New FF: Dil Ke Paas - Charac. n part 1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dil Ke Paas

Characters:

Dev: 25 years old.

Big businessman!

He's known as Rambo Rammy.

Kaajjal: 24 years old.

She's sweet n simple.

Only daughter of her father.

Carebear

Ranvir: Kaajjal's boyfriend.

Mr. Roy: Kaajjal's father.

A small time business man!

Hope u will support me DK fans!!!!

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Chevarra

Edited by Chevi - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gr8 FF start!

Too gud!

Cont. soon!!!!

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Edited by Aveer_123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx Aveer 4 ur comment!

Chapter 1 – Introduction

The scene starts off with Dev in the office.

Dev: Rosy, rosy!

Rosy: Yes sir!

Dev: Rosy please call Mr. Rajesh to my office.

Rosy: Ji sir.

Mr. Rajesh: Hello sir. You wanted to see me.

Dev: Yes, I wanted you to handle today's meeting.

Mr. Rajesh: But why sir?

Dev: I need some time alone, no more questions.

Mr. Rajesh: Yes sir.

Dev left the office for a while and walked to the beach which was just across his office. He sat down on the banks and thought to himself. He was at the right age to marry then why shouldn't he find the right girl to marry. I mean she can't say no to him. I mean look at "me."

Just then he saw Kaajjal walking towards the ice-cream shop. He quickly ran to the shop and he had a good look at her and for some reason he dropped his pen. He bent down to pick his pen up and when he looked up she was no where to be seen.

His heart skipped a beat! He finally found the right person! He skipped off happily.

Meanwhile…

Kaajjal: Hi dad.

Mr. Roy (Mr. R): Hi doll. How was your walk?

Kaajjal: It was great.

She looked for something in the fridge to munch on. She then took a few biscuits up to her room and went onto the internet. She logged on to her e-mail and checked her inbox. It was a reply from her internet friend.

It read:
Hi Carebear,
How was your day? It was really busy in the office and you won't believe it today I saw my life partner! She is so beautiful and she looked so sweet and simple. I'm in love CB. I'm in love! I can't believe it!
From:
Rambo Rammy

She laughed to herself in astonishment!

She replied:
Hi RR,
My day was perfect! You saw your life partner! Well she must be really lucky! You are also lucky as she's beautiful and she's sweet and simple just as you wanted! Oh ya, I forgot to tell you that Ranvir says hi! We're going to the movies tonight so I may not be able to talk to you.
From:
Carebear

She got up and went to change into her jeans and designer top, pink top! She went into the bathroom when Ranvir jumped in through the window!

Ranvir started nuzzling her neck!

Kaajjal: Ranvir, Ranvir chodo.

Ranvir: But why?

He put his hand round her waist and pushed her towards him. He quickly captured her lips and she pushed him off.

Ranvir: Kaajjal, what's wrong with you? Why are you behaving this way?

Kaajjal: Because this is not right Ranvir!

Ranvir: You love me don't you?

Kaajjal: Yes, I do but that doesn't mean I'll take such a step with you!

Ranvir: Then why aren't you giving me anything?

Kaajjal: What more can I give you Ranvir, everyday I have to lie to papa that I'm gone for a walk and I come and meet you. I have to escape from my room every night to meet you! Tell me Ranvir what more can I do to make you happy?

Kaajjal broke down.

Ranvir: I'm really sorry Kaajjal! I forced myself on you but I'm going to be more careful as to what I do nowadays! Look, I might have done something that you didn't like then I'm sorry, I won't do that again!

Kaajjal turned her back and Ranvir jumped out of the window via a rope.

Kaajjal continued to change and finally got into her new set of clothes and went back to the internet to check if Rambo Rammy was online. He was online and she saw he replied to her message it said:

Hi Carebear,
Yes, I'm really lucky that I've finally gotten the girl of my dreams. Ranvir and you are going to the movies. That's great! It doesn't matter if you don't talk to me today but you must have fun!
From:
Rambo Rammy.

She replied:
Hi RR,
I just had a fight with Ranvir just now! He is such a creep! I think I'll just stay home and talk to you!

He replied:
Hi CB,
Well I think you should forgive him as everyone makes mistake and I'm sure he must've apologized! Come on now, get up and go to the movies! It will be a great benefit to you.

She replied:
Hi RR,
Forgive him! No ways, never! I'm not going to the movies. You can't make me! How can you say it'll be a benefit to me?

He replied:
Hi CB,
You need to forgive and forget. Please go otherwise I'll never talk to you and trust me Ranvir is suffering a lot and is repenting so why can't you forgive him. It's none of my business to know what he did but please forgive him for my sake.

She replied:
Hi RR,
Fine I'll forgive him and I'll go to the movies but it doesn't mean I'm going to forget this. I'm going now so bye!

He replied:
Hi CB,
Have fun and tell me how the movie was! Don't worry you'll forget it in time! Bye!

Dev went offline! He started thinking about his dream girl! She was so beautiful!

That was it!
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Chevarra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx Aveer 4 ur comment.
Nxt part soon!!!
I need more response!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Chevarra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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my dear its nice i am confused which dev to imagine here r u talking about new or old dev
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I think she talking bout da new Dev in a new avtar
Edited by Aveer_123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ya, Im talking about da new Dev in a new avtar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hopefully the nxt part wil b posted tomorrow!
Edited by Aveer_123 - 17 years ago

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