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AnuGun FS- Chance


Part 1- Let’s Date


Gungun with her family had come over to Anubhav’s place for dinner. In these few days Anubhav and Gungun had realised the kind of expectations their families had on their wedding.


Gungun had bought one of her bag to saraswati niwas since she knew she would get too busy to pack in next few weeks.


“Anu, Gungun ki help kardo.” Bade papa requested


“Ji bade papa”


Anubhav and Gungun together took her bag up to soon to be their room. He had already made space for her as instructed the day before.


Gungun opened the cupboard and started putting her clothes there while Anubhav sat on the bed wondering how he could be helpful.


“Hum dono ke kapde aise saath dekhke ab lag rha hai ki hamari shadi ho rai hai.” She spoke slightly panicked


“Darr lag rha hai?”


“Thoda sa. Tumhe nai lag rha?”


“Thoda sa”


“Anubhav.. umm kuch nai”


“Kya kehna chahti ho? Bata do?”


“I don’t know how to say this but muje lag rha hai hum hamari family ko cheat kar rahe hai . They are so happy!” She almost chocked


“Ye toh hume pehle se pata tha na? Toh ab Kya badal gaya hai?”


“Pata nai.”


“You want to give this a chance you mean?”


“Maybe. Agar nai jama toh 1 saal wali deal toh hai hi.”


“Hmm”


“Umm.. I’m sorry I forgot tum Akriti se….”


“Absolutely not. Pyaar nai karta”


“Toh?“


“Toh” he looked at her with blank expressions


“Tum idiot ho kya? I’m asking if we can date?”


“Date? Hum toh shadi kar rahe hai.”


“Oo sanskar ke putle jitne time mai tumhari fiancé hoon, tab tak toh date kar sakte haina? Ek dusre ko jaan sakte hai.” She spoke frustrated with the scientist of the year


“Okay.” He simply agreed


“Aur kuch nai kehna tumhe?”


“Nai”


“I’m an idiot you know”


“I know” he smirked


Gungun threw her pair of jeans on him frustrated.


“Tumhara room hai kapde tum hi rakho.” She walked out angrily


Anubhav giggled first time in few years. It was so much fun to tease Papa ki Pari. He had wanted to say the same thing to her since a bit but could not gather the guts to tell her. Somehow getting it out of her own mouth put him in a better situation and he loved it.



Gungun avoided him the whole time did not even look at him before leaving. Anubhav instead of being irritated was just amused with the turn of events.


Around 11PM, Gungun heard her phone ring. It was ‘crazy chashmish’. She threw the phone on the bed first and then quickly picked it up since she knew chahmish won’t call again.


“Kya hai?”


“Hello. Hi. How are you? Kuch bhi bol sakti thi tum. Kya hai kya hota hai?”


“Muje nai kehna innmein se kuch ok?”


“Fine. Kaisi ho?”


“What do you mean kaisi hoon? Pehle tum aise no reactions ke saath muje frustrate karte ho phir call karke puchte ho how am I?”


“I thought hum date kar rhe hai. Ek dusre ko jaane ke liye. Tumhe kuch problem hai toh batao na.”


“Hum date kar rahe hai?”


“Okay toh kaha tha.”


“Okay? Okay? Okay that’s it? Maine kitna kuch kaha aur tumne kaha okay!” She almost shouted


“Acha fine. I agree with your thoughts agar hamari families ko sach mein lagta hai hum made for each other hai so let’s give it a chance. Fine now?”


“Thank you. Meherbani aapki meri zindagi mein clarity layi aapne.” She rolled her eyes


“Kya kar rai ho?”


“Irritate ho rai thi tumpe. Tumne mera pura mood kharab kar diya pata hai?” She complained


“Really? I didn’t know mai tumhe itna affect karta hoon.” He spoke as casually as possible


“Tum kya kar rahe ho?”


“Jo kapde rakhne ka zimma tum muje de gai thi wahi kar raha hoon. Seriously shadi ke pehle tum mujse apne kapde set karwa rai ho baad mein toh jaan hi lelogi.”


