Jyoti 11th June (Written Update)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I have just come home guys from school after my chem exam !!!
So just gimme few minutes to eat something and then i shall be back with the written update for u all sorry for the wait 😳 😳 😳


Sushuma is revising and brij is singing. sushuma requests him if he culd practice later as its disturbing her. he goes i am singing a romantic song here and u r sitting with those useless books. Then he goes ok i shuld take a break and asks sushuma to make him a cup of tea. She goes lemme finish this chapter first. brij gets angry and says i am being nice and u r just throwing attitude and orders her to make him tea. Sushuma gets scared and goes to make it. A manager from a hotel calls and tells brij that his band and dancer has left so if brij culd come i wil giv u a chance from this evening with my dancer. he is so happy he calls sushuma and says get ready we have got work this evening. She looks unhappy and says in a hotel. Brij goes yeah in surya hotel. She goes i have exams from tomo. Brij goes to keep our stomach fill we need to work ur studies wont fill our tummys .

Jyoti is taking her jewellery out in sishu mangal when kalpana comes singing and looking very happy and says jyoti ur life is starting a new phase. Jyoti looks a bit upset when kalpana goes why r u so off mood its ur wedding and look at me i am so happy. Jyoti goes every girl since a child has a dream of how she is goning to get married and all she goes when my chance has finally come i cant feel anything.My mind has gone blank i am scared. Kalpana goes every girl has wedding fears. She goe su r lucky ur husband loves u so much i am sure so will ur in laws. And are happy to hav u as there daughter in law. This is ur happy phase in liufe .

Brij is singing and sushuma is dancing in the hotel. Everyone is enjoying and one is looking at sushuma in a bad way and comes to the stage and throws money at her. Sushuma is a bit scared and brij indicates her to pick the money up. She doesnt and then brij does the needful. Sushuma starts dancing again and goes towards brij and says that tomo is my exam and says i havent finsihed my studies for it. brij goes smile and dance ur studies dont give us money. Sushuma cries and remembers how her mum was encouraging her to study. She is crying while dancing. everyone claps. they come home and brij says the work is a bit hard but if we manage it will be good money.
Sushuma starts to revise again when brij goes this is no time to study go and sleep because if ur eyes r swollen tomo no one will look at u or ur dance. he goes study in the morning even i am sleepy so sleep. sushuma goes but in the morning i have my exam so i have to revise in the night. brij goes r u gonna become a collector after studies. So go and sleep now as i told u. She sees that brij has slept she switches the lights on and starts to revise again. Brij wakes up and asks what is this I told u once dont u understand now turn the light off u just spoilt my sleep. She goes look if i dont study today my whole year will go to waste. She goes i will give u a towel keep that on ur eyes and try to sleep please. she goes iw ill soon turn it off. brij goes what were u doing for the whole year i bet u didnt study and went to watch movies with ur frnds. Brij says if u just study for 2 hours nothing wil happen. he warns her close the light or else . Then he gets a bit calm and says i will wake u up in the morning now please close the light. She puts the alarm on and goes to sleep.

Kalpana and her mum come to jyotis room. Kalpana complains that look mum u told me to get ready to early in the morning and the bride herself is not ready. Kalpana's mum says u r right the bride shuld be ready by now. Jyoti goes buh this earli in the morning aunty. Kalapna yeah stupdi because we need to do ur haldi (putting yellow stuff ) before the wedding.Jyoti goes whats the need of doing it. KM(kalpana mum) says no dnt say that for a bride this ceremony is very imp. Kalpana goes listen to me n mum the big ones here and listen to our orders (hehe such a joka she is ). Everyone laughs. Kalpana's driver comes and asks if he shuld keep the suitcases here and Km says yeah. Jyoti goes whats all this Kalpana goes as i am staying here till the wedding so i got all my stuff. Jyoti goes but for one day so much stuff. kalpana goes stupid this is for u . Jyoti goes for me ? KM says yes we shopped for u a little yesterday (wow they shopped loads ) as u r going to ur in laws we thought to get u new clothes and some daily use stuff. (there are some very beautiful saares and jewellery) Jyoti goes what kind of wedding is this. Kalpana days what do u mean every wedding is like this. Jyoti gets a bit emotional as kalpana says that mum said she has two daughters. Kalpana goes on this happy occasion on crying. She goes when we separate that time u can remember me and cry. Kalpana goes i knw jyoti u have faced a lot in life but forget ur past and think botu ur future, New life new journey. Kalpana goes take my advise dont keep any of the past in ur mind. today is ur imp day go on smiling promise me.

Jyoti comes down and sees Pm (pankaj mum ) sitting there and kids r looking at the stuff she got when jyoti goes to them to leave and she touches PM's leg. PM gives her blessing and Jyoti asks how comes u came out of a sudden and what is all this. PM goes consider me as ur mum not mum in law who can come to see her daughter anytime . She goes we have agreed to urs and pankaj's wish of having a simple wedding but by doing all these small ceremonies give respect to us . Jyoti agrees. PM says as i am ur mum now lets start the ceremony by putting haldi on u . Kalpana and her mum listen to all this and get happy. KM says by listening to all this i am relieved that jyoti culdnt have got a better husband and family. KM goes jyoti will always be like a daughter for u buh for now lemme be the mum and do these ceremonies. Kalpana introduces pankajs mum to her mum. PM says i am very delighted to meet u and listening to ur talks i felt very nice. She goes u have the right and gives her the plate with the haldi in it. PM and KM leave. Jyoti looks sad again and kaplana asks whats wrong now. Jyoti goes i want a simple wedding i told pankaj ji that as well then all this. Kalpana goes wedding is about two families getting together not just a boy and girl . She goes u need to think bout ur in laws happiness as well.

The final scene was the shishumangal kids dancing around Pankaj's mom, who too is enjoying. Kalpana points out to Jyoti how the kids never experienced anything like it, and thanks to her wedding, they'll get to experience it. This brings a smile to Jyoti's face, and she agrees that if her sacrificing a simple wedding for a grand one will make them happy, it's worth having.

Precap- haldi ceremony.....
Edited by Naughtynatty - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sushma wanted to dance - she thought she was better than Jyoti - so now look what she has to do! And, if I were a guy, I would never want to humilate my wife by having her dance at a hotel having slimy guys throwing money at her.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The final scene was the shishumangal kids dancing around Pankaj's mom, who too is enjoying. Kalpana points out to Jyoti how the kids never experienced anything like it, and thanks to her wedding, they'll get to experience it. This brings a smile to Jyoti's face, and she agrees that if her sacrificing a simple wedding for a grand one will make them happy, it's worth having.

However, what happened to yesterday's closing scene - Uday's mom throws open the question about what if Jyoti is marrying for the money? Did they not show a closure to that conversation? Maybe Pm could have explained to her Jyoti's circumstances, and why her family is not around, and also that money was the one thing that made Jyoti actually reluctant to marry him?

Also, the precap they showed of the haldi - already shown in one of the precap threads.

P.S. I love how the 'simple' wedding has been hijacked into a big party 👏
Edited by Chandraketu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY sup I MIGHT NOT KNOW BUYT I WAS JUST READING YOUR WRITTEN UPDATE AND I SAW THAT U JUST HAD YOUR CHEM EXMAMS HMM MIN EIS TOMORROW MORNING I WAS WONDERING IF YOU CAN HELP ME OUT..IN CHEMISTRY SERIOULY IM DOING VERY BAD IN THAT COURSE. CAN YOU PLEAS HELP ME..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks chandra for completing it i am kinda tied up in sum work....

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