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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

you can send it now , the entries will be posted on Wednesday 22nd May 😃

oh lovely waiting to read everyone's work... 😆 I had fun trying to write and the fact it was to be short helped..next time maybe i could try a little more if its made a more frequent forum event.

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Sharpay.Evans

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Posted: 12 years ago

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girlTalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -Gauri-
22nd May?! Really!!! Itz my BIRTHDAY!!!! :D

be ready , we are gonna flood you with super hawt mithvi moments 😉😆

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girlTalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Allright people, the moment of truth is here , uploading super hawt mithvi momemts 🥳All of us (writers ) had too much of fun writing them(at least I was giggling all the time) and we all hope that you guys also have same fun reading them.

Couple of things for voting

Every one has to select 3 , first one will be the most liked one and further down,
All the writers have decided that we will not vote for our entries and will be choosing others entries.
Voting lines will be open for 1 week , will publish the result on next Wednesday.
Request to silent readers , Please vote, we all know you are reading.It will definitely boost the confidence of writers and they will write more good stuff.

I dedicate all of the moments to Gauri as today is her birthday, Gauri this is a small gift from all of us Junoonians.Have a wonderful day and may god bless you

Example reply (Please post your reply in this thread only in the following format)

1)Entry -x (most liked)

2)Entry -y (second most liked)

3)Entry -z (third most liked)

of course you can add comments , what you liked and did not , your suggestions are most welcome 😃

Without much Ado , here they are

Entry -1

Cajoling Meera

Jealous of the attention DB gives Prithvi and keeps him busy working with her, Meera gets enraged. Angry when Prithvi comes late one night, she taunts him to go back from where he came. Puzzled Prithvi, decides to pacify his wife with a poem, that comes off sounding all wrong.. She stomps off, and he follows with mischief in his eyes. As she goes to the backyard, he comes behind her and places a shawl on her shoulders and envelops her in a hug, holding on to her.

As they gaze at the night sky n stars, he gently tells her how much he loves her and that no other woman stands a chance of getting close to him other that his dharam patni. Still not at peace she brushes him aside. Determined to cool her temper, he stops her firmly, lifts her and vows not to put her down till she hears him out. Laughing Meera melts into him, all her anger forgotten as she revels in knowing it is her he loves.

Entry -2

Prithvi gets a clue bout DB's missing husband nd has to check on it immediately though it has already become dark..He forces Meera to stay nd gets in the car..But ziddi Meera forcefully gets into the car with him nd says she won't let him go alone as it's not safe.

The probable hiding place of Ishwarji trns out to be a stranded cottage on a hill in the middle of a jungle.Prithvi tells Meera to wait for him inda car while he checks out da place nd dis time he dusnt want to hear any arguments.

Meera being da stubborn 1 follows Prithvi quietly through the jungle.But on hearing a wolf howl she gets scared,calls Prithvi's name nd hugs him tight from behind.Prithvi gets both frustrated nd concerned..bt continues with her..

on checkn out da cottage-dey find it empty..but with signs of recent human habitation so clean..

Mithvi returning to the car hurriedly as a storm seems to be coming...bt alas! da car dusnt start..Prithvi checks watz wrong bt decides needs a mechanic..

So Mithvi decides to tk shelter in da cottage from da rain nd storm till morning as no mechanic cn be found at such unGodly hour...

Dey r halfway to da cottage wn it starts raining cats nd dogs..Prithvi tells Meera to run for shelter nd wn he reaches dere he sees Meera isn't with him.Worried Prithvi turns to see if she needs help..

Prithvi decides it's he,who needs help,as he sees Meera deliberately getn wet in da rain,with her red saree plastered to her body like a second skin..(song -tip tip barse pani/hum tum/ankhon se tune ye kya keh dia-tk ur pick,m confused😕)song plays as Prithvi walks out in da rain towards Meera..Dey hv sm sizzling dance sequence,nd burns us alive...Meera kisses Prithvi on his nose as he pulls her close to his body..Prithvi kisses Meera on da cheek nd neck..nd also dt camera angle kiss onda 🤬..😳 Meera tries to run but Prithvi can't tk it anymore,so carries her in his strong arms nd our wet nd hot Mithvi enter into the cottage...close da door and sm more romancing dere...nd dn 🤬...😉

p.s. Mithvi left deir mobiles in da car...😛

Entry -3

Meera is making cake and is wearing red chiffon saree with obviously deep cut blouse back(Arey abhi nahi , aagey to badhne do)

Hair tied in a bun this time.

