When the tide turned .MithviFF-Part 17 updt Pg32

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Asandhimitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

wow , nice ! I wish the writers of the show alsotry to make their characters behave logically , like you do . 👏 Really nice part , this one . 😃

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

beautiful story😃,awsome update👏

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rusha4003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

@ Gargi ... Thanks for liking dear ... I'm trying to keep my story simple and straight ... not too much negativity ... no twists ...no turns ...

@ Ifians: Thanks for liking dear ... BTW , what do I call you ? ... I'm Usha !

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sana2511

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

wow nice parts usha di...👍🏼

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Tammie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Wow! Great update! You really can tell a story. Can't wait to see how things start to fall together/apart!

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

usha thank you so much for this two part, they were just great, loved it ...
miu wants prithvis friendship this is great, like the fact that prithvi was thinking about her and her worries, so that meand he is worried for her i like it 😊

thanks for pm,

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

thanks for the PM, Usha.

Wow 2 parts...what a treat. wonderful. I really like how you're handling the story. Don't like how the show has handled the child wedding.

Good work ...but I am greedy ... more please.

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rusha4003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

@ Sana : Thanks dear ! 😊

@ Tammie: Thanks for the compliment ... I think every story writer likes to hear that they can tell a story ... you made my day ! 🤗

Well... for now I'll tell you that things rarely fall apart in my stories ... so you can rest assured everything will turn out fine !

@ Bennu: Thanks for liking dear ! Yes, now Miu is beginning to see an ally in Prithvi ... and Prithvi has already let go of his hatred ... so things will look up from now !

@ Shelly: I posted 2 parts because I want to finish this story asap. 😆.I started with the idea of a 5-6 part story, but this story growing like a weed ... uncontrollably ... 😆 ... Now, I'm agonizing on " How do I wrap this up?" 😆

I should have stuck to my usual OSs ... much easier and simpler !!! 😆

Edited by rusha4003 - 12 years ago