DevKajjal lets forgive - kiss n tell

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😉hey guys this s short sammy - teaser for all bhootnis like me who are starved of DK hugs and passion...chalo lets forgive season😉we may not get in the real show but who acres...lets party😳goat sagsa is over😃

so there is my list of mistakes - dev kaajjal come out with, to forgive each - other for....and some....ahem😳which goes maybe like this😃

scene - dev has prepared himself to ask for kajus forgiveness, when they are in their bedroom....he has worked up a long list of mistakes he will say in front of her and ask forgiveness for each one.😃...she sways in , humming a soft tune...sits at the mirror all the time her eyes following him pace the room preoccupied, head downcast....a light mischievous smile is playin on her lips then her eyes darken as they slowly move over him...a glint come in them and she stands up...😳.

he turns....pauses, his lips a straight line of concentration and puspose😕 - his voice authoritative....a soft mutter😃, as his eyes gets momentarily distracted😳 by the attractive picture she presents as she moves in her satiny outfit, that leaves little to imagination.😉...

kaajjal i....i... want to talk to u about something😃....he comes towards her...she stops slightly...her mood playful😉 hmmmm- yes dev...bolo...light...casual....she promptly turns her back and starts to walk away,

he gets irritated and suddenly grabs her arm 😳"Kaajjal--dammit....i am talking to you

she pauses her eyes naughty she smiles...in the semi lit room....he growwwlllll,ss at her, he stutters a bit, as her proximity, her fragance starts effecting him...

kaajjal i wanted to say...- i i forgive you😡😆 no dammit.. i mean...will you please forgive me....😳

kaju doin nakra 😃- haan huh...theek se nahin soona...zor se kaho//still with her back to him😆/

devu getting incensed, twists her arm slowly behind her.....breathes darkly at her ear😳 , in the process pullin her closer,

hissssss😳sizzlehmmmm😳kaajjal i said dammit i said forgive you😡....i mean...me....dammit....what games are you playin😃

kaju manages to untwist herself and faces him😳...breathing slightly heavily at his proximity, loves his anger, his possessiveness😳 and the way his long hair falls over his eyes....she slwoly lifts a finger and in devu style trails it down his cheek.😳..he closes his eyes.....and breathes softly -

kaajjal, i am saying....i forgive you.....i forgive....it trails off helplessly as she smiles coyly, moving closer to him....

hmmmm, i am a lil hard of hearin you see...DEvvvvv.....sir....

and links her arms around his neck....he opens his eyes that are burning like twin embers in the furnace..😳..kaajjaal...he breathes....a bit irately

kajus flirtatious mood irks him 😉and he pulls away, and stands atleast a meter far😆......folding his trembling arms😉 across his chest 😃he tries to adopt a patronising attitude 😕-

kaajjal i have a list of grievances we must address first.....he mutters😕

without turning, but glances sideways his thraot working hard, nervously at her dangerous mood😃kaju raises her brows and sways towards him, lazily😳...btw wearing her sexiest nightie😳😆😆and devu in his usual pink kurta...shreya is broke you see😆

devu goes still as she rests her head on hissbhoulder and murmurs,

what greivances - you have..saare takleef toh meine sahe😉😳...her eyes dance like imps unknown to devu.😳....

he stiffens.....

dammit...kaajjal.....listen to me woman.😡...i am your husband.😃...at least ex-boss hone ke naathe soono😕

he mutters ....but his eyes...are alight with a strange expression...almost of anticipation....his lashes flutter....just a flicker...of a sigh...of ...a deep...longing😳kaju is relentless....undaunted...by this rock of gibraltor...she had chipped....away at...for months....😳😳who is no mood to give in as easy...at the moment😃

she slowly puts her palms on his arms and starts moving them around his hands to finds his fingers determindedly locked 😳....he takesa deeper breathe.....his voice...is getting huskier...he closes his eyes....kaajjal....pratap singh....i am saying something serious😡....here....alright..treat me with some respect.....grrrrwwwooolllll😡he punctuates every word.....as she remembers from his kadoos boss days she smiles....even more...presses in her advanatage😳

taking a slow deep breathe aware she moves in, he can feel her soft body pressing to his....and every movement she is making😳😳...his breathing starts getting...shallow😳....but he fights it..😃.

