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Posted: 17 years ago

My dear Kaajjalians, It seems problems are coming one after another..first net connection was down and then a virus attack on my pc.😭

Now the pc is ok..but I am really late in continuing the FF and this time..the episode is not really long...But next time will continue the episode in a longer version. So I am back to continue my FF.😳

I really missed all of you on both JJKN and Kaajjal forum and now I am back to continue my reincarnation FF. Hope you haven't forgotten the story till now..if you have then here is a brief recap. Do, give your comments and suggestions like you have always been doing. 😛

Recap: Karan-Ameesha in their attempt to kill DK get killed and reincarnated due to Karan's vows to be reborn to take revenge on DK. Karan and Ameesha are reborn as Chander(in Bhadrapur, as son of Balluram and Shantabai) and Phoolwanthi (in Sitapur, as daughter of Sunderlal and Lajwanthi) respectively. Nandini Bhabhi gifts DK with a ticket for honeymoon to Kerala and Dev gifts Kaajjal with a diamond necklace.
In Singh Mansion, a party is taking place to celebrate the acquittal of Nandini in the murder case of Karan and Dev and Kaajjal and after the party Adi requests the help from Dev and Kaajjal with regard to move a proposal to Nandini whom he is interested in marrying. Meanwhile, Chander and Phoolwanthi are giving a tough time to their parents.Chander gives a tough time to Balluram by stealing his ring and Ameesha by playing in gobar.
There is a mela going on in Bhadrapur on the occasion of Janmashtami where people from other locations are visiting and Phoolwanthi's parents happen to reach Bhadrapur. Balluram is Sunder's childhood friend and the two friends once again meet and have a great time..while Chander strongly feels the presence of Phoolwanthi and gets flashes of Ameesha's face with the Manik and Phoolwanthi is also attracted by the sound of crying of Chander.

Ab aage...

Scene 1: Singh Mansion...Nandini Bhabhi's room

Nandini Bhabhi is in a shocked state after hearing about the proposal of Adi and she is in the verge of tears. Kaajjal comes after her into the room and gently sits down near her on the bed on which she is sitting and puts her hand on Nandini Bhabhi's shoulder.

Nandini Bhabhi: Kaajjal, mujhe koi aur apne zindagi main nahi chahiye...main iss tarah akele jeene main hi khush hoon.

Kaajjal: Please Bhabhi...aap ki aankhon main aansoon nahi dekh sakti hoon. Main jaanti hoon ki Karan ki wajah se aapne bahut dukh saha hai...main jaanti hoon ki aapko ye sab kuch bhool jaana bahut mushkil hai. Magar zindagi ek insaan ki wajah se tho ruk nahi jaati.

Nandini Bhabhi: Kaajjal, meri zindagi ab iss tarah se hi kategi. mere dil main abhi pyaar ke liye koi jagah nahi..mere mann main jo pyaar ki ehsaas thi..woh tho Karan ke saath mar chuki hai. Maine jitne unko pyaar kiye the...uske liye mujhe apne aap se hi nafrat hoti hai. Ab main kisi aur ke baare main soch nahi sakti

Kaajjal: Bhabhi, sabhi log Karan jaise nahi hote..Aditya ek achcha insaan hai..main unhe jaanti hoon aur mujhe poora vishwas hai..ke woh aapko khush rakhenge

Nandini looks really restless hearing this and breaks into tears😭

Nandini Bhabhi: Please Kaajjal, tum yahan se abhi chali jaao...mujhe akele chod do..mere mann main jo dard hai woh abhi kam nahi hui hai..uss dard ko bhula nahi paa rahi hoon.

Kaajjal: Bhabhi, main jaa rahi hoon...magar please aap ek baar sochiye ke zindagi main ek saathi ki zaroorat hai...aur uske bina zindagi adhoora lagta hai.

Nandini Bhabhi: Agar tum meri jagah hoti tho kya karti, Kaajjal?

