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first time reading thizz touched my heart AWESOME it did made me fell better and THank YOo much plzzz continuee

OMG, Kashish!! *standing ovation*👏

This is just as perfect as reading a romance novel..I LOVE IT YAAR!! 😃 You should do us a favor and apply for a position as a scriptwriter for Kaajjal team 😉.

I mean...I am speechless. 😲Never stop writing - this makes my day soooo happy. 😳

I could write a novel saga right now praising you, but I have to study for finals. Please don't think this small comment is any less... 😉 😳

Originally posted by: rwishka17

OMG, Kashish!! *standing ovation*👏

This is just as perfect as reading a romance novel..I LOVE IT YAAR!! 😃 You should do us a favor and apply for a position as a scriptwriter for Kaajjal team 😉.

I mean...I am speechless. 😲Never stop writing - this makes my day soooo happy. 😳

I could write a novel saga right now praising you, but I have to study for finals. Please don't think this small comment is any less... 😉 😳

hey Ritika, first of all best of luck for ur exams. i wish and pray u do excellent and pass with flying colors.

secondly, thanks soo much yar, i am soo glad u liked it. everything i write i write straight from the heart, and so t probably touches everyones heart.

hmmmm, i am thinking of applying as their script writer, 😉 atleast this way we can bring twist and turns but keep k and d together ... i hate these for seperating them sooo badly.

wah kashish its superb 👏 👏
carry on soon,will luv to read it



~halima~

Originally posted by: halima006

wah kashish its superb 👏 👏
carry on soon,will luv to read it



~halima~

thanks a million halima. and as i said above, i will update probably tomorrow and this one is going to be a treat for the weekend ... 😉

Originally posted by: thesaint148

thanks a million halima. and as i said above, i will update probably tomorrow and this one is going to be a treat for the weekend ... 😉

wow thats great,now the weekends wont be boring😆coz there will be lots to read😆

Woooooooowwwwww, brilliant Kashish, I would say better than mine!!!!!

You have a way with words. I loved every word that emoted Dev's feelings for Kaajjal. Superb.

@#@%$%##$@#R#@R#@$#@#!@!~@!@#!@ Dumb Creatives. They don't have the sense to even read what the viewers wish!!!!!! 😡
Waiting for your next part. And thanks a lot for your good wishes. I am much better than before though a little bit in pain and sore due to the injection in my ankle. But much better. Thanks to you and all the other bhootnis for your prayers!!!

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Woooooooowwwwww, brilliant Kashish, I would say better than mine!!!!!

You have a way with words. I loved every word that emoted Dev's feelings for Kaajjal. Superb.

@#@%$%##$@#R#@R#@$#@#!@!~@!@#!@ Dumb Creatives. They don't have the sense to even read what the viewers wish!!!!!! 😡
Waiting for your next part. And thanks a lot for your good wishes. I am much better than before though a little bit in pain and sore due to the injection in my ankle. But much better. Thanks to you and all the other bhootnis for your prayers!!!

autmum, aumtum aumtumn .... i missed you soo much yar ... i am so happy to see you back and and healthy .... hopefully this pain will go soo aswell. all my wishes and prayers .... your way .....

hey hey, thanks for liking my writing autumn, and i so agree, those stupid creatives cant even read what we want. i mean atleast appoint aperson who can go to our FF's and seewhat we want and how we can make this serial a success .... i wish yar ... i hate these twists and turn, i think so much better could have done with this ... so much better.

Ok guys, as promised the part 6 is here as a weekend treat. we all are soo depressed with this atual turns in the serial so this is my dedication to dev and kaajjal for giving us a new meaning of love. i pray they be together forever.

Hey guys, please don't forget to comment, for your comments gives me the strength to carry on. thanks

Part 6

Kaajjal is still quiet; but this time there is an assurance in her, and very slowly, she just puts her head on his shoulder and closes her eyes. This gesture sent a wave of relief to Dev's fearful heart, for Kaajjal would never have kept her head on his shoulder if she hadn't trusted him.