“Aur tum kar rahe ho? Tum meri baatein kabse manne lag gaye?”


“Kya karu? Sone ki jagah chaiye muje.” He spoke after a pause


“Aww tum mere kapde set kar rahe ho?”


“Shut up! Ye tumhe karna tha.”


“Kar leti agar tum mera mood spoil nai karte.”


“Whatever”


“Waise hum shadi ke baad kahaan ghumne jayenge?”


“Tumhe mere saath honeymoon pe jana hai?”


“Nai toh Ranvijay ke saath jau? Tum itne annoying kyu ho? There needs to be something I have to look forward to.” She spoke irritated


“And that’s honeymoon?”


“Of course. Hum ghumenge, nayi jagah aur bahut fun karenge.”


“Sure bahut fun karenge.” He imitated her


“Don’t do that.”


“Why not? Ye tumhare kapde khatam hi nai hote.”


“Have a good night Mr. Scientist.” She giggled and cut the phone.



Anubhav sighed and looked at his phone. A smile appeared naturally to him and he continued setting their cupboard.


Gungun found herself giggling imagining ‘chant chasmish’ irritatedly setting up her clothes. She opened her gallery to see a picture of them taken by her dad. They did look cute. She smiled looking at the picture and finally could sleep off peacefully.



——-


Hi Guys.

I had written half of this on Sunday. Wanted to post so wrote the remaining today during lunch.


I love reading your comments so keep them coming❤️



Love,

Ani🌸

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️.

Can totally imagine gungun making anubhav do her work and Anubhav irritating Gungun .

Please do update soon!!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice..


Looking forward for next update

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow thats really cute.Gungun making Anu do all these things and watching this would be so much fun .hope creatives visit forum and get some ideas.She can ask him to carry his purse too 🤣and he will do it i think. looking forward to next update please tag me thanks

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So cuteee!!! AnuGun's giggles and banter!!🤭 I could literally imagine this scenario in my mind... Very well written dear! I wish we could see such sweet scenes in the show too. Loved it!!❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

AnuGun FS- Chance


Part 1- Let’s Date


Gungun with her family had come over to Anubhav’s place for dinner. In these few days Anubhav and Gungun had realised the kind of expectations their families had on their wedding.


Gungun had bought one of her bag to saraswati niwas since she knew she would get too busy to pack in next few weeks.


“Anu, Gungun ki help kardo.” Bade papa requested


“Ji bade papa”


Anubhav and Gungun together took her bag up to soon to be their room. He had already made space for her as instructed the day before.


Gungun opened the cupboard and started putting her clothes there while Anubhav sat on the bed wondering how he could be helpful.


“Hum dono ke kapde aise saath dekhke ab lag rha hai ki hamari shadi ho rai hai.” She spoke slightly panicked


“Darr lag rha hai?”


“Thoda sa. Tumhe nai lag rha?”


“Thoda sa”


“Anubhav.. umm kuch nai”


“Kya kehna chahti ho? Bata do?”


“I don’t know how to say this but muje lag rha hai hum hamari family ko cheat kar rahe hai . They are so happy!” She almost chocked


“Ye toh hume pehle se pata tha na? Toh ab Kya badal gaya hai?”


“Pata nai.”


“You want to give this a chance you mean?”


“Maybe. Agar nai jama toh 1 saal wali deal toh hai hi.”


“Hmm”


“Umm.. I’m sorry I forgot tum Akriti se….”


“Absolutely not. Pyaar nai karta”


“Toh?“


“Toh” he looked at her with blank expressions


“Tum idiot ho kya? I’m asking if we can date?”


“Date? Hum toh shadi kar rahe hai.”


“Oo sanskar ke putle jitne time mai tumhari fiancé hoon, tab tak toh date kar sakte haina? Ek dusre ko jaan sakte hai.” She spoke frustrated with the scientist of the year


“Okay.” He simply agreed


“Aur kuch nai kehna tumhe?”