Kaajjal: Bhabhi, agar mere Dev ko kuch ho jaate tho main kabhi zindagi main kisi aur ko apna nahi paati..kyonki Dev ek bahut achche insaan hai. Magar agar main aapke jagah hoti tho main ek aise insaan ke liye iss tarah baithke aansoon nahi bahaati, jiske andar dil naam ki cheez hi nahi hai. Karan ne jo aapke saath kiya, jo Dev ke saath kiya...jo Mom ke saath kiya..usko dekhke main kabhi ek aise insaan ke liye apni poori zindagi uske yaad main nahi bitaati.

Nandini Bhabhi looks really sad and tears are welling up in her eyes.😭

Nandini Bhabhi: Kaajjal, magar jo zakhm mujhe mila hai..woh abhi bhara nahi hai.

Kaajjal: Bhabhi, zakhm ko waqt bhar lete hai, magar Aditya jaise insaan ko waqt aapke liye wapas nahi laa sakte. Aap zaroor ek nayi zindagi shuroo karne ke baare main sochiye. Main aap pe zor nahi daaloongi..magar main chahti hoon ki aapki zindagi main bhi khushiyan laut aaye aur mujhe poora vishwas hai ki woh khushiyan aapke zindagi main Aditya zaroor lauta sakta hai. Main bas itna hi kehna chahti hoon...baaki aapke upar hai ke aap kya decision lete hai.

Kaajjal leaves the room...leaving a perplexed and pained Nandini Bhabhi who is in a doraha, where she can either continue to live life alone..or chose Adi as a partner. She gets all confused and looks at herself in the mirror in deep thought.😕


Scene 2: Bhadrapur-Janmashtami celebrations still continuing...

Phoolwanthi is looked with a totally perplexed and shocked face into the inner part of the house..which is not visible to her eyes..but she is feel a strange kind of attraction towards something of somebody within (Surely even when Veer was there also, Ameesha was always attracted to Karan for other reasons,kyon haina?)😆

Sunder: Phoolo, tu udhar kya dekh rahi hai ri?

Ballu: Yaar, lagta hai ke Phoolo ko bhukh lagi hui hai. Shanta..Phoolo ke liye jaldi se dhoodh laa. Woh abhi tak tho ro rahi thi..aur abhi andar ki taraf dekh rahi hai.

Phoolo is trying to get off Sunder's lap and is struggling in his hands. Meanwhile in the room within Chander lying on the bed has rolled and fallen down from the bed and is moving slowly towards the door. Chander's eyes are blank and searching and he starts moving outside the room..when Shanta who is coming out of the kitchen sees it and she picks him up. Lajo who just then comes there sees Chander...😛

Lajwanthi: Shanta, iss ko bhi dhoodh pilaayenge. Lagta hai..Phoolo ki tarah isko bhi bhukh lag raha hai. Main isko bahar le jaati hoon..aap bas dhoodh leke aaiye.😳

Lajwanthi takes Chander from Shanta's hands and she walks outside..while Shanta goes back to kitchen to bring two bottles of milk...one for Chander and one for Phoolwanthi.

Lajo(to Sunder): Dekhiye ji...ye hai Chander..Shanta bhabhi aur Ballu bhai ka beta

Chander is kicking in the hands of Lajo and is very restless and making noises from his mouth in anger. Suddenly he turns sideways in her hand and see Phoolo in Sunder's hands. Chander is awestruck by the beautiful Phoolo and is looking with mesmerized eyes at her while she is also looking back at him...as if she knew him and felt a strong attachment towards him.😳

Chander slips off Lajo's hands and starts moving towards Phoolo...but Lajo instantly picks him up and he starts crying out loud. Seeing him crying out loud...Phoolo too starts crying out loud and it becomes a duet.(Pichle janam main bhi dono bahut saare duet karte the..DK ke khilaaf...abhi bhi duet karna nahi choda hai).😆

Shanta comes running into the room with both the bottles of milk and they put both the bottles into the mouths of the babies and they both are quiet because of the milk filling their mouths. But chander's eyes are still looking at Phoolo and hers at him...as if the attraction is even making them forget the taste of milk and the surroundings. Suddenly Chander once again starts getting flashes of Ameesha laughing with the Manik in eyes and he starts crying out loud...the whole milk flowing out from the mouth and tears running down his shocked face.😭

