When the tide turned .MithviFF-Part 17 updt Pg32 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mariyakamran

Oh My God so freakin amazing, loved both parts especially part 8 ☺️... reading it over and over again. Part 7: awwhh some really sweet moments between Dad-Daughter 👏... loved this weekend treat


Weekend is going to be much longer this time im just gonna dream and dream mithvi and all these moments

have fun with your family this weekend and yeah you deserve to take a day off after such a superb writing.

Watching out for more 🤗


You're such a sweetheart Mariya 🤗 ... thank you so much for liking the weekend special !

I wanted it to be something memorable for Miu with the 2 most imp men in her life ... 😊

Thanks dear ... I did have a good time with my family ... now I have all sorts of ideas buzzing in my head ... just need to sit down and write ... maybe tonight !

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Parm.

Usha hon, I loved the bonding between father and daughter please if you get a chance elaborate some more on that. I'm really looking forward to seeing your take on what happened 20 years ago (whether it will be the same as what we get presented with in the show or whether you'll do your own spin on it). As for the garden scene? Loved IT!!!😆😉


Thanks Parm ... too felt sooo good to write that father daughter bonding ... especially that there is not bitterness ... Miu does not hate her father ...I will write more on their interactions !

20 year ago ? ... Man ... that is a tough one ... I cant even begin to imagine what could have gone so wrong that Sudha needed to flee from the village and DT had to announce that S & M were dead ...
Am working on it ... will try to come up with something plausible !

Ahhh ... the garden scene ... just what I want for Mithvi right now ... ☺️

Thanks for liking dear !
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsati

wow.speechless. Luking frwd to see how will they behave with eachother after feeling something 4 eachother. Pls update soon.


Thanks Luvsati !

I know ... the best part is watching them trying to disregard their growing feelings for each other ... 😆 ... .

one thing I can tell you they wont acknowledge it so easily ... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

MITHVI allmost makes me crazy, and this part from you is addition to this..right now

Mithvi has me crazy too ... this is my first SS on IF ... I have doen a couple of OSs but never anything so long ...😳 ... 😆


Thank you so much Hangok , for taking the time to comment on each part ... I love to hear what you all think of my writing ... my responses in blue !

BTW ... what do I call you ?? My name is Usha ... 😊


oh thanks Usha, you have more OS, would love to read so, give me the links pleasee,

by the way im Bennu😊
ohh and continue soon pleaseee😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

OMG, I just read all the parts n they were FAB!! Cont sooon and PM me pls if possible!! :D

-Gauri


Thanks Gauri ... I love the way your FF's going too ...

I'll try to PM from next update onwards ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok


MITHVI allmost makes me crazy, and this part from you is addition to this..right now

Mithvi has me crazy too ... this is my first SS on IF ... I have doen a couple of OSs but never anything so long ...😳 ... 😆


Thank you so much Hangok , for taking the time to comment on each part ... I love to hear what you all think of my writing ... my responses in blue !

BTW ... what do I call you ?? My name is Usha ... 😊


oh thanks Usha, you have more OS, would love to read so, give me the links pleasee,

by the way im Bennu😊
ohh and continue soon pleaseee😳


Hi Bennu ... my other OSs are in diff forums ... I'll try to get the links for you !

Will try to wriet something tonight ! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Bennu ... my other OSs are in diff forums ... I'll try to get the links for you !

Will try to wriet something tonight ! 😊


good to hear, will wait😉 and thanks in advance😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi dear ... here's the next part ...

Not as dramatic as the serial ... but I hope its reasonable good ...




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Recap:

Stay away from him Meera, she cautioned herself. He was big trouble for her.

Part: 9 ...

It was late when she woke up in the morning. She sat up and rubbed her eyes. She didn't sleep too well last night and the reason could be summed up in one word ' Prithvi !

She has tossed and turned in bed the whole night re-living their encounter in the garden. Even now, just the thought of being in his arms made her toes curl in embarrassment. She closed her eyes tightly and tried to erase that scene from her memory.

But that was near impossible. Finally she admitted it, the night was magical !

But it was morning now, and in the harsh daylight there was no magic, only a feeling of acute awkwardness. How was she going to face him ?

She got up and freshened herself. She decided to go into the house today instead of waiting for someone to bring her breakfast.

Prabha was in the kitchen and on seeing Meera, she beckoned her inside.

'It's good to see you up and about, my dear ! Sit down and have something to eat", said Prabha.

Meera sat down and had some parathas and curd. Prabha then reminded her to take her medicines. "Prithvi, specifically asked me to remind you" she said.

