DK FAN FICS BY BHOOTNIS - last part pg47 - Page 37

haiiiiiiiii jyotiiiiiiii it was just hilariousssssssssssssssss 😉

mom calling him adi-bakra....wowowoowowowowo

n dat mark on his handddd..........hahahahahahah only u can come up wid dat tabela thinga........😳😆😛

dhruv the giant returned.......yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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really cracked me uppppppp

lmao!!! kaju phas gayee ab kb zarror mujhe phasayegi 😳😆

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love,

nikki 🤗

Originally posted by: jyoti06

"Aditya ke left hand mein ek tabela ka picture-sketch hai,and its like a unique birth-mark 😆 😆

"jab mein chota tha tabh mom mujhe adi-bakra kehke bulati thi 😆 ,

"Amar akbar anthony part two remake ho rahela hai" 😆 😛

bhutta-giant called dhruv-gadha has arrived" 😆 ;

,yamraaj took him to narklog but narklog was house-full that time with ameesha-chudail,karan-giant and payal-dragon 😕 and thats why yamraj had to shift dhruv-gadha to the city of bhuttas 😆 😕

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hahAHAHAhahahaha...lmao!...hts was so fnny...esp. the birth mark bit!!!!

Very well written!👏

And guys u dont have to say thx fr what i said be4....i meant it and u all succeed in makin me laugh...and heres another FF i actli am gonna keep track of!😉

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Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Ingenious!!!!!! Mishti, superb twist!!! 🤣 Ghada back!!!! 🤣

Gosh, you made my day!!! 🤣

Autumn its good to see laughing soo much😛...between yes dhruv-gadha is better than Adi-bakra😡 and thats why I hv brought him back at least in our FF😳..Even though Adi-Bakra is positive in our FF

Originally posted by: nikki05

haiiiiiiiii jyotiiiiiiii it was just hilariousssssssssssssssss 😉

mom calling him adi-bakra....wowowoowowowowo

n dat mark on his handddd..........hahahahahahah only u can come up wid dat tabela thinga........😳😆😛

dhruv the giant returned.......yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

👏

really cracked me uppppppp

lmao!!! kaju phas gayee ab kb zarror mujhe phasayegi 😳😆

🤣

love,

nikki 🤗

Nikki I hv brought dhruv-gadha bback just for u😛..and now there will b a mahayudh between dhruv-gadha and adi-bakra😕😆...Lets see how kaju handles the situation and phasaofy u😉

Originally posted by: ~srk_abhi_apu~

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hahAHAHAhahahaha...lmao!...hts was so fnny...esp. the birth mark bit!!!!

Very well written!👏

And guys u dont have to say thx fr what i said be4....i meant it and u all succeed in makin me laugh...and heres another FF i actli am gonna keep track of!😉

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Aww thats soo sweet of u that u like our mockery FF😆😛..Actually dhruv had this bhutta fetish when he was there in the serial and he once send bhuttas to kajal in the office and from then on we always associate dhruv with bhuttas😆..so this time it will b clash of the titans...dhruv-bhutta-giant verses Adi-bakra😆😆

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Nikki I hv brought dhruv-gadha bback just for u😛..and now there will b a mahayudh between dhruv-gadha and adi-bakra😕😆...Lets see how kaju handles the situation and phasaofy u😉

jyotiiiiiiiiiii you did an awesomeeeeeeeeee job my jaannnnnnnnnn..........kaju u better not phasofy me yaar 😛 mein bw ko maar nahi paaongi......Lmao!! 🤣

hmmm... pehli baat to yeh hai, i am SOOO sorry.... i have just managed to disappear off the face of the earth 😳 lekin baat yeh hai, my little cousin (only 2 years old, bless him) has a REALLY bad fever, infact he had a convulsion fit on friday night and had to be rushed to the hospital 😭 so yeah, i have been looking after at his house (his parents are worried to bits...) i will do my part, in fact i have even started it... lol, but you might have to wait a little longer... it most probably will be done by the end of this week 😉 for now... i will be praying for my little brother's recovery 😃... oh, and i will comment on your parts when i do my part gagori JI 😆 byeeee.... talk to you soon 😊