Ballu: Shanta, lagta hai..ye kuch dekhke ro raha hai. Ho sakta hai..ke ye kuch dekhke khabra gaya hai. Isko andar leke jaa

Shanta takes Chander and prepares to go inside..when he starts stamping his mother and gives a really strong kick to her 😆and in the pain..she loses grip of Chander and he slips off her hands and falls down. Chander in a new vigour..starts moving fast towards Phoolo. Seeing Chander moving fast towards Phoolo gets all frightened and she gets flashes of a man with a gun in his hand(no points for guessing). She gets all shocked seeing the man's cruel face and starts crying out loud.😭(Abhi if Chander has seen Ameesha in his flashes...then who has Phoolo seen..guess karo guess karo)😉😆

Chander meanwhile has moved fast towards Phoolo and is now trying to catch hold of the chair on which Sunder is sitting and trying to catch hold and stand up to get a clearer glimpse of Phoolo. Phoolo's hand falls sideways and Chander catches hold of one of the fingers and suddenly temple bells start ringing and both gets flashes of one man and lady being shot and killed outside a temple and both start crying together...while their parents are looking confused(I am also getting influenced by Kaccoon Sethi and making totally draggy and messy scenes)😆

Scene changes

Scene 3: Singh Mansion

Panna Chachi comes into the hall and finds a thoughtful Dev looking out through the window and Panna Chachi approaches him.

Panna Chachi: Dev, tum aise soch main kyon ho?

Dev: Woh chachi, Aditya aaj party main aaya tha..aur usne kahan ki woh Nandini Bhabhi se shaadi karna chahta hai.

Panna Chachi: Dev, ye tho bahut achchi baat hai. Agar Nandini ko koi aitraaz nahi hai..tho ye humhaare liye sabse khushi denewali baat hogi.

Dev: Main jaanta hoon chachi, magar mujhe nahi pata ki..kahi Nandini Bhabhi uske liye razi honge ya nahi.

Kaajjal enters the room and replies

Kaajjal: Dev, mujhe poora vishwas hai, ke Nandini Bhabhi zaroor maan jaayegi. Maine unhe samjhaane ki koshish ki hai..aur mujhe lagta hai ki woh maan jaayegi.

Panna Chachi: Kaajjal, kya tumhe Nandini ki baaton se aisa laga?

Kaajjal: Chachi, abhi tho Bhabhi bahut hi duvidha main hai...magar Gannu Bhaiyya zaroor unko sahi raah dikhaayenge. Humhe bas unki haan ki zaroorat hai. Chachi, aap
please unse baat keejiye aur unse poochiye ke unhe ye rishta manzoor honge ya nahi.

Panna Chachi: Main zaroor poochoongi,Kaajjal. Garewal khandaan se rishta humhaare liye bade garv ki baat hai..aur Aditya tho bahut hi achcha ladka hai. Main Nandini se zaroor baat karoongi.

Panna Chachi goes away from there.

Kaajjal: Dev, tum abhi bhi kuch soch rahe ho? Kya baat hai?

Dev: Kaajjal, Aditya bahut hi achche insaan hai. Unhe tho koi bhi ladki mil sakti hai...magar woh humhaare Nandini Bhabhi ko zindagi dena chahta hai. Jis tarah se tumne mere zindagi main Paayal ki
jagah liya hai..usi tarah se woh bhi Nandini Bhabhi ke liye bahut bade tyag kar rahe hai.