todays mission it to list their joint faults, forgive each other.....and start afresh..all this while some goat or the other interupts them.....😆😆and dev will achieve it come what may...ye kaajjal kyaa cheez hai...😃

well he is about to discover😃...from the time the great sage vishwamitra to the mahaan atma DPS, the sacrificing hero..😆..will soon discover....there is nothing like a woman on her own mission😳😳to capture her moon😃😳

kajus lips....slowly trace his arm,///he croaks...1st...1st.m..mi.....mistake....lac...la...o...of... t..t..dammit...trust😃////he sucks in his breathe as her fingers move towards his chest, he holds his arms tighter....to disallow any unlawful entry on his poor chest😆😃

she whispers😳....against his shoulder as she moves slowly to the front - second ...mistake...lack of communication😃....i am working on it now...😳😳😳he closes his eys....groaning inwardly...kaajjal dammit..😳...dont do it....😆 i am trying to think...hard....dammit, it is half a whisper this time😳

his jaw clamps shut tautly.....a muscle is beating there....if he grits his teeth tight and keeps his eyes shut, 😳perhaps this modern day vishawamitra can continue with his tapasya😳😳after all he succeeded all these months didnt he😉😳😳kept his menaka gasping at bay😃

but our kaju menaka is hellbent on making his tapasya bhanggh..😃, she starts kissing the back of his hands....which can be seen clenched under the elbows.😳...kaaaajjjjaaaallll....dammmiit...he mutters under his breathe softly cussing😆....a thin bead of sweat breaking on his brow.....😳now

then she brings his palms softly to the front of his chest, and starts working them upward, sensously teasing yet determined equally....😳

3rd...mistake - he manages to gut it out - lack of faith.😉...he is pleased as plum he said that...😃but she moves her body against his, even more...determindedly...and she murmurs...lazily ...yes...i trust you my dearest with my heart,soul and body😉.....which she is using with good effect...😃

and he is sweating.😳..like a bucket...which is out in the sun..melting the chunks of ice in it......😳

DEv resolutely - keeps jaapping in his mind...i will resist...i will resist....i...damm

he groans inwardly😳...oh no...for kaju...has taken the first button off his kurta😃...and her lips find the exxposed part of his chest....she can feel him tremble...and smiles...moving her lips against his skin.😳.

she whispers against the bottom of his throat -

fourth mistake - ignoring your wife😳😳when she needs you most....mmmmmmm ....like now😳

devus eyes fly open...he sees her dark head😳...thru a maze of his own sweat breathes hard.😃.as her lips move up to his pulse that is now jumpin like a gun,😳 slow his hands move slightly, just a fraction....but she feels the movement anslips her arms around his neck, each motiion...delibrate brushing against his neck....sending darts of sheer pleasure down his frame....

he closes his eyes with a deep sighhhhh😳.....his voice is visibly😳....shaking...with passion...that has starting risin like a dormant volcano in his veins....throbbing in its intensity....how he has longed..for this closeness with his wife..😳the stupid guilt kept him awake for nightstortured him😭, gnawed at him like acid...😭finally he can feel it...the love....the passion which used to turn his blood to an inferno😳.😳...a mere glance of those amber eyes😳 more potent than 10 bottles of johnny walker😃(no wonder he always broke them afterwards in disgust - woh nasha kahaan jo kaajjal ke baahon mein hain)

kaajjjaaaalll....a soft whisper...it was wrenched from his lips helplessly.....

her lips...pause...as she opens her eyes and looks at him....Devvvvv.😳...her eyes, soft glimering like....a soft ....lake drenched in the moonlight.....it was filled with wonder...he opens his eyes .....they were darker than the darkest nite.....glimmering.😳...with....yearning😳....sheer longing.😳....his lips part....like a sighhhhhh😳

her voice is really like a slip of satin..caressing his....face....lovingly as she says

fifth mistake - feeling guilty😃

a ghost of a smile in his eyes, his lips...as he gazes deeply into her eyes....lost in them...as she in his...yyyyeessss...yesss😳...p..p..pleasssse..f..f..fo...forgive..me...kaajjal😳...she puts a finger on his lips...her touch featherlight...her eys flowing with love...and promise

shhhhhhhh.....Devvvv.....ab kaha hai phir math kehna....

you are ....always forgiven...never ask....just know you are....i love you too much...to think of anger...of hate...of anything else but love...and you love me more than life itself....those actions were of a shadow from your past....its gone now...they never belonged to my Devvvv....

Devvvv...whom i worship....and always do....😳

a shudder passes through when he hears those fervently spoken words....filled with passion he remembered and loved...