"Where is he?", asked Meera hesitantly.

"Well, he suddenly decided to go to the grain market today with all our produce. Usually, the agent picks it up from our granary and transports it to the market. But today, Prithvi was adamant that he would do it himself. It will be quite late by the time he returns" said Prabha.

Meera felt relief sweep over her. Thank God she didn't have to see him today. She was sure by tomorrow morning, what transpired between them in the garden would be a distant memory. And she would studiously stay away from him, she decided.

"Where is Datha?", she asked tentatively.

"He's in his study, you can meet him there if you want" said Prabha. "And, would you take this tea for him ? I need to go and wake Sunheri."

Happily Meera took the tea tray and walked to Datha's study. Just as she was about to enter, she heard a loud shout "Hey", it was Lakhan. "How dare you try to enter Datha's study ? Your place is outside this house. Don't try to cross your limits".

Before she could reply, Datha came out and seeing her carrying the tea tray he said " It's all right Lakhan, I asked her to get some tea for me".

Grumbling under his breath Lakhan walked away. Datha led Meera into the room and patted her cheek, "How is my brave girl today?"

Meera grinned "Eager to spend more time with her father. I have so many things to ask and tell you."

Datha smiled indulgently as he sipped the tea. Father and daughter spent the next one hour talking about everything under the sun.

Finally, Miu hesitantly asked, "Don't you think we should get down to the most important thing now ?".

Datha closed his eyes. "I was trying to postpone this , but I guess you have to know about it sooner or later why your mother and you had to leave this village".

He took her hands in his and said. "Please don't be judgmental, Just listen to what I have to say before reacting."

Meera squeezed his hand and nodded.

"About 20 years ago, I had just returned to the village from Delhi with you and Sudha. We had decided that our education could be put to use here to develop the village.

Sudha worked tirelessly for the welfare of the women in the village. She was a source of strength for the women who were victims of various issues like domestic violence, alcoholic husbands, female foeticide and numerous other ills that plagued the illiterate and ignorant villagers.

At that time we had a Sarpanch who was greedy & power hungry and had medieval notions about how people should live.

He surrounded himself by ruffians and mostly ruled by force. People were too afraid to go against his draconian rules. Time and again Sudha stood up to him and sided with the villagers who were victims of his greed.

One day, when I was out of town, he kidnapped you and Prithvi. That day was considered auspicious for weddings and most villagers got their children married off on that day.

Along with several other village children, the Pundit was forced to conduct your marriage with Prithvi. The Sarpanch felt marrying off a Thakur's daughter to a poor orphan boy would be the ultimate insult and that our family, especially Sudha would be shamed by it and leave the village".

In the meantime, Sudha and my elder brother got wind of this and they tried to rescue you. In the melee that ensued my brother was injured badly and Sudha managed to flee with you. The Sarpanch's goons began firing at the villagers to get them under control and in the process a couple of kids and villagers died.

He laid the entire blame on Sudha, saying she brought misfortune to the village, because she tried to stop an auspicious practice. The gullible villagers believed him and began hunting for Sudha. That was when she left the village taking you with her.

By the time I returned it was all over and the villagers swore never to let Sudha set foot in our village again. The Sarpanch also put a price on her head and goaded people to hunt and kill her.

To save Sudha, I announced that both of you had drowned trying to flee the village. I also sent word to Sudha through mutual friends that she should live in Delhi with you and not return to the village.

But, my white lie that you two were dead made things very difficult for me and I was forced to conduct the annual death ceremony for the two of you every year, though I personally never participated in it.

My elder bother became bed-ridden and bhabhi also blamed Sudha and you for that.

Soon things became so complicated that there was no way Sudha could come back here, even though years had passed and I became the Sarpanch of the village. People could never forget that fateful day !

And to this day, people of the village avoid talking about that incident and unfortunately hold Sudha responsible for the deaths that day".

Miu sat listening to the horrifying story, tears streaming down her face. "And to prove your wife was dead you married Prabhaji", said Miu.


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Yaar ... I couldn't find a better way to bring out the child marriage thing ... I know it's not up to the mark ... but, I tried ... 😳
Edited by rusha4003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ushadi , there was really no need for the pm , apna time waste kiya , I's lurking here already to read your update . 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow that was awesome the reason of 20 yrs ago that u potrait was wonderfull..👏.i think its resonable for mithvi marriage its very apt for the story...😊 u r gr8 writer usha di...🤗continue soon...

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