“Nai”


“I’m an idiot you know”


“I know” he smirked


Gungun threw her pair of jeans on him frustrated.


“Tumhara room hai kapde tum hi rakho.” She walked out angrily


Anubhav giggled first time in few years. It was so much fun to tease Papa ki Pari. He had wanted to say the same thing to her since a bit but could not gather the guts to tell her. Somehow getting it out of her own mouth put him in a better situation and he loved it.



Gungun avoided him the whole time did not even look at him before leaving. Anubhav instead of being irritated was just amused with the turn of events.


Around 11PM, Gungun heard her phone ring. It was ‘crazy chashmish’. She threw the phone on the bed first and then quickly picked it up since she knew chahmish won’t call again.


“Kya hai?”


“Hello. Hi. How are you? Kuch bhi bol sakti thi tum. Kya hai kya hota hai?”


“Muje nai kehna innmein se kuch ok?”


“Fine. Kaisi ho?”


“What do you mean kaisi hoon? Pehle tum aise no reactions ke saath muje frustrate karte ho phir call karke puchte ho how am I?”


“I thought hum date kar rhe hai. Ek dusre ko jaane ke liye. Tumhe kuch problem hai toh batao na.”


“Hum date kar rahe hai?”


“Okay toh kaha tha.”


“Okay? Okay? Okay that’s it? Maine kitna kuch kaha aur tumne kaha okay!” She almost shouted


“Acha fine. I agree with your thoughts agar hamari families ko sach mein lagta hai hum made for each other hai so let’s give it a chance. Fine now?”


“Thank you. Meherbani aapki meri zindagi mein clarity layi aapne.” She rolled her eyes


“Kya kar rai ho?”


“Irritate ho rai thi tumpe. Tumne mera pura mood kharab kar diya pata hai?” She complained


“Really? I didn’t know mai tumhe itna affect karta hoon.” He spoke as casually as possible


“Tum kya kar rahe ho?”


“Jo kapde rakhne ka zimma tum muje de gai thi wahi kar raha hoon. Seriously shadi ke pehle tum mujse apne kapde set karwa rai ho baad mein toh jaan hi lelogi.”


“Aur tum kar rahe ho? Tum meri baatein kabse manne lag gaye?”


“Kya karu? Sone ki jagah chaiye muje.” He spoke after a pause


“Aww tum mere kapde set kar rahe ho?”


“Shut up! Ye tumhe karna tha.”


“Kar leti agar tum mera mood spoil nai karte.”


“Whatever”


“Waise hum shadi ke baad kahaan ghumne jayenge?”


“Tumhe mere saath honeymoon pe jana hai?”


“Nai toh Ranvijay ke saath jau? Tum itne annoying kyu ho? There needs to be something I have to look forward to.” She spoke irritated


“And that’s honeymoon?”


“Of course. Hum ghumenge, nayi jagah aur bahut fun karenge.”


“Sure bahut fun karenge.” He imitated her


“Don’t do that.”


“Why not? Ye tumhare kapde khatam hi nai hote.”


“Have a good night Mr. Scientist.” She giggled and cut the phone.



Anubhav sighed and looked at his phone. A smile appeared naturally to him and he continued setting their cupboard.


Gungun found herself giggling imagining ‘chant chasmish’ irritatedly setting up her clothes. She opened her gallery to see a picture of them taken by her dad. They did look cute. She smiled looking at the picture and finally could sleep off peacefully.



——-


Hi Guys.

I had written half of this on Sunday. Wanted to post so wrote the remaining today during lunch.


I love reading your comments so keep them coming❤️



Love,

Ani🌸

wow it was really very cute❤️
please continue!!!!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Really looking forward to it ! Update soon!🌿🌸

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Awwwwwww this is so cute! ❤️ I can literally imagine them speaking these exact lines! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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really adorable story

loll anubhav already start to follow gungun order🤣

their convo was really cute❤️

plz continue soon

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Hey!!

please update the next shot of this story....

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