Kaajjal(keeping her finger on Dev's lips): Dev, aise mat kaho. Maine koi tyag nahi kiye hai. Tumse main tabhi se pyaar karne lagi thi...jis din se maine tumhaari achchaaiyon ko jaana hai..aur mere liye tumse achcha koi aur nahi hai. Main hazaar Aditya ko tumpe qurbaan kar sakti hoon. Mere liye Dev jaisa koi nahin aur tum mere dil main base ho...meri sanson main base ho...😳

Kaajjal starts slowly moving closer to Dev..turning him towards her and puts her arms around his shoulders and looking deeply into his eyes with love. Kaajjal slowly caresses Dev's hair looking at his face which is slowly getting relaxed into a cute smile and his dimples are now really clear.😉 (Dammit, I am already drooling over DPS)😆😛

Dev is enjoying the touch and slowly he closes his eyes and moves his hand up Kaajjal's hands and grips her shoulders and pulls her closer to him and opens his eyes once again to look into her eyes. A gentle breeze is blowing and the curls of her hair are falling all over her face. Dev gently moves those hairs...which are like clouds behind which her face is hidden and now he looks at the full moon....her face and he cannot but admire the beauty
of those innocent eyes which are looking so lovingly at him(once again..the song 'aakhein teri kitni haseen' is playing in the background).😳

Kaajjal: Dev, ek baar tumne kaha tha...ki tum apni poori zindagi meri aankhon main dekhke guzaarna chahte ho...magar abhi mere liye...tumhaare aankhon ko dekhe bina..ek din bhi rehna mushkil ho gayi hai. Tum mere nazron se door hote ho...tho lagta hai...ke meri zindagi ke woh pal bekaar hai...un lamhon main zindagi ke koi maayne nahi hote hai. Main bas inn lamhon ko phir se jeena chahti hoon. Phirse woh saare lamhe jeena chahti hoon tumhaare saath...jo humne saath guzaare hai. Mujhe bas shiqayat hai...maut se..kyonki woh kabhi humko alag karenge. Bas...wohi mera sabse bada darr hai.😕

Dev slowly pulls her lightly into an embrace...and closes his eyes as if he was enjoying those moments...😳

Dev: Kaajjal, mujhe maut se bhi shiqayat nahi hai...kyonki hum janam janam ke liye bane hue hai..aur hum milte hi rahenge..maut bhi kabhi humko alag nahi kar sakenge. Pyaar janam janam ka ehsaas hai...aur ismein bandhne ke baad do dil janam janam ke liye mil jaate hai...jaise hum mile hai.

They continue to remain in that embrace loving every moment of their togetherness and feeling the warmth of love which is still fresh and sweet and forgetting the world around once again.(DK jab milte hai..tho yahi hota hai..hai ke nahi?)😳

Camera freezes on DK in embrace and on the other side is the hands of Chander and Phoolwanthi holding each other. Are both the couples in love? We will find soon.😆

Preview: A mandir is shown and Dev and Kaajjal are there and why...we will see soon.

I am a bit late for updating my FF...but hope you all will forgive me for that...woh kehte haina..better late than never.😉😆

Love,

Priya😛


Edited by ahem_brahmasmi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was superb and romantic and hilariouss!!! I had a good laugh while you were describing the way Chander's milk pours out of the mouth and Phholwanthi also starts crying out loud after having those shaitaani flashes!!!! 😆 I was also looooooooovingggggggggggggggggggg the way Kajju was caressing Devu's hair, and they embraced each other!!! How lovelyyyy that scene was!!! 👏 Pl;ease continue soon.

Zareen.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: gambi

That was superb and romantic and hilariouss!!! I had a good laugh while you were describing the way Chander's milk pours out of the mouth and Phholwanthi also starts crying out loud after having those shaitaani flashes!!!! 😆 I was also looooooooovingggggggggggggggggggg the way Kajju was caressing Devu's hair, and they embraced each other!!! How lovelyyyy that scene was!!! 👏 Pl;ease continue soon.

Zareen.