In typical kithchen style , she has tied her pallu at her waist and also some pletes at the waist so that she can move

freely in the kitchen.

Cake is in the oven and she is preparing chocolate icing(me to already drooling)

Meera is literally drooling while mixing the icing.

Prithvi gets thirsty (for water) and goes to kitchen , looks at Meera who is totally involved in mixing,tied pallu and pletes

exposing much more than required, chocolate powder on her cheeks and drool on her lips.

Since Prithvi is normal, he gets surely turned on and

gives back hug Meera and Meera is not actually shocked(who would be)

she tries to resist (aise hi time pass) but Prithvi doesnt let her go.

finally giving up she asks him to taste the icing and let her know.

He tastes it and says it's good and but not good enough, something is missing.

Meera is pretty surprised and asks him what is missing?

Prithvi gives the ultimate killer smirks and licks the icing that fell on her neck

at the time of Meera's resistance and says now it is delicious.😉

Entry - 4

Meera is sitting in their bedroom in DB's house with her back trnd to the door,really pissed off at Prithvi due to some kartut of DB..Prithvi quietly enters the room unnoticed by Meera and locks the door..Meera is about to turn on hearing the door closing when the electricity goes mkn the whole room dark..Meera asks who it is,bt Prithvi does not reply..A storm is starting nd the curtains start blowing on the windows...

Meera lights a candle,places it on da shelf and dn gets startled to see Prithvi staring at her hotly in the flickering light of the candle..She asks him why he didn't respond..Prithvi still remains quiet and start walking towards Meera..

Meera starts walking backwards and is finally stuck between the wall at the back and Prithvi at the front..Prithvi traps her by placing both hands on the wall behind her..

Meera is tensed and is about to ask what he wants when Prithvi puts a finger on her lips to quieten her..Prithvi trace his finger on her lips and lowers his head to kiss her when Meera moves away saying some crap about closing the window..

Meera trying to close the window when Prithvi's hand holds hers..Meera stands frozen with arousal..Prithvi pulls Meera back towards his body in a tight hug,caresses her arms slowly and moves Meera's hair and kisses her on the neck..rain water splashes on both nd Prithvi closes the window..

Meera escapes again and Prithvi tries to get hold of her and both somehow get entangled and both fall on the bed with Meera on top of Prithvi..eye lock moment..

Prithvi gives a sexy smile to a wide eyed aroused Meera and pulls her closer..Prithvi moves his lips towards Meera's ears as if to kiss and Meera closes her eyes in surrender..

Prithvi whispers: 'Meera,tum sirf aur sirf humre liye bani ho...Aur hum,sirf aur sirf tumre liye...'

Prithvi rolls that Meera is now lying down below him,and aftr giving a looong scorching look finally lowers his head to kiss her..he hisses her eyes,cheeks nd dn...😳

The night is long and the doors and windows are locked so let Mithvi and our imaginations run wild...😉

Entry -5

In the morning, Meera is sprawled on Prithvi on the bed after enjoying awesome nocturnal activities.😉

Obviously they are wrapped in blanket and nothing else.

Prithvi wakes up and gives that super loving look to Meera in his arms.

Meera's hair all obviously all over her face and it becomes irresistible for Prithvi to not touch them.

He very carefully flicks them so that they are out of her eyes.

Finally after somehow managing to disengage from Meera , he gets up ,freshens up in black vest and black dhoti.

Meera wakes up to find Prithvi doing push-ups in her favourite color and gets all charged up.

She wraps the same blanket around her(Please imagine this wrapping on your own, cant describe, obviously lots exposed 😉)

Meera climbs on Prithvi's back and kisses his shoulder.

Prithvi saves don't disturb me, I am trying to exercise, Meera pouts and says when did i stop you.

