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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear

Thank you so much Didu 🤗

Awesome and beautiful part🤗

"I'm glad to see the compliment ☺️ made my day 😃

I was really laughing hard after reading all this 😂😂 wonderful✨😍

"Awe that's so wonderful to know😳 you enjoyed ❤️like😃 and truly find it worth appreciating☺️ thank you Didu 🤗

🤣🤣LOL beta ACP behen ne takkar maari & papa IG poor Jo kaha fas gayi

"That's epic 😆 but that's make the last shot more enjoyable so much revelation and twist 😳

Cherry on the cake was mom too good

At least two meetings went decent one with father and mother 🤣

So the tenant finally met lo Jodha got him transferred to

"Jo is Jo can't let anyone go easily, 😉so got him pay for pestering her 😎 and the most awaited meeting

But a wonderful start of a beautiful relationship 😉

"You are right 👍🏼this is prescious⭐️ line of entire comment Didu 😳

Thanks for the PM

"Your welcome ❤️

Keep writing✍️

I will ☺️

Thank you so much Didu for the wonderfully penned lovely comment☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

What a coincidence. First Jalal's sister caused an accident with Jo, then the meeting with Jalal's father, the IG and finally with his mother at mandir. So funny. The whole Mallicks got in her life within a few days 🤣.

Loved their conversation over cell. She´s got attracted about his concern for her. Unknowingly she´s got attracted to the man who, from her point of view, pestered her 😆. Fate at his best 🤣

I had to lol when the IG turned out to be Jalal's father 🤣.Great 👍🏼!

Even Shweta thought it was funny. But Jo was Jo ⭐️. She couldn't get out of her skin and was too stubborn to give in. Whether he's caring for her or not.

and finally it was cleared up that Jalal is her tenant mate.Great surprise for Jo. At first she couldn't forgive him for his confession of love. Not even afterhe confessed his jealousy. So cute “hit the wall of Jealousy and insecurity“ 🥰. but in the end his charm won out. And the heart has won over the mind!

I already thought a bit that there would be no direct happy ending. But now their conversation of heart can start! beautiful line ❤️! stuff for another lovely TS 😃?

So lovely story Avi 💖! Loved it much

Keep on writing 🖊! I like it very much 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Soso70

What a coincidence. First Jalal's sister caused an accident with Jo, then the meeting with Jalal's father, the IG and finally with his mother at mandir. So funny. The whole Mallicks got in her life within a few days 🤣.

"So many hilarious coincidence 😆 and entry of his entire family in her life 🤣 It was just an light hearted sweet ThreeShot fiction and I'm so overwhelmed by your response to this one 😳 I am glad it was enjoyable ☺️ thank you so much Sonja for beautiful review

Loved their conversation over cell. She´s got attracted about his concern for her. Unknowingly she´s got attracted to the man who, from her point of view, pestered her 😆. Fate at his best 🤣

Absolutely true 👏she was truly touched by Tennant Gesture, and then conversation made her more impressed! 😳I think was truly humour scene 😆the irony of her fate penned by me 🤣humoured everyone 😆

I had to lol when the IG turned out to be Jalal's father 🤣.Great 👍🏼!

When I was writing that I thought it will be to much 😳but then I find it funny so went ahead with my plot 😆so I'm pleased to know it was enjoyable ☺️

Even Shweta thought it was funny. But Jo was Jo ⭐️. She couldn't get out of her skin and was too stubborn to give in. Whether he's caring for her or not.

"You are right 👍🏼our stubborn Jo isn't one to gave up her stand soon, 😆irrespective of how one is having attitude towards her😳, once fallen from eye it's hard to rise in her eye. 😎

and finally it was cleared up that Jalal is her tenant mate.Great surprise for Jo. At first she couldn't forgive him for his confession of love. Not even afterhe confessed his jealousy. So cute “hit the wall of Jealousy and insecurity“ 🥰. but in the end his charm won out. And the heart has won over the mind!

"Of-course Our Ja is charmer I regards of winning heart ❤️no one can resist him for long so here at end of story he won his heroine irrespective of consequence he faced cause of his unexpected confession 😆 in this like Ka said he's straightforward sincere guy so didn't hide at all and speak his mind 😳when she ask him about confession☺️

I already thought a bit that there would be no direct happy ending. But now their conversation of heart can start! beautiful line ❤️! stuff for another lovely TS 😃?

And you got it absolutely right 👍🏼 however I Hadn't thought of another TS yet Sonja ☺️as I wanted to see the response on this one first 🙈and I'm glad to receive beautiful appreciation😳 maybe later I will 😆

So lovely story Avi 💖! Loved it much

"Thanks lot Sonja 🤗your review made my day😃 it's so beautifully penned about entire Last part ☺️that I can't help re-read it repeatedly 😳 such reply made me feel like the work was worth my time and efforts ⭐️ thank you so much 🌹

Keep on writing 🖊! I like it very much 🤗

Thanks, I will try as I'm back will try working on my story to ☺️ but I'm eager about the next part of your story ☺️take care Sonja 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Evil_Flower_08

And you got it absolutely right smiley20 however I Hadn't thought of another TS yet Sonja smiley43as I wanted to see the response on this one first 🙈and I'm glad to receive beautiful appreciationsmiley9 maybe later I will smiley36

I would be glad if you wrote a short story again Avi 😃, Keep an eye on it

So lovely story Avi 💖! Loved it much

"Thanks lot Sonja smiley31your review made my daysmiley4 it's so beautifully penned smiley42about entire Last part smiley43that I can't help re-read it repeatedly smiley9 such reply made me feel like the work was worth my time and efforts smiley10 thank you so much 🌹

You´re welcome dear smiley43smiley31.

Keep on writing 🖊! I like it very much smiley31

Thanks, I will try as I'm back will try working on my story to smiley43 but I'm eager about the next part of your story smiley43take care Sonja

Oh yes! I´m eagerly wating for continuation too ! Have to read about it again, then I can post 😳


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soso70

I would be glad if you wrote a short story again Avi smiley4, Keep an eye on it

Thank you Sonja 🤗I wrote one short OS today ☺️your appreciation mean lot 😳

You´re welcome dear smiley43smiley31.
Words are less to convey my joy over your review☺️ the fact I look forward to your review 😳

Oh yes! I´m eagerly wating for continuation too smiley42! Have to read about it again, then I can post smiley9

You posted already and I had given my review it was truly fantastic 😳 loved it looking forward to next ☺️


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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Thank you ☺️

Your welcome Avi 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

lovely ending dii

what a great coincidence for jodha

she also did'nt knew but she met all the family members of jalal

and to whom she despise the most he only became the tenant whom she admires

but the ending you left for our imagination na too bad of you 😆

but then also it is a beautiful story

write more stories like this

love u dii take care 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29
Thank you Shruti for your kind help.
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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

It's completed story a four shot only ☺️

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