Dev is lost in this beautiful moment and all he wants for now is to bring this world to a stand still. This head on my shoulder if giving me a feeling of pride and honor; this beautiful bride, all dress for me is giving me Goosebumps. And Kaajjal is thinking at this moment, "how I have longed for this moment Dev, how I have longed to put my head on your shoulder and forget this world and the pains associated with it. how I have longed for this sense of security and safety," and at this Kaajjal feels Dev's hand slowly moving around her shoulder and holding her even closer to him. As is he is giving an assurance to her, 'you are mine to protect now. I will take away all your sorrows and will fill your life with love and only love."

"Kaajjal," it was as if an eternity had passed before anyone of them spoke, "aren't you tired of this heavy dress and this ton of jewellery," Dev asks her with eyes still closed. "yes I am, as a matter of fact mujhay garmi lag rahi hai, can u increase the AC's and I will change I guess," kaajjal says this and stands up, without looking at him. Dev senses this jatpatahat of hers again, and his heart smiles, "okay boss, where is the Ac's remote," he talks to himself, and starts looking for it, "there you go," he finds it, and smilingly, he turn up the thermostat. When he turns back to Kaajjal, he finds her taking moving towards the changing room. He immediately holds her hand, and stops her. Kaajjal freezes in her footsteps, Dev has her hand in one hand and Kaajjal's back is towards Dev, infact, little tilted, about 45 degrees. He slowly brings her back to him, "Kaajjal, I have something to give to you before you go," and at this he leaves her hand and moves towards his cupboard. He comes back with a heart shaped box in his hands, and gives it to her, "this is for you, I want to give you the whole world and everything beautiful, and this is for starter," and Kaajjal opens the box, and couldn't believe her eyes. Diamond never looked so beautiful. It's an exquisite 4 carat, princess cut, pink color diamond ring, designed and draped sooo beautifully that eyes where just not ready to leave the sight, "o my God," Kaajjal looks at Dev, and find him already looking at her with love sooo deep in his eyes that Kaajjal's heart skips a beat. "This is … this is soooo beautiful Dev, but I … it must be …. Very expensive, why did you," and Dev silence her with a finger on her lips. "ssshhhhh, this is nothing in front of you Kaajjal, this is just a token of my love, I will fill your life with love and happiness and this is nothing in front of that," and then Dev picks up the ring and slides it into her finger. This was one of the most beautiful sights for him, an unbelievably beautiful ring, in the fingers of this extremely beautiful girl, who belongs to him alone. Kaajjal has tears of happiness and joy in her eyes, "thankyou sooo much Dev, I love you," and unintentionally her arms move around him and she hold him close to her. "tum mil gayay ho tu sab mil gaya hai Dev, sab kuch." And Dev feels as if blood is rushing in and out of his body. He also moves his arms around her and holds her tight, "I love you too Kaajjal," and Kaajjal knew this one moment is leading them to the same destination, a destination filled with passion and desire, and this time Kaajjal doesn't want to hold back, for her true love has come into her life and she wants to cherish it forever.

For some time they stay into each others arms and than Kaajjal breaks this hug, "I better go and change," she says and quickly turns around, shyness is totally engulfing her every thought. And Dev holds her hand, "here," and comes in front of her, "let me help."

Scene Cuts - Karan and Ameesha standing at their usual bar and talking ….

"Ameesha, yeh Dev hi hai … main nay us ki aankhon main dekha hai. That anger when I said something about Kaajjal and that love he had for her." Karan is drinking and telling Ameesha.

"shak tu mujhay bhi ho raha hai, specially during the shadi rasams and everything…. If he is Raju than he is a superb actor .. lekin, the way he was behaving with kaajjal and NT, and now what happened with you, kuch tu garbar hai," Ameesha says ….

"tu ab kya karain .. yeh tu humhain choray ga nahi, specially now that he knows our intentions." Karan says is a worried tone

"u don't worry Karan, hamaray haath main abhi bhi aik aisa hukam ka ikka hai kay jo hum nay show kar diya tu sab kay pairon talay zameen nikal jayay gi" Ameesha has this usual wicked smile on her face.