Zareen dear😛

Phoolo is also starting to getting flashes of a strange man...whom she hasn't seen so far and as she is a baby now...she is not recognising him.😆

Darling, it wasn't Kaju caressing DPS's hair in the FF..it was me.😆 Because while writing the whole thing..I have to imagine from Kaajjal's side...and so it was me doing it while writing it and had to imagine the whole thing.😛 Waise...those who are reading will also be in place of Kaajju...don't you also become Kaajjal for a few moments...while reading romantic FFs, Zareen dear?😉 Surely their embrace has to be the most romantic and tender one...which will fill the air with love and warmth and specially when it is with the loving and dignified DPS.😛 Will continue soon.😳

Love,

Priya😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh ya Priya! How did you guess that??? Everytime when I go to sleep, I just keep thinking to make up new DK scenes and imagine them. I also imagine Kajju doing some sharaarats, and I feel that I am the one who is doing it! We share the same feelings! 😛

Zareen.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Priya my dear sweet friend ... first and foremost i missed you like anything. Not seeing you around really had me thinking where are you. but then the first though that crossed me mind was net or Pc, and there we found out. Glad to have you back honey, and that too with a great part ...

hahahahahhahaha, i have to start with phoolo and chander ... uffff how they are drawn towards each other, and dont tell me, getting flash backs already .. hahahahha 😆 just loved the whole scene, made me laugh like crazy ...

and i really loved the Kaajjal nandani scene where Kaajjal is trying to convince nandani for Adi ... really touching and heartfelt .. 👏

amazing piece again Priya ... specially your postview of all the parts is really informative. Thanks for giving that everytime ...

enjoyed everybit of it 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwwwww priya! I really missed you these days!! But I'm glad you're back with a bang and your wonderful FF!
Looks like a magnetic attraction between phoolo and chander! He's really naughty, falling out of bed and rushing towards Phoolu! 😆
Both holding hands at the end1 How cute is that! Loved that bit! I'm sure in this birth they won't just be partner in crime but lovers as well! The most evil couple ever! 😆

Ohhhhh man that DK scene was great!!! Really sweet and romantic! You said that you imaagined yourself in Kajjal's place but then i have to say that I imagined being in your place! 😆 😆 Everytime I watch a DK scene I take k's place! Actually thats cool my name also starts with a K!!! Look at me! I'm drooling over DPS instead of commenting on ur FF! 😆 I've lost it!!! 😆 Sorry

And that Kaajjal- Nandini scene was so genuine! I loved it! the way you described Kaajjal's dialogues, I can actually imagine her saying that! I mean that is soo kaajjal!!!

Well I'm talking too much! 😆 😆

Plzzzzzzzzz continue soon!! Ur net was down first then ur PC, its all done! Now I'm sure nothing will come between you and us in IF!!! 😉

😳 Komal
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow priya good worki really liked the flashbacke part about karan and amisha..........it was hillarious and i really loved dev and kajjal love scene.......... as i am missing those too much
keep up the good work hum bhootnis ka yahi to sahaara hai ab 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ah brahmi, you are back. Loved your mature cajoling and resoning Kaju. Yes that is how you prtray the lead and female protagonist. Not like how they made her gyrate in front of a mere good friend to make a video clipping for your hubby. Ummmppphhh.. Now I don't want ot go into that again. Loved Kaju, really. So mature she sounded and so true she was. And glad dev too sees what a wonderful girl, his ladylove realy is. Of course he knows and loves her for that. 😳

But to your funny track, simply marvelously hilarious. Hmmm so love starts pretty pretty early..in the cradle!!! 😆

Brilliant brahmi, keep it up. Do continue soon. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: gambi

Oh ya Priya! How did you guess that??? Everytime when I go to sleep, I just keep thinking to make up new DK scenes and imagine them. I also imagine Kajju doing some sharaarats, and I feel that I am the one who is doing it! We share the same feelings! 😛

Zareen.

Yaar, Zareen, how can I be different from you? My feelings and your feelings will be same na? Have you noticed my id? My id means that I am the world and I feel that we all have same feelings, emotions and thoughts and there is a certain commonness in the way our mind works. So I can feel like you too and surely every Kaajjalian will be imagining in the same way like us.😉😛

Love,

Priya😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
PRIYA 😳 😳 ............jaanu ......never ever leave us ..........and u FF was mind-blowing...........LOVE U AND plz..........whenever ur computer....let me knw....i'll fix it .just 4 u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳


kitty 😳

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