KaYu FF - Jab we met!! Part 20 page 19 - And it pains! - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks all for reading liking and commenting... I am happy atleast some part of my story CVs are picking from my FF. I would not this whole FF onscreen..
But lets see who makes it better me or CVs..😉
As in serial they have shown vishwad backstabbing kali and here i have daadi... want to see how they will make kali re-enter...
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Part 11
Back in hotel, Balraj was all upset on Tina. "This all mess is because of you. Who ask you to sing that song? Now these people are running behind us to return their money and that too double in amount." Balraj said. "I am not only responsible, you are equally culprit in this. I was telling you to wait till I have list of song. But you pushed me to stage" Tina replied angrily. "Ohh now you dont want to accept your mistake as well. Are you happy singing bhajan there. Aa gaye tumhari ramji!" Balraj replied sarcastically.

Yug arrived at hotel and inquired for Tina's room no. "Sorry sir, you cant meet her without appointment. We have been given strict instruction" receptionist replied. "See its very urgent. I need to meet her anyhow" Yug was trying to convince. "Sorry sir, we cant help"
he replied.

"Enough! I had enough of your drama since morning. My head is spinning. I will have some fresh air than watching your face" Tina said and left room angrily banging door on Balraj's face. She was walking over angrily near reception area when she bumped on Yug. She was about to fall down when Yug held her at her waist and she landed in Yug's arms. Her hairs covered her face initially but blow of wind flew and finally his sita was in front of him. He kept looking at her with mix of emotions happy, surprised, dazed! He was still dazed when he made her to stand straight. "Kali..." his emotions were all choked up. Tears of happiness started flowing through his eyes looking at her alive in front of him. All he could do
is embrace her tightly in his arms "Where were you Kali? Why did you stay away from me for so many days? Did you know what I have been through. I cant believe that you are back!" Yug's happiness was flowing. But she started feeling suffocated in his arms. She gathered all her power and pushed him hard away from her. "Hey mister! Whats this nonsense? Have you thought that I am public property so anyone can come and pull in his arms? One tight slap from me and you will be all right" Tina said angrily. "Kali didnt you recognize me! I am..." Yug was trying to explain when hotel manager came "What happened mam?". Tina was still furious "Dont know who this jerk is? Trying to misbehave with me." she complained. Crowd start going upset on Yug but Yug tried to justify, "See this is our personal matter. She knows me." Tina looked at him confusingly "Ohh Hello, I dont know who you are?" She said and Yug stood there completely is disbelief. Tina did not stop there. She complained to hotel manager "What kind of treatment you give to your customer. He is troubling me and you are not taking any action on him even". Hotel staff started going aggressive on Yug. Manager called up security to throw him out of hotel for troubling their customer. 2-3 security guard held Yug and tried to throw him out. Yug was trying all his way hard to get near to his Kali. "Sorry mam, we will make sure he wont trouble you again" manager assured her. Tina decided to get back in her room. Security guards dragged Yug and threw him out of hotel closing door on his face. Yug was disappointed to see doors which could take him near to his Kali are closing down.

At Chaudhary mansion, Vishwa arrived. Leela was surprised to see him there. She asked Vishwa purpose of his visit. Vishwa told her that he knows solution for Gauri Yug horoscope not matching issue. Leela was surprised. Vishwa told her after 2 days they need to perform pooja which will remove all troubles from Yug and Gauri's horoscope. Leela was happy hearing this. Vishwa asked her to inform Yug about same. He will himself do pooja to make sure eeverything goes smooth. Vishwa left. Gauri met him outside the house. "Thank you papa doing this for me. I know it must be difficult for you to tell lie about this pooja" Gauri said trying
to win symapathy of Vishwa. "Dont ever think I am doing this for you. I am doing all this for Kali's sake. I dont want your kid should be treated in same way I treated Kali for so long. She deserved my love all her life but I made it too late. I dont want Yug to do same thing in his hatred for you. There is no relation between us" Vishwa made it quiet clear. But that doesnt make any difference to Gauri as her way to get married to Yug was about to clear.