"do you think its time for that" Karan asks her with a thoughtful look on his face.

"yes it is time, aaj raat hi yeh karma ho ga, kuin kay agar Dev and Kaajjal, aik ho gayay tu halaat hamaray haath say hamesha kay liyay nikal jaain gay" Ameesha says, "abhi loha garam hai, humhain abhi hi war karna ho ga," and Ameesha picks her cell.

"aik baar phir soch lo Ameesha," Karan is a little confused,

"ab sochnay ka nahi karnay ka waqt hai Karan." Ameesha says with a strange kind of assurance, "Dev ko aisa jhatka doon gi, kay Dev kay saath saath Kaajjal aur un ka rishta bhi toot jayay ga" and than she calls someone.

Scene cuts - Wind is blowing outside, and the curtains are waving in the air. Lights are dim, and there we see Dev and Kaajjal standing in the middle of the room and lost into each other. Dev just said, "Here let me help", and at this, Dev very slowly comes close to her. Kaajjal's heart is racing at a pace of 1000 beats per minute; she could hear her heartbeat with every inch that Dev is closing between them. And the song plays in the background:

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan

He slid his fingers through her neck, gently caressing her neck and moving towards her hair and starts removing the pins holding her dupatta. All the time Kaajjal is frozen to the floor, with every pin that Dev is removing, she feels her barriers going down, and she tries to hold her drifting senses. Dev has removed all the pins now and gently drop the dupatta from her forehead. Oh my, how beautiful are you Kaajjal, every roop is amazing, with the dupatta you looked like a beautiful dulhan stealing her grooms heart, without this dupatta you look like a beautiful goddess of love, ready to be taken. He slowly keeps the dupatta on the table close by, and then moves and stands behind her. Very gently, he lifts his hands, opens the necklace thread and removes the necklace from her neck. He puts it on the table as well, and instead of coming in front he continues to stay there, and this time his hands drifted and dwelled on her shoulders and her back. He is gently touching and pressing his fingers on her shoulders and back, and Kaajjal's breathing gets heavy. And the songs continues,

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan

And Dev, how can he stay in his senses anymore, for he knew his touch is playing havocs to her senses, and he wanted to drown himself and her in this pleasure of passion and desire. While tracing her shoulders, her back and her neck with his fingers, he starts to follow the same pattern with his lips. He touches her shoulders with his lips, and her back, and her neck, the side of her neck, so she could feel his hair touching her cheeks, and unintentionally her hands lifts up and she holds his hair with her fingers, as if telling him, 'I cant take it any more, this nearness yet distance is killing me', she takes a deep breath and arches her head back, and this gives Dev more room to burry his lips and head deeper into her neck side.

Dev could feel her back arching towards him, and her head falling back, and her fingers tightening on his hair. Dev's own senses are not in control anymore. He has worshipped this woman for so long, and tonight he will worship her body and soul. Tonight he will give a true tribute of love to his goddess, by showing her the complete and full meaning of love. For tonight love is not just passion but desire; not just tenderness, but urgency; not just sweetness but spicy;

Dev moves his hands forward and holds her from the waist, and presses her towards him. And Kaajjal knew exactly how far they have gone this time, and there is probably no point of return. She is softly sighing with pleasure, and every sigh is telling Dev she wants more, and with every sigh, he wants her more than ever. And the song continues.

Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

Dev then moves his lips towards her ears and is stopped by the big jhumka's still hanging there. "damn, I will kill these jhumka's" he almost said it loudly, and he moves his hands to take off the jhumka, all the time moving his lips on her neck and her back, he takes one jhumka off her ear, and the other one, but this time he is tooo lost in her to find any table and just drops them on the floor. He then moves to her hands, he gently kisses one hand and removes all her rings, repeating the same with other, only leaving the pink diamond, and her mothers ring on. And then he looks at her chodiyan. "Do u wan to remove them" he asks her with a husky voice, still drowned in her neck, and she could feel his every breath touching her and driving her crazy, "no, let them stay," for these chodiyan are a symbol of their love. That's all that she could say for now for her senses are just not allowing her to speak.

