Dev’s surprise!!!

Hey Kaajjalians😛,

I have read a lot of writeups on how DK suhaag raat should be and you all have created absolutely sizzling and sensuous fanfics with Dev and Kaajjal.😳

I too thought of creating something special for the newly-wedded couple, but then i want the DK first night to be adventurous and filled with romance. So my concept of DK's first night is not in Singh Mansion. Now that is too off-beat right? Because in general sense, DK first night should be in the Singh Mansion. But i feel that they should have an adventurous and romantic first night. 😳

So i want Dev to kidnap Kaajjal.😆

Now that sounds hilarious, isn't it? But friends, my brain is also working overtime and i thought to create a new kind of DK suhaag raat without the interference of anybody, specially of those like Ameesha who are always becoming kabab main haddi in DK romance. 😆

So now Dev has gone totally crazy like me.😆 So he makes up this plans inside the car to kidnap, his dulhan. Dev is the one who is driving the car and Kaajjal is sitting in the front seat just beside him. Their car is going ahead and Panna Chachi, Veer and rest of the baraatis are following in other cars. Now Dev accelerates the car and drives really fast. Kaajjal gets all surprised as to why Dev is driving so fast. So Kaajjal gets shocked and asks Dev as to why he is driving so fast and asks him to drive slowly.😕

But Dev doesn't reduce speed of the car. Then at a point, the road splits into two and one way goes to Mumbai and the other road leads to Dev's farmhouse. Dev just takes the road to farmhouse and then after sometime, Kaajjal turns back and she can't find any of the cars, that have been following.
So Kaajjal asks Dev as to why none of the cars are visible. So Dev tells her that maybe she is feeling so, because he is driving fast.😆

Dev drives to the farmhouse and stops the car outside the farmhouse. Kaajjal is shocked to see that they haven't reached Singh Mansion. 😕

Kaajjal: Dev, tum mujhe kaha leke aaye ho?

Dev: Kaajjal, tumhe yaad hai na, maine shaadi se pehle tumse kaha tha, ki main tumhe ek surprise doonga.Tho main woh surprise dene ke liye tumhe yahan laaya hoon.😛

Kaajjal gets angry at what Dev did😡

Kaajjal: Dev, abhi sabhi pareshaan ho rahe honge. Humhe wapas chalna chahiye. 🤢

Dev: Kaajjal, please, tum mujhpe bharosa karti hona?😳

Kaajjal: Dev, main tumpe bharosa karti hoon, par...

Dev puts his finger on her lips and says: Tho phir Kaajjal, tum aur kuch mat bolo, aur mere saath raho, theek hai?😛

Suddenly Dev's mobile starts ringing and its Panna Chachi calling.

Dev: Hello Chachi....

Panna Chachi: Dev, tum kahan ho? Hum sab Mumbai pahunch rahe hai, aur tumhaari gaadi humhe dikhaayi nahi de rahi hai.😕

Dev: Woh Panna chachi, hum raasta bhool gaye hai. Hum wapas aa rahe hai.😆

Panna Chachi: Dev, abhi raat ho rahi hai, aur woh raasta bahut sunsaan hai....😕

Dev: Chachi, hum abhi ek resthouse ke baahar hai, aur hum aaj raat yahan thehrenge aur phir subah hote hi, wapas aa jaayenge.😛

Panna Chachi: Theek hai, Dev, tum dono savere hote hi wapas aa jaana. Main yahan sab kuch sambhaal loongi. 😳

Dev: Thanks a lot, Panna Chachi.

Dev switches off the mobile and Kaajjal is looking at him with gussa.😡

Dev: Kaajjal, please, gussa mat hona. main tumhe surprise dena chahta hoon.
Tho please tum yahan baitho main abhi aata hoon. 😳

Dev enters the farmhouse and changes himself into a black shirt and blue jeans. Dev then enters the kitchen and arranges to prepare a small dinner for himself and Kaajjal. 😳

He then goes back outside and brings Kaajjal inside. He asks Kaajjal to go and get fresh and in the meantime, he will arrange for some food for both of them. Kaajjal goes to take a shower inside while Dev continues to cook the food(Dev is an expert cook haina?)😆

He finishes preparing the dinner and gets to arranging the table and sets the table for a candlelit dinner. 😳

Kaajjal takes the shower, but she can't find any ladies clothes in there. So she finds a white cotton shirt and blue jeans of Dev's and wears them. She then comes downstairs and searches for Dev and calls out..Dev........Dev...😕

Dev slowly sneaks up from behind and closes her eyes...😛

Kaajjal: Dev, tum kya kar rahe ho?