hey my kb so glad to c ya here after such a longggggggggg timeeeeeeee 😃😉

hey jaan dont worry re......u just b strong 😊........we all will surely pray 4 ur cousin dear 😊

dont worry everyfink will b alrite sweetu.......😊 God is greattttttttt.......He has power over all things 😃

tk cr. nikki bhidu misses her kaju bhiduuuuuuuu very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😭

come soooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn dear 😊

love,

NB 🤗

Originally posted by: kaju.patel

hmmm... pehli baat to yeh hai, i am SOOO sorry.... i have just managed to disappear off the face of the earth 😳 lekin baat yeh hai, my little cousin (only 2 years old, bless him) has a REALLY bad fever, infact he had a convulsion fit on friday night and had to be rushed to the hospital 😭 so yeah, i have been looking after at his house (his parents are worried to bits...) i will do my part, in fact i have even started it... lol, but you might have to wait a little longer... it most probably will be done by the end of this week 😉 for now... i will be praying for my little brother's recovery 😃... oh, and i will comment on your parts when i do my part gagori JI 😆 byeeee.... talk to you soon 😊

Awww kaju, I shall pray too. Don't worry and keep faith in God, all shall be well!!!😊

aww thanks autumn and nikku bhiddu, cho chweet of you... and also thank you for the PM's as well, lol, didnt really expect them😕 but it was very sweet of all of you.... and once again sorry for the delay 😳....

i SWEAR gagori, if i sat here and typed out all the quotes and the bits i found funny, we would be here all day... LEKIN i just HAD to quote the 2 main ones, lol...

"been killed by us twice or thrice" and "Amar akbar anthony part two remake" 🤣

jyoti, i just went crazy with laughter after reading those 2 lines... of course, i loved it all, as usual, there wasnt a single dialogue that i didnt NOT (😕) have to smile at i just couldnt help myself, but the 2 i mentioned above, ohh... no words dude, no words... HELL, im the one who killed all our villains and cant remember how many times i've killed them all 😕... lol, and the amar akhbar anthony pun.... TOP CLASS... i bow down at your feet GM 😆😆.... as for MY bit? i have to think how i can kill this STRONGER dhruv-gadha... lol and also bring raju and chameli back to their senses AND also think of a twist for nikku bhiddu.... (not necessary in that order 😛😉😆)

im thinking we're in need of another key today, lol

R/C- Raju/Chameli
D/K- Dev/Kaajjal
AB(B)- Adi-Bakra (Bhaiyya)
DG- Dhruv Gadha
NT~mom- Nayantara Mom
DD- Deadly Dwarfs

