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Posted: 18 years ago
Omg Kashish! First of all, i deeply deeply deeply apologize for not have started reading your FF earlier. By the time I started getting the PMS, you were well into the FF, and I didnt have the patience to read all of it. 😆 😆 😆 That is my fault! Sorrryyy 😳 😳 But last night, after reading your work for the dedication to my Ritu, I just wanted to read more of your work, so I started your FF!

I cannot believe what I have missed! Its simply undescribeable! The scenes, the plot, the detail! Everything, just so superb! I love it how DK are waiting for soo long for their special night, but keep getting interupted 😆

And Payals baccck! 😲 And shes Evil!! I hope they realize her truth soon!

But anywho, Just outstanding as usual. So deep your words! As always! Beautiful! please dont leave me hanging and continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

Omg Kashish! First of all, i deeply deeply deeply apologize for not have started reading your FF earlier. By the time I started getting the PMS, you were well into the FF, and I didnt have the patience to read all of it. 😆 😆 😆 That is my fault! Sorrryyy 😳 😳 But last night, after reading your work for the dedication to my Ritu, I just wanted to read more of your work, so I started your FF!

I cannot believe what I have missed! Its simply undescribeable! The scenes, the plot, the detail! Everything, just so superb! I love it how DK are waiting for soo long for their special night, but keep getting interupted 😆

And Payals baccck! 😲 And shes Evil!! I hope they realize her truth soon!

But anywho, Just outstanding as usual. So deep your words! As always! Beautiful! please dont leave me hanging and continue soon 😳

Aww sharnu Darling, i must thank ritu than to convince me to write for the cliff scene. Having you read my work is a great thing. u see some people are very specail to me on this forum and you surely are one of them .... i am soo happy that u liked the plot and the story line and yeah the wait they had been going through for their one special night ... everytime they get close to the final straw and than something happens. but the best part is their love, which is growing strongera nd stronger everyday the trust and faith they have in each other is beyond words.

u see, after seeing payal and dev in terrace kaajjal had many questions, But the love they share is sooo strong that she is just not ready to mistrust him.

hmmm, i will also write some more for and Ritu about the cliff sequesnce. some more from there on just for a change of taste. but once again i thank ritu to ask me to write, for i got you as my reader 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: thesaint148

Aww sharnu Darling, i must thank ritu than to convince me to write for the cliff scene. Having you read my work is a great thing. u see some people are very specail to me on this forum and you surely are one of them .... i am soo happy that u liked the plot and the story line and yeah the wait they had been going through for their one special night ... everytime they get close to the final straw and than something happens. but the best part is their love, which is growing strongera nd stronger everyday the trust and faith they have in each other is beyond words.

u see, after seeing payal and dev in terrace kaajjal had many questions, But the love they share is sooo strong that she is just not ready to mistrust him.

hmmm, i will also write some more for and Ritu about the cliff sequesnce. some more from there on just for a change of taste. but once again i thank ritu to ask me to write, for i got you as my reader 😊

Aww Darling, I feel so honered! Thank you! From now, I have become a dedicated reader of this FF! You'll always find my comments ecouraging you to go on 😃😳 Yes... the way they keep waiting, but their wait has made their love stronger, their trust stronger! I think that is just so beautiful! And the way you have showed it, is whats makes it so beautiful!

That is also what I liked! That Kaajjal trusts Dev so much that just with Devs expressions, she can read all, and vice-versa. Payals return, instead of making them weaker, its making their love stronger, and thats what I love so much 😳

Aww! Just always keep writing for us! Always! Its a treat to read your writings 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: hmala

kashish,Ureally'great
you are giving the happiness, which the kaajjal makers are failing to give that, kaash, appu aap ke script pe kaam karthaa,
Kashish the writer
Appu the actor....
What a great combination it would have been...I am sure, apoorva will be perfect to show the expressions what kashish di wants from Dev...
I can't wait for your next episode...
I hope you are already working on that

thankyou soo much mala. i am really glad u see u liked my work soo much. hmmm to be frank you have said it all. the passiona nd power i want to see in dev can only be portrayed by Apoorva. only he can do justice to my writing. i wish i get one chance of working with him. he is truly a wonderful actor. simply wonderful!!!

yeah dear i will continue soon. in the meanwhile u can read "Kaajjal after ML" u might find it interesting!!! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey guys, please don't forget to comment, for your comments gives me the strength to carry on. thanks

Part 21

She tightens her arms around his neck and hugs him one more time. Dev could feel her arms tightening, as if she would never let him go, and he smiles,

"Kya baat hai, bara pyar aa raha hai?" he says with his head buried in her hair. The words bring a beautiful shyness in her whole being, and her grip automatically loosens.