Prithvi says how I am supposed to do when you are on my back and wearing blanket.

Meera pouts even more cutely and says I am on your back and you cant see me and I thought you were strong enough to

do push-ups with me.

Prithvi smirks even hard and asks what will i get if i did it,u know push-ups are as it is tough and with you, I will have

to work more harder.

Well guys, aagey ka khud soch lo.

ok, ok , will elaborate .

Prithvi starts doing push-ups and gets super wet kisses on his neck for every single push up.😉

who says hard work doesn't pay??😉😆

Edited by sabaSpeaks - 12 years ago

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Entry-6

MITHVI having a silly non jhok and Meera teasing Prithvi, our Prithvi getting angry and chasing Meera around they reach the pool area, MITHVI accidentally fall in the pool and are totally wet. They get close in the pool and are lost in eachother, Prithvi setting Meera's hair and closing in to kiss and as usual Meera blusing and coming out of the pool. Prithvi following her and trying to hug her, Meera resisting making our Prithvi more despo, unable to resist he lifts her in his arms and carries her to their bedroom and iske baad sab apna apna imaginaton use karo😉😳😆

Entry-7

The Little black dress fire scene

Meera goes shopping and decides to buy something for Prithvi. As she selects a few outfits for him, she spots a black dress hanging on a rack. Memories of the first date night in the city where she was caught in the circle of fire flashed before her eyes. She smiled as she remembered the admiration in his eyes the first time he saw her in that outfit. She buys it and once home, she wears it and waits for Prithvi. Unsuspecting Prithvi walks in to find her cooking in the kitchen. Stunned he looks at her and remembers the dress, his possessiveness when the cab drivers were fighting over her, the fire that nearly hurt her and his first kiss as she lay unconscious.

Smiling he enters the kitchen, sneaks behind Meera and lifts her on to the kitchen counter. Surprised she quickly recovers and blushes as he runs his hands along her legs, drops to his knees and showers butterfly kisses along her legs. Prithvi then tells her "That day when I saw you in this dress, I did not want to let you out of my sight and had wanted to hold you thus. But I had no choice but to let you go and see what situation that got you into?"

Entry-8

Prithvi is driving his green jeep and of course Meera is with him.

mithvi had a silly fight before this as Meera wanted to go shopping at and as always Prithvi was being Man.

well, Meera some how managed to convince Prithvi and Prithvi halfheatedly agrees to come with her.

so mithvi are not on talking terms.

Now in the Jeep

Meera: Do you want something?

Prithvi : no response

Meera: I said ,Do you want something

Prithvi : no response

Meera: what's with the attitude?

Prithvi: I dont want any thing.

Meera(gives really naughty smile) : you really dont want any thing

Prithvi(more angry): bola na , kuch nahi

Meera (super naughty lop sided smile): allright as you wish.

At this very instant raining starts and since it was a open jeep both are soaked wet and prithvi stops the jeep some place which is obviously isolated.

There is huge tree(any tree with strong trunk will do)

Meera and Prithvi take shelter under the tree.Well as usual Meera's saree goes all sticky on her and dharti puttar forgets

every thing.obviously he cant keep his hands off her now.

Prithvi corners meera to the trunk and water is now seriously dripping from his hair and that wide irresistible chest oh his(imagine karo)

(let's continue if you can )

he is all wet from outside.

Meera's condition is even worse,she is hyperventilating so much that it is not possible to diffrentiate between sweat and water drops.

She manages to keep her hands on his chest (tries to stop him 😆 as if she could 😆)and fumbles that you said you didnt want any thing from me.

Prithvi looks at her and now he gives lop sided smile and closes any distance if it was left between him and Meera and says

Who said I want something from you?

just say you don't want me and I will move out of the way.

Could Meera (anygirl ) say no to him?

you know the answer guys...😉

Full on blast insane mad PDA at display 😉

Entry- 9

So this is when Meera and Prithvi have been seperated and Prithvi is faking his identity as he has got to know that DB's men are the ones to have killed AK. Since he also knws that law needs proof so he has been doing just that and now has all the evidence as proof that both he and Meera are innocent. And he remembers the last conversation he had with Meera of meeting near the Ram-Sita idols in the jungle.