and just then dhruv-gadha breaks the tabela door and enters at the dvaar and starts laughing loudly "HUHAHAHAHAHAHA"... on seeing D/K/R/C he gets shook up and says "TUM SAB?!?! YAHAN?!?!" D/K can see the fear in his eyes, but then DG toughens up and says "nahin, main tumse kyun darunga? wahan to do wicket to gayi (pointing at R/C) aur rahe tum dono (pointing at D/K) ab tum dono mera kya bigaronge? especially now that i am much STRONGER" HUHAHAHAHAAAAAAA... D/K and NT-mom all gather together to where R/C are lying down and discuss the fact that he is right, there is not much they can do... AB joins them and says "pehle to in dono ko to hosh main laou, aur phir hum sab milke brainstorm karenge" they all shake R/C into waking up, in which they succeed... "are, maine to BHAYANAK sapna dekha ke dhruv wapas aa gaya tha" says raju.... "haan haan, maine bhi wahi dekhan tha" follows chameli, they both are about to say something when they both see DG stood at the tabela entrance and collapse again... dev rolls his eyes and says "ab in dono ko abhi marna tha" NT-mom looks at dev to say "dont talk like that"... dev looks guilty and then they all try again to wake them up... after a lot of pinching, slapping, shouting, joote smelling 🤢 and shaking, they FINALLY manage to wake them up... they all pull themselves up and just stare at DG thinking what ought to be done when raju says "ab karna kya hai? DG ke haathon se marna hai, aur kya?" chameli hits raju at the side of the head and says "oye rangeele, thare ko ke? mein apne bachchi ko is gabar singh ke haathon se marne dungi? chal chal, humne to haathon mein chudiyan pehn rakhi hain, lekin humko apne bache ki raksha karna aata hai, ke bole kaajjal?"... kaajjal steps forward and says "haan, chalo chameli" they both hand over their babies to NT-mom and walk towards DG when raju and dev grab them and pull them back dev looks at kaajjal and says "tum dono kaafi chalak hoon, tumhe pata hai ke hum dono tum logue ko nahin jaane denge isiliye yeh sab natak?" raju steps up and says "haan, lekin mein bhi rangeela hoon, RAJU rangeela, to kya hua agar yeh DG voldemort ke jaisa hai, humme to apne parivaar ki raksha karna jaante hoon, ab aane do usse yahan"... AB then interrupts saying "woh yahan andar nahin aa sakta, woh sirf dvaar pe khada re sakta hai" everyone looks at each other and smiles when NT-mom says "arey, yeh to achi baat hui, woh wahan khada rahenga aur tum logue uska sharvanaash.... lekin ek baat to hain, hum logue DG ko maar to denge, lekin narglok mein to jagah bhi nahin hain, to phir...?" to which kaajjal replies "mummyji, aap fikar maat kijiye, hum DG ko maar ke, uske aatma ko is bottle mein bandh kar lenge, aur phir hum sab milke kuch sochenge...." R/D and AB all run towards DG grabbing a spear each from the DD... but that doesnt seem to hurt him.... the DD also join in trying to kill DG however it alll seems futile... DG grabs all the spears and throws them aside... K/C and NT-mom huddle up close and begin to worry as to what will happen when kaajjal remembers something... she calls dev raju and adi-bakri and says "kabhi kabhi jaanwaron ko maar na aasaan hojata hai jab unka bali chadate hain..." so then AB replies with "nothing to lose, tum logue sab pooja ki tayari karon, aur hum sab DG ko bandh denge..." kaajjal and chameli place the babies on a stack of hay and with NT-mom begin to gather hay and sticks for the agni... whilst the men grab some rope and try to pin DG down and tie him up... chameli suddenly stops and says "aie kaajjal, agar bhagwan ko bali ka special offer ( meaning "offering") dena hai, to phir bhagwan ki murti to chahiye na?" to which one DD replies, "humara paas hai bhagwan ki murti, KALI MAA" kaajjal replies "woh PERFECT hai, woh yahan le aayenge please" the DD looks confused and says "nahin nahin, woh Perfect Maa nahin, Kali Maa hai" kaajjal rolls her eyes and thinks she hasnt got time for this so she just says "haan, aap sirf kali maa ki murti ko yahan pe le-aayenge?" the DD scatters off with another 3 of his DD friends and all come back with the murti and some aarti ka saamaan... at this point all the men have managed to bring the DG down and tied him up ready for the bali.... K/C do the aarti and the rest of the formalities whilst DG struggles to loosen himself up... D/R grab the khadga (sword) from Kali Maa's hand and both stab DG (👏 **phew**) killing him in an instant.... chameli quickly grabs a bottle and traps the soul into it, closing it tight... everyone sighs a deep relief sigh when NT-mom says "abhi aaram ka waqt nahin hai, hume soch na hai ke narglok main jagah kaise karenge....

WOOOOOH, finally, lol... ok, im sorry its not one of me BEST work yet, lekin im just wanting to see how nikku bhiddu will make space in narglok... hehe... good luck my JAAAAAAAAN