Back in his office, Yug was not quiet. "Why she didnt recognize me?", "Has she lost her memory?", "Why she is claiming that she is Tina?" "Is she really Tina?" "But why her presence always makes me feel she is my Kali?" there were so many questions and there was no answer to them. "I need to meet her again" he thought. "Yug" Rohit came inside. "This is all information about that girl Tina. She is professional singer started her career some 4-5 years back. She stays with her mother in Mumbai and still single. Her all events are managed by her manager Balraj. He is very difficult to handle. If he doesn't allow no one can meet her. He only organizes all events for her. He has only one weakness; money! There were here too perform in bachelor's party. But I heard they are in trouble right now. That politician is haunting them like mad to get his money back from them. Thats what I had to share. But whats going in your mind? Why do you need all this?" Rohit asked. "I will surely let you know Rohit. But first I need to find answer of my questions" Yug replied. "Do you have Balraj's no?" Yug asked and Rohit handed over him same.

Another plan was cooking in Yug's mind. He called up Mr. Kashyap a very known owner of music company from his contacts. "Hello Mr. Kashyap, Yug here" "Hey Yug my boy, how are you?" Mr. Kashyap asked. "I am good sir. Few days back you told me that you were looking out for some new voice to launch your album. Actually I knew one singer. She is really good." Yug tried to promote her. "Sorry Yug, our hunt is over. We have finalized almost 4-5 singers who are going to sing for this album" Mr. Kashyap replied. "Sir please. You listen to her once and then decide. She is really good" Yug requested again. "Ok Yug. Just because you are saying I am giving her chance. I have time tomorrow. Can we meet?" Mr. Kashyap asked. "Its ok sir, we will meet tomorrow" Yug assured,. Next thing he did is called up Balraj. "Hello Mr. Balraj" Yug said. "Who is this?" Balraj asked. "This is Yug Chaudhary. You dont know me probably but I know you. Actually I called you up regarding one business deal. Are you interested?" Yug asked. Balraj was excited hearing new opportunity knocking door. "Yes sure" Balraj confirmed. Yug revealed to him about Mr. Kashyap album launch and how can he give opportunity to Tina in it. Being greedy in his nature Balraj told Yug that Tina wont sing unless some advance is given. Yug promised him that he will talk to Mr. Kashyap and arrange advanced amount. "Mr. Kashyap want to hear her. Can we meet tomorrow?" Yug put up the meeting plan. Balraj confirmed the meeting and Yug was happy again.

In the night, Leela was worried how to tell Yug about this pooja. She knew if he ever comes to know he will come up with some other excuse to avoid marriage. She was all worried when Yug entered the house. His action was surprising to everyone. He came home today without drinking and that shocked everyone. "Maaji doesnt look Yug different today? I mean he was there for breakfast. Now he has entered in his senses, like someone has done magic on him"
Chulbuli buzzed. Leela was also equally surprised that what has changed in his life that he is behaving properly.

Next morning, Leela sneaked into Yug's room to inform him about pooja. She noticed him humming some tune and realized he is in good mood. "Yug yesterday Jha babu came to talk about Pooja for your and Gauri..." Leela was about to finish but Yug interrupted. "How many pooja you want me to perform? I have important work and don't have time for this useless rituals" Yug replied irritatingly. Leela felt its better not to discuss with him right now spoiling his good mood again. Yug got ready and as usual left early.




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hai Darsha.
So Kali did not realize yug. Poor boy.
It's to be seen how yug manages to convince Tina that she is his Kali amidst all the villains. Viswa is no good here also. Always succumbs to Gauri wishes .
Keep writing dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Beautiful...

Hai Darsha.

So Kali did not realize yug. Poor boy.
It's to be seen how yug manages to convince Tina that she is his Kali amidst all the villains. Viswa is no good here also. Always succumbs to Gauri wishes .
Keep writing dear.