"nahi nahi, chornay ko tu nahi kaha," he pulls her back into his arms.

"ab tu sari umr aisay hi rehna hai." He says with immense love, and Kaajjal's heart smiles, for her doubts are now over, and her love is shining again.

"Kaajjal," he whispers,

"Hmmm" she hums

"aur kitna dur rehna ho ga humhain? Mujh say aur intezaar nahi hota." she can feel his body tapering with the need of holding her and loving her completely.

"Mujh say bhi …" she whispers, and suddenly holds her breath … 'o gosh what did I just say' she feels she is going to die with this shyness, and Dev can feel it in her. He breaks their embrace and looks into her eyes,

"Main us raat ka besabri say intezar karoon ga, jab tum meri bahoon main ho gi, aur hamary darmiyaan koee nahi aayay ga … koee bhi nahi," he has a very passionate yet dreamy expression on his face, as if he is already lost in that moment. The husky voice, the passion, the emotion, the desire, Kaajjal looses herself in his voice. He holds her cheek in one palm, closes his eyes and rests his forehead on hers. Their lips are inches apart and they are breathing each other. Both are lost in each other's fragrance, and living each other. None wants this moment to end, but a car - passing by, brings them back to senses.

They take a deep breath and moves away from each other, still trying to get hold of themselves.

"Ab tum jao Kaajjal," Dev says with difficulty, for he knows that he wants her sooo much right now that if this moment prolongs, he might end up taking her back home. Kaajjal can hear this seriousness and intensity in his voice, for she herself, wants him sooo bad that she does not care about anything. But papa – she has to go. She bends forwards, and kisses on his cheek,

"I love you Dev,"

"I love you too Kaajjal," Once again their eyes lock and he says in a husky tone,

"I'll see you in the morning. Mera intezaar karna." Kaajjal nods and steps out of the car with her bag.

Kaajjal is lying on the hospital sofa, deep in her thoughts, ashamed on her own self for not trusting Dev. 'how could I do this, how???' she can't believe herself. 'Mujhay maaf kar daina Dev,' she pleads in her heart, 'ab kabhi tum pay shak nahi karoon gi. Kabhi nahi!!! I promise ….' And while thinking about Dev and her undying love for him, she drifts to sleep.

Scene changes

"Doctor, is he ok now," the doctors comes in the morning for checkup and Kaajjal is curious.

"Yes he is fine, you can take him home," the doctor replies, "but remember what I said, and take good care of him, especially for the first four weeks." Kaajjal nods, for she remembers that the doctor said he has some head injuries and no strain or stress should be given to him. None at all.

"I'll take-care doctor." Kaajjal looks at the doctor and he leaves.

"Ab aap nay sirf araam karna hai papa," Kaajjal turns her gaze to Satya. "waisay bhi, thank God college main vacation chal rahi hain tu you can completely rest."

"Lekin tumharay baghair mera dil kaisay lagay ga beta" Satya says with a sad by content look, and Kaajjal's heart melts.

"Papa" she comes close to him, not knowing what to say

"Par yehi sapna tu dekha tha mainne aur tumhari mama nay." He holds her mehndi walay hands,

"tumharay hathon main us insaan ki mehndi dekhnay ka jis say tum duniya main sab say zyada pyar karo, aur jo tum say duniya main sab say zyada pyar karay." Satya is still holding her hands with all the love for his daughter, and Dev enters the room. He has overheard their conversation and his heart has melted as well. How a girl has to leave her house and every thing behind her and move to a new house, make new relations, and live a new life. And how willingly she does that. Making her husband the center of her life and every happiness.

Satya looks at Dev and smiles,

"namastay papa, kaisay hain aap?" Dev looks at Satya than Kaajjal, than back to Satya and asks with a heart-warming smile, and Kaajjal looks at him.

"Ab behtar hoon" Satya replies smilingly. But Kaajjal; she is lost in this handsome man, freashly bathed, dressed in a white suit and a purple and black striped shirt. His top-two shirt buttons are open, and his chest is peeping out of the hollow V-opening. His manly scent is hitting her nostrils and driving her crazy. Oh this smell, this scent, she wants to run into his arms, but ahhhhhh papa …. J Dev senses Kaajjal's intense gaze and looks at her. All of the sudden Kaajjal drops her eyes as if she is caught, and trying to hide. Dev smiles. How he wants to hold her and tell her,

'main tu ab tumhara hi hoon, jitna jee chahay dekho. Tumhari pyar bhari nazroorn main hi tu meray jeenay ki wajah hai.'

there is a silence in the room for some moments, and then he speaks,

'Kaajjal, I have talked to the doctor, and signed the discharge papers, so shall we go?"

