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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hopeenlight

Beautiful story line so far and far more interesting than what is being dished out on the show.. thank you so much for taking the time to put such well thought out story line for our lovely Mithvi. I would be so lost without these FFs, since I stopped watching the show.. Keep up the great work!!

Thanks Asha 🤗
I am so glad you liked it and super thanks for the commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

Loved it! Absolutely freaking amazing!!! They just need to let go of their egos...well its mostly Meera. But still both have their egos ...she's being a lil rude to him when he saved her. But I mean he hasn't really been heart-warming either. LOL Anyways fantastic update!

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Posted: 12 years ago



Chapter 9

Suddenly a loud sound of thud brought them crashing back ruthlessly to reality.

The folding bed which was behind the almirah had fallen on the floor, making the loudest sound that can ever be made on planet earth.

Meera felt awkward was an understatement , to the undescribed wave of emotions starting from her stomach and slicing her ribcage and reaching her heart.

Her heart was hammering inside her ribcage at a speed which she thought would if continued to beat like this would crack her ribcage and be in her hands at any moment of time now.

Realizing that she was in his arms and didn't even allowed official resistance made her even more angry... at herself.

She started struggling to get out his arms.

Meera:Let me go.
Prithvi: Are you sure??

Meera raised both of her eyebrows to form perfect arrow and made prithvi's heart beat even faster than Meera's, he never knew girls could smother and then also manage to look irresistibly cute.

Meera: What makes you think I don't want to move out of this.. from your gruff stiff ugly large hands.

Prithvi: So you know my hands are large...
Meera snappped back.
Meera :I dont like big hands
Prithvi: So what kinds of hands you like.

Meera realized that this conversation was going in a direction that would be even more awkward than the current mess.

Meera: Leave me NOW.

Prithvi could not stop himself from smirking at her annoyance on her actions, denying the obvious which made Meera cringe even more.
Her cringe and his smirk were directly proportional, the more she cringed the more he smirked making her want to kill him even more.

Prithvi: OK , relax, I will let you go,but first you have to leave my hand which you have been holding for the past couple of minutes.

Meera couldn't believe herself when she found that she was the one who was still holding his hand as tightly as possible She had subconsciously been holding his hand and was so lost in his eyes that she forget where her hand was.Her cheeks became brilliant shade of pink on being caught red-handed.
She was not accustomed to be caught red-handed , her expression was some where between blushing, being annoyed at herself,
embarrassing and angry that Prithvi had caught her red handed.

Meera(s***, How could I let this happen)
Meera(Why doesn't the earth open up when you want it ...)

she let go off his hand as soon as possible and prthivi let her go reluctantly and made her sit on the bed.She couldn't meet his eyes
and was trying very hard to concentrate on not so much concentratable stuff in the room.

After moments of awkward silence hanging between them like an invisible wall
Prithvi: Are you hungry??
Meera: No
Prithvi : Are you sure??

Meera was obviously hungry but since when has ego been rational and logical..

Meera: I said I am not hungry
Prithvi :Ok, I will get the food and keep it in the room when you are hungry, you can have it.
Meera:What ever...


Prithvi went outside and brought a plate with some food that was covered with another plate.She wasn't able to see the contents.
He kept the plate on the same stool where the jug of water was kept.
All this while Meera was trying to look at everything except him.

Meera:My clothes are torn, I want something to wear.
Prithvi:Be my guest, Pick anything from my personal collection of ladies finery lying in front of you in these tatters.

Meera narrowed her eyes to the person across the room who was leaving no strone unturned to go for the first kill of her life.

Meera (ohhh, I am so gonna roast him)

Prithvi pushed the almirah back to its place and opened it, he took out a pair of kurta and dhoti and gave to Meera.

Meera made a face while picking the kurta and dhoti

Meera: eewww, What is this?
Prithvi: I thought your eyes weren't hurt.
meera: very funny, what is this?you surely don't expect me to wear this.
Prithvi: This is the only thing I have got if you want to change.
meera:I can't wear this
Prithvi:thanks for not wearing, I only have one extra pair..

Meera was now beyond furious at the audacity of the man standing in front of her.

Prithvi:I am going out for some work and will return later, till then don't try to be stand.

Meera tried to be as unaffected as possible although prithvi's comment had made her want to stand and show him her walking, running and more importantly her
kicking skills but after her miserable failed attempt she knew her short comings.And life had taught her to first overcome her weak points before venturing into any kind of fight.

Meera(that was so totally blow the belt mister,Wait till my legs are strong enough to kick you in your sorry a**)

Prithvi started walking towards the door and turned back just on the door and

Prithvi :By the way I am Prithvi, thanks for asking the name of the person who saved your life.


Meera's jaws dropped to the ground on hearing Prithvi's latest verbal assault and she concluded that he would be the most hated man in her life and killing him would be justified.

Saying that Prithvi was out of the room, leaving a highly infuriated Meera inside the room who was burning up so much that a blasting furnace temperature could be labelled ice cold.


That's it Guys ..
Hope you like it and don't forget to your comments





Edited by sabaSpeaks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it Saba!Deir fights r so cute!!!sigh!Thank u for givn us dis wonderful FF!!!😃Here is my favourite part ,wish it had continued...😉:


Prithvi: So you know my hands are large...
Meera snappped back.
Meera :I dont like big hands
Prithvi: So what kinds of hands you like.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saba this kind of rationing is going to be the death of me!!! Pls jaldi jaldi upload karo!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Prithvi: So what kinds of hands you like.

Meera realized that this conversation was going in a direction that would be even more awkward than the current mess.
😆😆 I LOVE THIS. SHE REALLY SHOULD NOT TAKE PANGA WITH THIS GUY - HE IS HEADING STRAIGHT TO THE POINT EVERY SINGLE TIME 😆😆😉

Meera:My clothes are torn, I want something to wear.
Prithvi:Be my guest, Pick anything from my personal collection of ladies finery lying in front of you in these tatters.
THAT WAS FUNNY - SARCASM ALWAYS SUITED PRITHVI - ONLY PRITHVI - DOESN'T SUIT OTHER MEN lol😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
U kept up their nok jhok so well Saba loving it .. She leaves no stone unturned to cut him & he very funnily turns it back on her with an edge .. Cool.. Bimar hai but sharpness hai. Good girl.
Luved the food episode -
Meera was obviously hungry but since when has ego been rational and logical..

Next soon plse Am curious ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 8
Oh I just love the way you frame Meera's and Prrithvi's thoughts 👏 👏 Great job again. 👍🏼 One suggestion if you won't mind, I would like to know more about Akash and what happened to Sudha 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 9
Awesome 👍🏼 The way you keep Meera and Prithvi's convo going, just great! Update soon ,I am already impatient to read more 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful Saba.

I liked that fight .our Prithvi isn't that easygoing man . And he is teaching Meera how to deal with a REAL MAN 👍🏼

You drew this chapter very perfectly that I could see the sparkles flying in the air. Poor Meera she thought she will be able to win a battle with Prithvi. 🥳

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