Why girl should have all pain... some time let male lead also suffer.. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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darshu...🤗
nice part yaaar,,,
so yug fir se acha boy ban gaya... drinking chod dhii...
one doubt i had is, u hve tkn only 1 mnth leap naa but fir how come rohit said tht tina started her career some 4-5 years back...

plzz update the next prt soon dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Bholi_Bhaali

darshu...🤗

nice part yaaar,,,
so yug fir se acha boy ban gaya... drinking chod dhii...
one doubt i had is, u hve tkn only 1 mnth leap naa but fir how come rohit said tht tina started her career some 4-5 years back...

plzz update the next prt soon dear...


thanks dear and what u have asked is suspense ..😆 keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks shibu
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thx for reading comments and likes.. posting next part
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Part 12

At hotel room, Tina was upset. "I dont want to meet anyone" she shouted. "See this all mess is done by you. Now its nice opportunity for us to earn money and get out of that politician's trap. He has made our life hell. We are not able to move out of this hotel even. How we can go back to Mumbai?" Balraj replied in harsh tone. "Why I need to perform again to come out

of this situation? They asked you to pay re-pay advanced amount. But you said you have spent all that amount. Thats why they are threatening us to re-pay double of amount. So its not my mistake, its yours!" Tina replied. Balraj was about to argue more when he received call from Yug. "Mr. Balraj we are here in dining area of your hotel. Where are you?" Yug asked. "Yes, we are coming down" Balraj replied. "Look I dont want your drama. Get ready and come down in 5 minutes" he threatened Tina. Balraj left and She was fuming with anger. Her mom tried to make her understand but she was in no mood to listen. "Mom, don't you have doubt on Balraj the way he is handling financial matters. He is not even giving any justification where he has spent all that money. I think he is just using us" she said and her mom was scared that they might get caught. "Tina he is really nice guy. And he is doing this for us only. See its really suffocating in this city. Its better to re-pay amount and leave this place.Dont you want to go back to Mumbai?" her mom asked her. "If yes then please go and meet those people"her mom said and Tina was thoughtful.

Yug and Mr. Kashyap was seated in dining area. Yug's was dying to meet her. Balraj came there and he introduced himself to them. "Where is Tina?" Yug asked searching for her. "She is coming.." Balraj replied. Yug's eyes were searching for her only when he saw coming near to table. Looking at her he was not able to convince himself once she is not his kali. But yet she was so opposite. She came and sat opposite to Yug. His eyes were fixed on her, but she was less bothered to look at him. "Hello young lady!" Mr. Kashyap greeted her and Tina replied with smile. Yug was continuously staring at her but she yet didn't put glance on him even. "Yug told me that you are good singer. So sing something special today. Based on that we can decide further" Mr. Kashyap replied. "Yes, yes! Please sing a nice song" Balraj said and Tina gave him fiery look. "Sorry I cant sing today. I have throat infection" Tina replied absurdly. Balraj was all furious on her drama. "Ohh we were not aware that you are not ok. Else we would have postponed the meeting" Mr. Kahsyap replied calmly. "Can we do it tomorrow?" Mr. Kashyap asked. "Yeah tomorrow is perfectly ok. She will be alright by tomorrow" Balraj assured looking furiously at Tina. "Ok you people can come to my studio tomorrow. It will give us better voice quality test." Mr. Kashyap said and Balraj agreed. Yug being silent spectator was experiencing all this. He noticed tension brewing on her face. She was not happy about something. Balraj and Tina moved away from table and Balraj went mad on Tina. Yug was looking at her continuously but she didn't notice him once throughout this incident. "If you are my Kali, you will come back to me!" Yug thought in mind and saw her approaching near table again. He was all happy, his intuitions were not wrong. She came near table, picked up her mobile phone and went away again without noticing him. Yug was left puzzled.

In the night, Yug was restless in his room. He was not able to get true identity this way by any meaning. He needed more time to identify truth in this matter. "Shall I take help of police in this matter? If I show Kali's pic to them and get it match with Tina. But whats the use if she is denying herself. Why she is not recognizing me. She should come tomorrow to Mr. Kashyap studio. I need to find out her truth." Yug thought. He immediately called up Balraj and asked him about their plan. "Tina is not ready. I told you she wont perform unless advance amount is given", Balraj created fake story to get some money. "You dont worry about it. Just make sure that you both reach there." Yug wanted to see her again anyhow.

