KaYuNa OS : Ray of hope!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just got fed up with all drama and drama in show. So coming up with this thought how yesterday's scene where electricity goess off could have turned differently.

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Kali came back in room and put Naina in craddle. She wanted Naina to attach more with her biological parents more unknowing that destiny has different plan for her. She put blanket on Naina and ask her to sleep. But Naina was in playful mood today. She slided her blanket with her jumping legs and Kali faked anger on her. Cute moment it was!
Both mother daughter smiled at a moment. But their smile was for a while. Electricity went off and Naina got scared of dark. She started crying. "Nothing happened Naina" Kali tried to calm her down. Kali went near window and opened it up. Moon light sparkled in room and Naina stopped crying. Kali smiled.

Next moment, there was knock on door. Kali turned and spot Yug was there. "Yug aap" Kali asked. "Wo light chali gayi hain na. Naina so nahi paayegi" Yug said depicting his concern for Naina's sleep and walking in room. "Main candles jalane hi wali thi" Kali said opening up drawer. Yug went near craddle and checked Naina. She was happy to see her papa there. Dimpled smile spread on Yug's face watching his daughtet smiling. Kali by that time managed to get candles and match box. Yug turned to Kali to find she is struggling to hold candle and light match stick at same time. "I will help you" Yug said taking candles from her hand. Kali light up match stick and then lighten up candle. Yug saw Kali's glowing face in dimmed candle light. "She still looks innocent just like Naina" he thought in his mind. Kali looked at Yug and felt presence love for her in his eyes. They both kept staring at each other trying to find their lost love in each other's eyes. That tiny light in between them was trying to wipe out all dark spaces they had between them. Their gaze continued.

Naina saw them together and screamed with a joy. Both came back to senses realizing still they hold that spark between them. Kali hesitantly went near craddle. Yug fixed up candle on table. "So jao Naina" Kali pleaded her again. "Bahut shararati hain" Yug said. "Haan bilkul apne papa pe gayi hain" Kali said quickly. Yug smiled. Kali realized she is getting friendly with Yug again.

"Lagata isse garmi lag rahi hain. Isliye so nahi rahi hain" Yug said and walked near craddle. Yug picked up old news paper and sat on bed next to Kali near craddle. He used his hand made fan so that his daughter can sleep peacefully. Kali smiled at all care Yug has for Naina.
"Chandaniya chup jaana re,
Chan bhar ko luk jaana re.
Nindiya aakhon main aayi
Bitiya meri so jaaye"

Kali started singing lullaby in her melodious voice. "Her voice still has that purity which made me mad for her" Yug thought. Yug kept looking at Kali while Kali admired Naina slowly drifting to sleep. "So gayi" Kali said and Yug realized how spellbound he got over her voice. That he didnt realize Naina has slept. Kali looked at Yug. There was something still between them and both felt it. They wished if situation would have been different today. They wished they could have given moments of parenthood to Naina together. They wished if they could be with each other forever. Just their thought ended and whole room was lightened up again killing all darkness around them.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Darshu new ff.
Very good
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Shibu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Beautiful...

Wow Darshu new ff.

Very good


Thanks Rupa.. Its not FF.. Its OS means one shot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful 👏👏👏
Its phenomenal. I am loving this.
Please continue and make a TS or FF if you can 👍🏼

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