He then moves forward to open her hair. Her hair is braided tonight, and he very slowly starts opening the braid, and upon this Kaajjal has the most beautiful smile on her face and in her heart. She thinks, this man who is sooo strong yet so soft, who is hard like a rock yet gentle like a falling snow, who is a terror when he is angry and a baby when he is happy, I am seeing a very different face of him today, I have never seen him like this, nor have I ever seen this passion and desire on his face. This man is a magician whose every touch casts a spell, and every gesture makes me loose my self to him. While still in her thoughts, Dev is done unbraiding her hair. And there she is, standing in front of him, beautiful as ever, a complete picture of beauty and elegance, grace and persona. This girl doesn't need anything to compliment her beauty, she is a compliment to herself. "you are beautiful Kaajjal, and u r making me go insane," this is all that Dev could say and this is all that Kaajjal could hear, for after this Dev had no string of patience left in him, and he crushes her to him, holding her soo tight that she finds it difficult to breath, but who wants to breath right now, she is happy to be like this, and right now even if death claims her, she would die the happiest person, in the arms of her one and only love, someone whom she had worshipped and loved like anything.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

Dev's is done holding back, he is just not ready to let her go, or hold any of his feelings back, "tonight I will show you Kaajjal what is it like to love and be loved, tonight we will live our love truly and completely," and with this he holds Kaajjal up in his arms and lays her on the bed. She sits up on the bed, and Dev comes and sits next to her. Here on this bed, his every touch is like an electric wire sending a current equaling 1000 watts in to her body. She can smell him, she can breath him, and now she wants to touch him, and Dev can clearly see her feelings on her face. Instantly and crazily, Dev holds her head, moves his fingers in her hair and hold her hair tight. He lifts her head up towards him and looks right down into her eyes, and Dev's fiery eyes are not allowing kaajjal to think straight, he looks at her lips, and then her eyes and then her lips, and that's it, the last straw of control is shed and he claims her goddess to pay his final tribute of love, imaginable and unimaginable. With an urgency and desire completely indescribable, he claims her lips as if they are his lifeline. His lips are moving on hers like he is taking possession of his private property. Every kiss is sending a message, that from today onwards no one will ever see you Kaajjal, you are mine to love, and claim, and desire, and take. You are only mine Kaajjal and I am only yours and together we are who we are, otherwise nothing matters. And all Kaajjal could say was "Dev……."

"I love you, Kaajjal, kitna tarpa hoon main is lamhay kay liyay!!" Dev is saying this while still claiming her lips ….. And the passion that she could hear in his voice now, is totally indescribable and new to her. She could feel Dev's body tensing, "Kaajjal ……. Tum meri ho, sirf meri …. Ab main tum say dur nahi reh sakta, nahi reh sakta Kaajjal," ….. and all Kaajjal could say was "Deevvvvvv!!!!" for her last straw of control is shed and she is completely ready to give herself to the one man she had loved soo madly. Dev immediately senses this submission in her gesture and her body and with this he reclaims and the passion which engulfed them this time is beyond words, for tonight all they want is each other, in a way they had never known.

Love was at its peak tonight, and just when Dev is about to comprehend this beautiful night with complete fulfillment of passion and desire, his cell starts to ring.

It comes like a bomb exploding in their ears. With a jolt they both come back to their senses. "Who is God's name is this?" Dev mutters with anger. He wants to throw the cell somewhere far away, and he tries to do so by ignoring the call, "Dev, please take the call," "no Kaajjal, I don't want anything between us tonight," he has his head buried in her shoulder, "nahi Dev, see who's it, it might be important. After all who would call at this time." And reluctantly Dev picks the phone.

Episode Ends ….

wow kashish that was so passionate and came it form the heart and it was the best post it is just like a romance predicition post wow I really loved it so so so much you should write more and tabela scence too 👏