Meera has been coming to the place everyday since she does not believe that Prithvi is dead and she knws that she will find him at that place and for that has been coming there everyday.

Its been 1 month and Meera is standing before the idols when she hears a voice softly call out her name. She turns around and finds no one but she also identifies it as Prithvi's voice. She stars calling out for Prithvi as she starts running towards the direction frm where the sound had come. While running she trips and falls down and this gets her so upset that she starts crying as remembers the last time when Prithvi was there with her taking care of her. Suddenly she feels strong arms around her as she is lifted up. She looks up and into the eyes of the man she loves more than life. Prithvi carries her to his jeep without saying a word even as he keeps looking at her and Meera keeps looking at him in wonder. It is already evening and Prithvi takes the jeep deeper into the jungle where he finds a dilapidated mandir. He carries Meera inside and sets her down. Makes a makeshift siiting area with some hay nearby and some blanketts from the jeep and sits down with Meera seated on his lap. Neither has spoken a word til now and now that they are together they just hug each other for a long time. This is followed by Prithvi telling Meera all that had happened in the month that he had been missing and that now he has all the evidence needed to prove their innocence. Meera has been silently crying throughout this time. The night has fallen and Prithvi realises the need for some food and water. He gets up to go and get both when Meera stops him. She tells him that all she needs is him and pulls him down to hug. (All GMs can get activated since finally Meera maidum is having her meltdown and Prithvi looses whatever control he has been showing).

Morning sees Prithvi waking up Meera with a sweet kiss and both then talk of what to do next.

Edited by sabaSpeaks - 12 years ago

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Entry-10

Prithvi is sent out on a wild goose chase errand by Akash or DB (tk ur chose) in an attempt to keep Mithvi apart..bt unknown to da villain nd Prithvi ,Meera hides in da car nd leaves with Prithvi..Prithvi thinkn bout Meera while driving nd suddenly Meera exposes herself 4m da back seat to him nd naughtily scares him by suddenly hugging him from behind nd kissing him on da cheek..da shock nd da sizzle mks Prithvi lose control of da car nd hit a tree..bt luckily both r uninjured..
Prithvi gets fake angry at Meera nd gets out of da car as if to teach her a lesson nd Meera getn scared opens da other door nd runs into da jungle by da road.Prithvi chase Meera nd Meera sudnly slips nd falls down a cliff into a water pool nd Prithvi out of concern follows her into da pool.both r wet nd sexy.Prithvi pulls Meera into his arms.leans down nd kisses her on da cheek, eyes nd nose..both r aroused nd Meera holds onto Prithvi tightly ..thunder sounds in da sky nd it starts raining cats nd dogs..eye lock moment.Prithvi tk Meera in his lap nd out of da water..dere is a hut nearby, both tk shelter dere from da storm..nd Mithvi storm starts inside... 😳 😳 😉 now let's mk our imagination run wild... 😈

Entry-11

Prithvi wakes up in the middle of night to find Meera is not on th bed on his side.
He wakes up and finds Meera is standing near the window wearing his kurta and is blushing red.
Prithvi gives super smirk obviously he understood the reason for her blushing.
Looks for towel, wraps it and hugs her from behind , totally engulfing her in his arms.
Meera blushes even more as Prtihvi pulls her kurta down expsoing even more and asks I need my kurta now.
Meera: why?
Prithvi: cause its mine and i want it now
Meera: But you said you are mine and by virtue of inference every thing that belongs to you is mine.
Prithvi: then why only my kurta is privileged, why only kurta gets to be worn by you?nothing happnes to me?I am also entitled to
all the benefits my kurta is getting?you dont want to do anything with me?
Meera :I want to ...
Prithvi: what?
Any answers(socho,socho..)what if I stop here?
acha chalo , I know stopping here will kill all of you.. to aagey badhte hai..
Meera:Be with you always,breathe your smell always, see you always, feel your arms around me always
Prithvi picks Meera and takes her to bed, Meera was dumb enough to ask where are you taking me.
Prithvi: to show how it should be done correctly😉