with Sona and she couldn't ask Rohit to leave the room.

Veena comes and sees Rohit.

Veena: Rohit Chalo. She haa to change it seems.

Rohit: oh I am sorry, I will wait outside.


How is it? Please provide your thoughts on this!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it.. Hoping that story follows this way..

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love this!!!! Continue🤗

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So cute!!! Rohit like a lovestruck puppy is so adorable... i am imagining him to be with the expressions how he was after he dropped her home in yesterday’s episode. Nice one!

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Awww this is so pure just like the Friday episode. Please please continue!❤️

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Loved it ❤️ do continue soon

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Part -2

Sona comes out in casuals and Rohit as usual looks at her in awww.

Tanya: Sonakshi is so beautiful. I dont understand how she looks beautiful in whatever she wears.

Netraji and KPK crew thanks Sona for the dinner and leaves as they should start the shoot early morning.

Sona joins Sippys...

Sona: You people finished eating very soon. Muniya, desserts leke aana.

Pulki: Di, they didnt eat yet.

Sona: What?? but Why?

Pooja: Because Rohit wants to have dinner with you and we all would like to have dinner with you both.

Sona: You people should have started, I was about to join. Anyways, it is so sweet of you. Chalo phir, shuru karte hai!!!

Pooja, Nishi, Veena and Tanya are talking to Sona. Suman is serving food to everyone. Rohit is with Sippy boys gang. He is neither listening to the boy's conversation nor having his food.He is looking at Sona for all the time. Sippys and Rastogis completed their dinner. While having their desserts,

Pooja: Bhabhi, the way you handled Mathre's issue, no matter what happened you sticked to your decision. The way you walked out of our house with police, you were like "I did nothing wrong, why should I worry". Even I felt like "I did nothing wrong, why should I panic and whom should I fear"? This made me to talk to media yesterday. You inspired me a lot bhabhi, Thank you so much. I am feeling much better and relaxed now. This is all because of you.

Sona just kept her hand over pooja's and does not want to extend the discussion and make it emotional. To make it funny, she said

Sona: Good to hear that Sonakshi Rastogi can inspire somebody. Till now, I heard that only Pravathi can inspire others.

Everybody starts laughing.

Sona: And you should learn from your bhai too, Pooja. He supported me a lot during that entire drama. I cannot mention in words how much it meant to me during that tough time. He risked his life too. My mom and Rohit did not believe that I could be involved in such a case. This is what trust and belief is. Thank you mama for believing me. And thank you Rohit for everything.

Rohit and Sona are looking at each other and lost in their thoughts. Even Suman has become emotional. Suman could observe that her daughter likes Rohit.

Ajit: Pooja, why did you do this?

Pooja: What did I do?

Ajit: You are the one who started this conversation and you should be the one who needs to end it.

Still, Ronakshi are looking at each other.

Pooja: Ok ok, As I am feeling better now, lets party tomorrow. But as usual not at our home, this time lets plan outside.

Everybody shouts "yayyyy".

Pooja: Bhabhi, please join us tomorrow.

Rohit: How is it possible? Sonakshi is busy tomorrow.

Sona: Am not busy Mr.Surgeon.

Rohit: I meant that Sonakshi has to shoot her scenes for KPK tomorrow.

Ajit: Bhai, I heard Netraji talking to director that they are going to shoot without sonakshi tomorrow.

Rohit is irritated as there are no more bahaana to say.

Rohit: Sonakshi is going out with somebody else, I heard her saying that she will be busy tomorrow.

Pooja: With whom bhabhi??

Rohit: Kitne sawaal pocchte ho!! We are planning to go out together.

Sonakshi doesn't want to spend a day with Rohit because spending a day with him brings him more closer. As per deal with Rohit, they will be breaking up in less than 2 weeks. She cannot express her feelings first as she knows already that he didn't come out of Raima yet. She is not aware of Rohit's feelings too. She can feel that he is treating in a different way since yesterday but cannot judge as it can be a concern for the sacrifice what she did to his family.

Sona: Excuse Me!! Not 'we'!! He is planning.

Rohit: Ek hi baat hai Sona!!

Every body at a time: Awwww.. "Sona".

Sona: Guys, am going to join you tomorrow.

Rohit: What about my plan then Sonakshi?

Everybody:ohhuuuuu.. 'Sona', Not sonakshi.

Sona: You can join us Rohit. No problem.

Rohit: What the hell??

Naren: Chalo, lets leave. We are getting late. Thank you Sonakshi for your warm welcome. We will meet tomorrow.

Rohit: Sonakshi, why dont you do one thing? Get three- four pairs of your clothes and come with us. Anyhow, you are going to come tomorrow. Ravi bhayya ko kyun pareshaan karna h.. he has to drive from Goregoan to Malabar hills.

Everybody started to smile among themselves.

Ajit: Bhai, itne pairs kyu?

Rohit: Wo ab zyada zaroori h kya?? I mean if she gets late tomorrow, she can stay with us and can leave to her set the next day early morning. Extra clothes hua toh kya problem h?

Sona: Rohit, tum bhi na!!! I haven't talked to my mom, pari and pulki after this incident. I would like to spend some time with my family. Anyhow, am coming tomorrow.

Rohit doesn't want to leave that place. He is searching for some reasons to talk to Sonakshi.

(Just think friday's episode)

Akash chacha: Rohit beta, em kaam kar lo. Tum yahi ruk jaav. Kal Sonakshi ke saath aa jaana.

With a great difficulty, Rohit left Sonakshi for that day.

Hope you all like it. Please ignore my grammar and Hindi.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awwwwww!!! Rohit is so cute!!! Love the sippy- rushtogi bonding!!!❤️ Waiting for next. Thanks for the quick update!

Edited by KhayalonKiMalik - 6 years ago
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Wowwwww awesome

I can totally imagine Rohit doing such things and hoping ki in near future Rohit doing such things in upcoming episodes.

Waiting for next update

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Nice update

Love it

Continue soon

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