Dev: zara intezaar karo, tumhe khud pata chal jaayega.😛

Dev brings her to the dining table and removes his hands. Kaajjal finds a beautifully set candlelit dinner and is thrilled.😳

Kaajjal: ye sab tumne mere liye kiya hai?😳

Dev(with his cute dimpled smile): Kaajjal, aaj ka dinner maine khaas tumhaare liye banaaya hai. Ye sabhi dishes DPS special hai.😛

Dev then puts on the music and makes her sit on the chair, giving her a red rose as a token of love. He then, seats himself opposite her and looks at her with eyes glowing and shining in the candlelight and in the love for her.

Dev: Kaajjal, jaanti ho, aajka dinner, maine specially tumhaare liye banaya hai aur maine isse pehle kabhi kisi ke liye dinner banaaya nahi hai. Aaj pehli baar sirf tumhaare liye kar raha hoon.😛

Both Dev and Kaajjal start having the dinner. Kaajjal tastes the food and is impressed.

Kaajjal: Dev, main nahi jaanti thi, ki tum itna achcha khaana banaate ho!😳

Dev(Raju Rangeela style): Kaajjal Madamji, ye tho kuch bhi nahi, aisi bahut saari baatein hai, jo aap apne Dev ke baare main nahi jaante ho. Madamji, aapko yaad hai, pehle jab aap aur Dev bhaiyya is farmhouse pe aaye the, aur aapke aur Dhruv bhaiyya ke beech ek cooking competition hua tha. Kaajjal madamji, tab Dev bhaiyya ne hi Dhruv bhaiyya ko khaana banaane main help kiya tha.😛

Kaajjal looks at total surprise at Dev.

Kaajjal: Dev, tumne cheating kiya tha???!!!!😆

Dev(flirtatiously): Tho kya hua, madamji, competition main tho aap hi jeet gayi thi na?😉

Kaajjal(getting naughty): Tho Raju, ye bataao ke tum main aur Dev main kya farak hai?😛

Dev: Madamji, Dev bhaiyya humhaare jitna filmi nahi haina, hum tho thehre filmon ke poojaari aur waise aapke Dev main ek khaasiyath hai, jo Rangeele main nahi hai, aur woh ye hai ki Dev bhaiyya bahut badhiya khaana baanate hai, aur hum tho sirf chameli ke dhaabe main khaate haiji, Raju Rangeela not knows cooking.😆

Kaajjal laughs hearing this and Dev too starts smiling sweetly seeing his Kaajjal laugh. They both have the dinner sharing some sweet moments together and then both of them together washes out the dishes together, speaking to each other like two lovebirds. 😳

Kaajjal is all the time, looking at the sweet and helpful Dev, she is getting all mesmerised. Dev notices Kaajjal looking at him, so Kaajjal takes her eyes off. 😉

Kaajjal: Jaante ho Dev, jab main tumse pehli baar Mussourie main mili thi, tab mujhe aisa laga tha, ke tum kabhi kisise pyaar nahi kar sakte ho aur koi bhi ladki tum jaise ek insaan ko pyaar nahi kar sakti hai.

Dev(looks at her with his eyes filled with love): Aur ab......? Aur ab tum kya sochti ho tum mere baare main, Kaajjal?😳

Dev goes close to Kaajjal and looks into her eyes with passion and love. Kaajjal gets all shy and starts to run away and Dev catches hold of her hand and pulls her into his arms in a passionate embrace. Kaajjal closes her eyes and loses herself in his embrace and in his love once again.

Dev: Kaajjal...bolo na, ab tum kya sochti ho?😳

Kaajjal: Aur ab mujhe aisa lagta hai, ki tumse zyaada pyaar koi aur mujhe nahi kar sakta. Dev, maine khud ko tum main paaya hai, aur ab main phir se apne aapko khona nahi chahti. 😳

Dev seperates himself from the hug and looks into her eyes deeply and goes close to her as if to give her a kiss.

Kaajjal blushes and runs away from there. Dev runs after her and catches hold of her and lifts her in his arms and takes her to the hall.😉

It is a moonlight night and stars are shining outside and there is a gentle breeze blowing and the air is filled with love. Dev puts on the music and it starts playing a classic english track 'Nothing's gonna change my love for you':

If i had to live my life, without you near me,
the days will all be empty, the nights will seem so long....
you must see forever oh so clearly, i might have been in love before, but it never felt this strong..........

