NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 53 - CHAP 58 (Pt 1&2)- 4th - Page 19

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Ufff.. .. Lashy di... How do you do it...taking our breath away.. EVERY TIME. What a chapter 👏 👏

Omg... I don't know what to say other than go...☺️

we know Akbar would win, that women was his mother, their plans would work but the thrilling ride you took us in... No words can do justice to our feelings for the update, for you, for your amazing way of story telling... You are something else👏⭐️👏

Your words are so so sweet Cookie.. like you... and I can feel them coming right from the heart!

Khalil entry...even the clouds changed colours🤢 then provoking Ustaad 😡

Yes! 😡

What?' That woman was the Ustaad's only weakness - then why weren't his spiky messages scratching a reaction out of him?

Now she is his strength

>>>👍🏼

That blindfold condition , and Ustaad agreeing to it seeing no other way Khalil 😡I'm so happy that you died ...Babar re😲.

Oh God... we all so missed this baba re!😆

I literally started panting thinking how he will win then all his training, night adventures, shooting at nights came flooding in ... He used all that for this game of survival 👏 👏

Yes he did... that's what I'd told Vathsykka earlier too... he was made weaker than his opponents and had to rely on his experiences to win over the other two...

and that trick to loosen the blindfold⭐️⭐️ ... How you come up this ideas 😲

Actually that one - I'd read by chance (you know these random pamphlets/advice/pointers we get on WA/FB etc) about how to keep calm when kidnapped... one of them was about the blindfold trick... keep your forehead and face very stiff when it's tied and it'll be not so tight later

Of course, I've never actually tried it... but I could understand how it worked... so, used that principle... as a spy, I guessed he must've figured it out sometime too!

She brought her palms together into a fury-filled clasp 'Take all of my sight if you must, Ma... I don't need it... but, please let him be able to see his enemy... please let him be able to see their depraved schemes and strikes! Please Ma... pleassseee'

I am only human, Heera'

This made me cry... 😭😭

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The duel was😲... I am not lying if I say I was present there in the audience... Could visualize every reaction, move, attack, cheer, fear👏...

Really? Omg thank you thank you thank you!

And it is proved that you excelling only in writing romance is a big lie... Best part Khalil was not a fool and tried every trick in the book

He never was a fool (or Akbar would never have picked him)- he was an idiot who never allowed his sense to be used the right way!

Khalil was not a fool and tried every trick in the book but forgot Ustaad has written that book😎

Ufff... what a seeti-maar line, Cookie! Had a broad grin when I read it!

Just relaying on his senses, voices from audience, his instincts... No wonder is called the Ustaad.

😎

That one time when he got hit with axe... my heart was in my mouth.

Awww just like Mirza bhaijaan's

Forgot to ask you Rose... how did you feel when you saw your Mirza Sahib shedding tears... 😭

That flashback, was it the one in exchange of which AMK got the farmaan 😕Idiot Shehzaade!!! 😡

Yes!

That final moment catching that spinning axe UFF... Even Azeez went😲😆 ..

Yes... 😆 while he was standing on Sayyid's shoulder!

All this was no one day miracle, but his years and years of practice and the way you have buildup his character...kudos 👏👏

Thanks da... thanks a ton... omg I am so happy you said this.. yes it's something we know about him from the beginning... all of his hard work, experience and things (others used to mock him about) paid off now

So it was his mother after all and she was there when Heera was slapped😆 .

aapko hassi aaying?😲

Shehensha came finally🥳, I have never met you Shehensha and never will, but I am so so happy to see you...

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So Shehzaade gave in and returned everything... speical mention to the advisor👏

Thank you 😳 He was a sensible chap, the advisor

My Heera couldn't believe the news🤗, well who would in her place.

I miss Bindiya, won't she come back😭, they all will go back to Parnagarh happily but the poor girl, the news must have reached her too.. Will she always be prison 😭

>>>😭

Their meeting, how they have waited for this, how we have waited for this...

Awww

But there is no one else like HIM!' Heera quietly bit her lips into a peachy pink.

awww

The wifely concern and his touching cheeks with knuckles Ufff❤️ true soulmates they are... I simply loved that part..the edit❤️... Reading it again and again...

Really I am doing the happy jiggy dance here!

I could have quoted the whole chapter this is how much I loved it di.🤗.. Love you❤️ and thank you for everything 🤗

Thank youuu for everthing 🤗

But some doubts di😛

Once he becomes king,won't the Shehzaade go after AMK.

I'd replied to Sandy about the same thing. There is one word in the chapter that should answer your koschun. Can you tell me which word it is!😛

will Khan Sahib horse business would also be taken even if not who would do business with him seeing his past with Mughal heir,

Well... people close to the heir might stop doing business with him... and AMK wouldn't be the supplier of horses to the royal stables... or come to capital for horse fairs...

But the empire is large... and news didn't necessarily always reach all corners - this was 17th c... AMK/Heera's issues in the large scale of things was a relatively-smaller set of events...

Buying/selling of normal horses poses no real political problem right? So, I'd think business would continue as usual, with other non-related merchants after an initial lull..

Will Heera lead Parnagarh as daughter of Jagat Prasad like before as they are going with original farmaan...

Will it go all back to normal like paying taxes to the Centre

Mansabdari was never a title bestowed upon women... since the lands have been officially gifted - there's no more Mansabdar role in play here...

They just become Zamindars... taxes, yes they'll have to continue paying as always...

Won't Khalil's friends won't want revenge or their friendship isn't that strong . . . .

Khalil's so-called friends would be happy AMK challenged only Khalil and not all of them to the duel!😆