Originally posted by: Soso70
What a coincidence. First Jalal's sister caused an accident with Jo, then the meeting with Jalal's father, the IG and finally with his mother at mandir. So funny. The whole Mallicks got in her life within a few days 🤣.
"So many hilarious coincidence 😆 and entry of his entire family in her life 🤣 It was just an light hearted sweet ThreeShot fiction and I'm so overwhelmed by your response to this one 😳 I am glad it was enjoyable ☺️ thank you so much Sonja for beautiful review
Loved their conversation over cell. She´s got attracted about his concern for her. Unknowingly she´s got attracted to the man who, from her point of view, pestered her 😆. Fate at his best 🤣
Absolutely true 👏she was truly touched by Tennant Gesture, and then conversation made her more impressed! 😳I think was truly humour scene 😆the irony of her fate penned by me 🤣humoured everyone 😆
I had to lol when the IG turned out to be Jalal's father 🤣.Great 👍🏼!
When I was writing that I thought it will be to much 😳but then I find it funny so went ahead with my plot 😆so I'm pleased to know it was enjoyable ☺️
Even Shweta thought it was funny. But Jo was Jo ⭐️. She couldn't get out of her skin and was too stubborn to give in. Whether he's caring for her or not.
"You are right 👍🏼our stubborn Jo isn't one to gave up her stand soon, 😆irrespective of how one is having attitude towards her😳, once fallen from eye it's hard to rise in her eye. 😎
and finally it was cleared up that Jalal is her tenant mate.Great surprise for Jo. At first she couldn't forgive him for his confession of love. Not even afterhe confessed his jealousy. So cute “hit the wall of Jealousy and insecurity“ 🥰. but in the end his charm won out. And the heart has won over the mind!
"Of-course Our Ja is charmer I regards of winning heart ❤️no one can resist him for long so here at end of story he won his heroine irrespective of consequence he faced cause of his unexpected confession 😆 in this like Ka said he's straightforward sincere guy so didn't hide at all and speak his mind 😳when she ask him about confession☺️
I already thought a bit that there would be no direct happy ending. But now their conversation of heart can start! beautiful line ❤️! stuff for another lovely TS 😃?
And you got it absolutely right 👍🏼 however I Hadn't thought of another TS yet Sonja ☺️as I wanted to see the response on this one first 🙈and I'm glad to receive beautiful appreciation😳 maybe later I will 😆
So lovely story Avi 💖! Loved it much
"Thanks lot Sonja 🤗your review made my day😃 it's so beautifully penned about entire Last part ☺️that I can't help re-read it repeatedly 😳 such reply made me feel like the work was worth my time and efforts ⭐️ thank you so much 🌹
Keep on writing 🖊! I like it very much 🤗
Thanks, I will try as I'm back will try working on my story to ☺️ but I'm eager about the next part of your story ☺️take care Sonja 🤗
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