Next morning, from office Yug left for Mr. Kashyap studio. He had plan ready to know about her truth. Gauri was leaving no chance behind to get near to Yug. She decided to grab opportunity and meet Yug. But when she came to office she got to know he has left for Mr. Kashyap studio. She decided to reach there and spend time with Yug. Yug reached there and as he wanted Balraj, Tina and her mother were already there. "So Tina are you ready for performance today" Mr. Kashyap asked. Tina with force from her mother said yes. "Ok, which song you would perform" Mr. Kasyap asked. "Same song which she performed in party two days before" Yug buzzed quickly. She looked at him with astonishment. "That song will give better idea of voice quality to Mr. Kashyap" Yug was carefully executing his plan. "I may not remember that song" Tina replied. But Balraj forced that she will sing it. With her much displeasure, she occupied one studio room. All other were waiting outside for her performance. Going back to same zone, she closed her eyes she started singing. Yug was hearing magic of that song all over
again and he was sure she is Kali. No one can have that purity which was their in her voice. A voice which always made him spell bounded.

Gauri was all her way reached to Mr. Kahsyap studio. She got out of the lift and opened up the door and froze for moment hearing that song again "Kaalii..." she stood their in shock.

Tina stopped singing and Yug came out of daze. "Wonderful!" Mr. Kashyap exclaimed and he was already to sign her as new singer in his album. Balraj asked Yug about advanced amount. Yug sorted out same matter with Kashyap and he readily handed over 5 Lakhs cheque to Tina. For Balraj his eyes sparkled looking at such big amount. They all were busy discussing when Yug noticed Gauri approaching towards his direction. He had reason to worry. He never wanted to Tina to face Gauri when he was not aware about truth. He was sure she will make him more difficult for him. Yug put up excuse and immediately came out of studio room. "What are you doing over here? Following me? Dont you have any other work?" Yug said angrily. "Yug who was singing here? It was same song Kali used to sing even her voice sounded so similar" Gauri said in worried tone. "Ohh so you are trying to interfere in my personal matter?" Yug said trying to cover up situation. "I am only getting that song recorded. As it was special for kali I am doing it." Yug bluffed this time. Gauri was still confused. "Now go back home rather than poking nose in my matter." Yug said. "Yug, i thought we can spend some time together" Gauri said trying to get close to him. "Are you leaving quietly or you want to me insult more" Yug said in harsh tone trying to make her loose her grip. Gauri decided to leave. Yug came back to studio and came to know Tina is already gone. "Arey Yaar, This Gauri spoiled all my efforts. I need to find some other way to meet her again" Yug thought. He called up Balraj. "Can we meet today for dinner? Just to celebrate Tina's success" He put up then plan and Balraj was all ready again.

Back in hotel, Tina was getting fresh in washroom. Her mom and Balraj were discussing about today's incident "This Yug Chaudhary is very useful for us. Seems like he is Big
fan of Tina's voice else think who can give such opportunity to unknown person. Seems like he has very good contacts. After all he is son of Chaudhary family from Mithila. we should make use of ihim." Balraj said looking at cheque of 5 Lakhs. Tina came out of washroom and Balraj quickly changed the topic. "Balraj, get that cheque issued and pay amount to politician. It will solve our problem. We can go back to Mumbai atleast" Tina said. "Are you mad to go back to Mumbai now? Wait till the time you finish your recording. This is just signing amount we have got. We are yet to get much more" Balraj exclaimed. "You want to me stay in this horrible city Mithila?" She questioned."From
the day one everything is going in wrong direction. I want to return to Mumbai as soon as possible" Tina continued further. She went away and her mom asked Balraj when he is going to return money to that politician. "Are you mad to loose such big amount. I will tackle those people for few more days till the recording is done. Then we will run away to other city than Mumbai taking all money". He looked greedy.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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finally yug's mission strdted ,to find out the truth...
thank god u stopped tht gauri 🤢from seeing kali unlike cv's who alwys make sure tht gauri gets to know evrything...
am loving the way yug is behaving with tht evil gauri,
i want yug to torture chudail more n more yaar plzz...as shhow mein tho yug will b going to shower hhis so called love on her as she is pregnent with his child naa,,, 😡

as a whole it was nice part yaaar 😛

waiting for next part..z updte it soon...
Edited by Ms.Bholi_Bhaali - 8 years ago

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