"Beta, wo, mera bill. Give me the slip beta, I'll pay." Satya interrupts

"Ab aap nay paraya kar diya papa." Dev says with immense sincerity,

"Beta bhi kehtay hain, aur formality bhi."

"Lekin beta," Satya insists.

"Betay ki baat maan li jati hai papa." He holds Kaajjal's bag,

"ab chalain." He smiles and gets hold of Satya's arms to support him to walk.

Kaajjal is seeing and hearing this conversation between Satya and Dev, and all of a sudden, she feels her heart soaring with respect for Dev. She feels like bending down and touching his feet again and showing him - what he means to her, and how she appreciates his care and concern for her papa. She saves this moment in her heart to relive it when they are alone, showing him what he means to her.

Scene change

"Dev, hum kahan ja rahay hain." Satya asks while Dev is driving.

"yeh tu tumharay ghar ka rasta hai?" Satya is confused.

"ji papa, aglay 4 haftay you are staying with us." Dev says, and Kaajjal who is sitting next to Dev looks at him in surprise.

"what? nahi nahi beta, how can I stay there. No no, please drop me at my place." Satya is at loss of words. At this Dev looks at papa in the rear view mirror, and then Kaajjal, for he knows Kaajjal has questions in her mind as well.

"papa, Kaajjal, the doctor did tell me about the next four weeks being critical and we can't leave you at your place, without someone to take care of you." Kaajjal feels her heart soaring with love and respect for him, who just listens to her every thought without her saying a single word. This is exactly what was bothering her for the whole night, and she was wondering what to do. She just wants to hug him very very tight right now, but she saves this moment as well in her heart to relive it when they are alone.

"beta Hottie hoti hai na," Satya is still insisting.

"papa, Hottie waisay hi apni job main busy rehti hain, aap bilkul akailay ho jaain gay." dev insists as well.

"lekin beta,"

"papa, please, beta bhi kehtay hain aur betay ki baat bhi nahi mantay." Dev tries to give him assurance.

"lekin NT bhabi kya sochain gi." Satya is confused.

"kuch bhi nahi, she herself has asked me to bring you home. Infact your room is ready and everything is set." Dev looks at Satya in the backview mirror and then shifts his gaze to Kaajjal and back to the road.

"Bas papa, ab aap araam karain. Don't stress your self." Kaajjal looks at Satya and assures him with her eyes, and very reluctantly, Satya agrees.

Scene change

The house is getting ready for tonight's party. People are moving here and there, flowers, catering, arrangement, styling; every department had its own set of specialist working on it. Everyone is sitting in the living lounge and having tea.

"NT ji, aap logon nay itna takalluf kiya, I will be ok at my place, really." Satya looks at NT.

"bhai sahib, yeh bhi tu aap ka ghar hai. Aap araam say yahan rahiyay. Hum sab hain yahan aap ka khayal rakhnay kay liyay, wahan aap akailay hotay tu Kaajjal kay saath humhain bhi paraishani lagi rehti." NT says with a smile,

"aur sach poochain tu aap kay yahan rehnay main hamara hi faida hai," NT adds and everyone gives her a surprised look.

"bhaee faida yeh hai kay hamari Kaajjal ko aap say milnay kay liyay ab kaheen jana bhi nahi pray ga, aur mujhay har waqt is ka muskurata hwa chehra nazar aata rahay ga." NT looks at Kaajjal very lovingly.

"ab kya kahoon bhai sahib, hamaray ghar ki ronaq hai Kaajjal, aur Dev kay chehray ki bhi." Dev smiles at this with a sweet look on his face and looks at Kaajjal, who is giving a blushing smile as well; everyone is happy to see them happy and smilling.

Episode Ends ….

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Posted: 18 years ago
awww kashish di!! well done 👏 👏 👏. i absolutely love it!! i love the part when dev and kaajjal are alone in the car.. so passionate! 😳

love,
Avanti
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Posted: 18 years ago
Kashish that was the best episode ever. It was sooo wonderfully described! I loved the part where Dk confessed how they were dying to be in each other's arms
I must say your updates are laakho mei ek, and you are a gem! Hats off to you and your mindblowingly superb updatesand the excellent description! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
great job Kushi i loved it
and iam so happy that there wasn't any evil Aemesh or Payal 😡
and i loved the part where Kajjal was staring at Dev in the hospital and Dev looks at her 😆
Kushi ur great at writing FF
when ever i read ur FF it feels to me like iam actuly watcing it instead of reading it
fablious job 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part of ur fanfic! yay...no signs of the wicked ameesha and payal..cant wait for the next part :D
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part Kashish it was excellent and there was no payal or ameesha and DK moments were awesome GR8 job Kashish and do continue because every ff you always write is so sweet and nice thank you for sharing us bhootis your FF's. 👏

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