Originally posted by: thesaint148
Gyatri my dear, let me start with thanking sammy to have pushed you to break your silence and be an active member of the forum. having said that, i must say your first attempt was amazing. i loved every bit of it, the explanantion of the clors crossing dev;s face, the thoughts crossing his mind and the distress he is going through seeing kaj and adi talking and all that stuff. very well explained. π
Loved the way kaj kept her head on his chest and booommmm, he lost his control ... and thinks how can she do this to him, he cant mistrust him like this .... amazing ... very nice, specially the feeling where dev is almost giving into the need of crushing her to him. π
and last but not least, hmmmm, Kashish : She calls herself thesaint, which she aint..The Purple Princess of Passion..Love comes alive at her magic touch..
i am truly honored and touched. if my touch can convey love to is max, i would pray to almighty to keep the power of this touch forever like this, and make it grow everyday!!! Thank you Honey. and continue soon.