Our dreams are young and we both know, they'll take us, where we want to go, hold me now, touch me now, i don't want to live without you....

Nothing's gonna change my love for you....You oughta know how much i love you,one thing you can be sure, i'll never ask for more than your love...

Nothing's gonna change my love for you....You oughta know how much i love you
The world they change, my whole life do, but nothing's gonna change my love for you...

Dev moves forward to Kaajjal and extends his arm for a dance and Kaajjal places her hand on his. They both start dancing to the music and slowly dissolve into an embrace and forget the world around. They feel the love for each other and each moment is so divine with the lovers in each other's arms...

Dev then gently lifts Kaajjal and once again places her on the sofa and lies down on the sofa, with his head on her lap. He just continues to look at her face with his eyes filled with love and they look at each other as if they would live like that forever.

Kaajjal(getting overwhelmed): Dev, main aaj ki suprise kabhi nahi bhooloongi...😳

Dev: Kaajjal, aaj ki raat, main bas tumhaare saath guzaarna chahta tha, aur aaj ki poori shaam aur raat main tumhaare hawaale kar raha hoon...😳

Dev and Kaajjal spend the whole night together, talking to each other and sharing some romantic moments with each other.😛

Sorry Kaajjalians, i know that maybe you were expecting a sizzling and sensuous first night with a lot of kissing and all, but i wanted Dev and Kaajjal to have some time to spend together as lovers, before they enter into their marital life and the real suhaag raat which would take place at Singh Mansion.

I know that you are all eagerly awaiting for that romantic and passionate first night, but i just wanted Dev to do something different and thrill his princess. So i made their suhaag raat a bit adventurous and romantic. Anyway,
the next week, would surely bring for us, some sweet and romantic moments and hope we all will get to enjoy some truly memorable romantic scenes. Till then continue dreaming and creating beautiful fanfics of DK suhaag raat.😳

nice job
loved it
u r going to write a part on there suhaag raat 😉
great job plz countion
can't wait for the next part
and i loved what u have done [they spent there night talking and sharing romentinca moments] 😊
and i especially the kidnaping part 😆
plz countion

wow..dat was just fabulous priya di..👏 👏 you really have a talent...you should also start your own fanfic...keep up the great work..

love

Alishba

Great idea Ahem and your like sammy and Kashish with writting a lot you should start writting some FF becuase you are so good.

Wow Priya di!..im totally out of words.. 👏👏
u know Kashish n Sammy shud welcum u to their club hun!!😛
Farmhouse n Raju!!..hmmm..gr888 idea 😉..luved it completely!!😳
Awesome job!! 🤗


Aliza❤️

tht waz jus breath takin i realli enjoyed it an i realli like da way u write itz realli unique i ..i think u shud start ur own ff

jus luvedddddddddddd it

Aww that was really good priya! I liked it how you changed it, and it was different!

Very sweet, how you also added raju 😆 and how Devu kidnaps kaajjal, and how she wears his clothes 😳 so sweet, and beautifully written 👏 👏 👏

awww priya .. that was awesome. very nicely written and the kidnapping idea was awesome ... hehehhehe. after all the two love birds need some serious privacy. and u know what, i loved the idea of they just talking, romancing and spending the night in each others lovely presence. Love has many ways of expression, and this surely was a beautiful one.

Just loved it. Well done!! 👏👏

Hey Priya that was a wonderful description of DK suhaag raat 👏 👏 👏 very romantic and unique 😳 😳 ...And I just loved your idea of Dev kidnapping kaajjal 😉 😛 ...I mean just imagine if they really forget the route to Mumbai and end up in some tabela 😛 and then mayb dev will light up the bonfire and will cook some meal 😛 and meanwhile kaajjal has nothing to wear 😉 , so dev himself can give her ...his own shirt to wear 😳 😳 ..so now dev will b shirtless and kaajjal will wear only dev's shirt and then of course we all konw what will happen next 😉 😆 😳

Ok priya wanted to make a cute DK conversation on their first night 😳 and here I m again going besharam 😕 ..shame on me 😡 😆 😛

between Priya I loved the idea of dev becoming raju and trying to put on the fun-loving act in front of kaajjal 😉 😛 ...ufff we all r now sooooo desperate for this night to happen 😍