I love you Kaajjal.....you are right....those actions...were of a shadow...not of your Devvvv......an to just to feel your love....in my arms...like this....cant describe how...my heart if feeling, rejoicing......yearning to be one with you....😳

then he bends his head and kisses her finger...softly and she closes her eyes....a slight tremor on her own lips.....his arms start moving around her....possessively...as she remembers...she starts to surrender..as his lips....touch the corner of her jaw...Devvvvv...

but he still hasnt finished 😃 stubborn bloke DPS and murmurs...softly...

sixth mistake....i stopped looking tinto your eyes😃...i had forgotten😳...how i could lose myself in them😳....

his lips trail over her jaw....she trembles...this time...her arms slowly tightening around his neck, her cheek rubbing his, softly ...yet..in growing....longing from deep within...her...soul.😳..to be one with him as never before....to feel loved as never before....😳

his arms tighten around her back...and start moving in an almost forgotten dance...of his own....his palms...moving down her body ....as if wanting to mould her to him firmly😳....no mistake😃

the embrace is complete....yet..his lips dont stop....as they....move pver her neck.....exposing...the flimsy dress she is wearing...slighlty...his mouth warm...and demanding as it moves over the creamy curve of her shoulder....

she ....manages...to gasp...as his lips find her pulse...beating at her throat rapidly....d...d..devvvvv.....n...n..ni...ninth...mi..mista... she can feel the bed pressing on her back......as he gently...yet not too gently moves with her...so that she is lying down...just for a brief moment he pauses and looks at her his eyes drunk...his breathe shallow....its raspy sound the only thing in the room that can be heard...their eyes meet...in its unmasked desire....throbbingin their...veins....

ninth mistake...- is not to have spent QUALITY time with you....like this....i ...i am...planning...to w..w..work...fro...from home...now...

he muttered as he closes his lips...over hers😳...he feels another shudder run thru her frame...or was it his own body,...a lock of unkempt hair falls over his vision😉..but he doesnt care....as his own....😳 passion.😳...is tonite matched...beyond...his imagination....😳

we can blow some curtains now baccalog....😃itna kaafi tha😳

and the 10th mistake - this from sammy,

Dishonesty - never lie to one other.....

but tonite dev kaajjal are at their honest best, talking to each other as they shud, the best form of forgiveness in each others arms, giving loving each other....and the rest all falls in place

sammy😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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VERY NICE!!! sammy.................i wish this could happen in reality 😉 😉 😉 may be off screen.............as both r full of passions 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Haila Sammy that was so sweet.. Somthin like this happens Kaash..!!!!! So sweet Dev and Kaajjal ke Nakre hmmmm.... 😳 😳 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow! That was mindblowing Sammy!!!! 👏

Zareen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: india05

Haila Sammy that was so sweet.. Somthin like this happens Kaash..!!!!! So sweet Dev and Kaajjal ke Nakre hmmmm.... 😳 😳 😉

yes guys.😳...kyaa karen😳...is liye sirf bhar the hain....haila....haalat karaab hai...without those hugs😕

sammy😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: gambi

Wow! That was mindblowing Sammy!!!! 👏

Zareen.

hey zareen dearest, 😳i hope it cheered u up..😃..dontthink of their dying....whatever will be will be....abhi sirf unke...hugs ke baarein mein oshcthe hain😉

sammy😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasartaurus

VERY NICE!!! sammy.................i wish this could happen in reality 😉 😉 😉 may be off screen.............as both r full of passions 😳

in real life it is shilpa and will always be...we must respect that😛dear...but

in reellife...dev kaajjal...kaajjal dev....passion flows, overdoes😳

sammy😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Next week better be Romance week.. 😡

Like this week was thriller drama week with dose of Saintliness and love...

and last week was Love embroiled in jealousy and suspicion and unwanted video tapes.. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharmii

Next week better be Romance week.. 😡

Like this week was thriller drama week with dose of Saintliness and love...

and last week was Love embroiled in jealousy and suspicion and unwanted video tapes.. 😆

u are right sharmii....dont mind...a possessive dev minus jealousy (that was stupid), and minus obsession (stupider)..minus mobile phones....banned them for whole of next week😃

.just passion passion and more passin...fuelled by the nakrewalli rajkumari for a change😳

sammy😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sammy thats was too good and funny 😆 ..see the biggest mistake which dev is doing in the last few episodes is thinking that he is not worthy of kaajjal anymore 😡 ...Ok fine he made a mistake but then even kaajjal went a bit too overboard with her Adi-goat bhajan 😡 ...And dev should not forget that he used to b the permanent savior of our kaju madam in the good old days 😳 😳

Chalo at least kaajjal has taken that guilt out of his heart now 😳 ,so next week we can expect some scintillating bedroom scenes minus any goat-bandar circus 😛 ...And I m not that worried about Karan because at least karan's villaingiri gives us the assurence that DK won't separate and they will fight together against karan 😳 which was not the case during Adi's sadhugiri and shivoo's bandargiri 😡 😆 ..So either karan will kill both DK and they will goto swarglok together 😳 or DK both will send karan to patalok and the serial will end on a happy note 😃 ...but till then Sammy will keep updating us about the mistakes which a husbend and wife generally commits after marriage 😊

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