NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 53 - TEASER for 58 - Page 8

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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Aww cutie pie 😆

Your interpretation for selvi di's pic 👍🏼

Not cuter than you kuki di😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#72
Good morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: lashy

Good morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗

Didu🤗


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Posted: 6 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Ifakdha

Not cuter than you kuki di 😳

If you say ☺️😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#75


Good morning, everyone


My Bindup was here 🤗omg
We know it'll take time... but, we also know you are a brave girl, who'll line up one brick after another, rebuilding her days again... 🤗 we are here to help lift those bricks by a tad bit, if you'd ever want us to do so!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Sweetu... ages since I've been greeted in the morning by ya 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: kruthik


But the sheshade himself is going against law.


Chitti... this is a monarchy. The Shehzaade IS the law
Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


😲

I know it will sound like a repeat if the second duel too goes the same way as the first. Clang and whoosh and dishoom.

Spot on!

The beast probably got cold feet seeing the fate of the swine. Is he backing out?
Fingers crossed that he suffers a worse fate. 😔

He's wily too... why would he walk into a death trap?

The blue veiled lady has done nothing still?😡😭

Hmmm...

That 'kator nayanon ka dhwandh' between the eyes that still hoped for justice and those that chose to be still blind to it was beautifully worded Sahiba. 👏 It had more impact than the clash of the swords. 😊

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you so much for noticing that...🤗
Took me lonnggg to get that balance right!


You understood the undertone of the teaser 👏

Btw, Sandy... where are you? Missing you here... terribly...😭
Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: lashy


You understood the undertone of the teaser 👏

Btw, Sandy... where are you? Missing you here... terribly...😭


On and off to hometown. There is a 4 day pooja that we are arranging for relatives circle there. And since it is the first time that we are taking charge of this yearly function, a little tensed and distracted. I'll be fully off for 10 days from 15th Feb. 😕 You will not wind up by then, will you?😡😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
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A very sincere and emotion filled review Bindu!👏 I have marked in bold red ,the passages I liked ..

Sachu Patti.

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Chapter 57

Thrilling!
Finally day has come ...which going to decide the faith of everyone...enemies, leads or Shehzaade himself or every single person who involved in this .
Beautiful starting of the chapter... give readers idea of the surrounding and feeling of Khan sahib's men and parnagrahis...

Fear of death cover the whole environment!

Too good , Lashy di... beautifully presented with words only!

Ending of one of the most interesting and important character... double face personality... Mahendra.
At a same time introduction of blue veiled lady...which increases curiosity level of the readers.

Chachajaan... sweetest personality and lively character of HBAS .
It's so painful to read his views... and I understand... rumours of Khan sahib's ill health must break his heart and like everyone... he also thought chance of Khan sahib's survival was very less.
But still he doesn't gave up... he doesn't left his side...like a father he was there to support his son no matter what the faith store for him.
There was the time when Khan sahib's own mother left him in his most terrible time and give up on him but that time also chachajaan never left his side then how could he now...
Such a beautiful example of true relationship both show us... when in that era where own son wanted to kill his father and brothers for the power.

Khan sahib's men...beautiful bonding between them... Ibrahim truly said...they have done all they can... nothing in their hands now.
They all put their life for him and their Sahiba... now everything depends on Maa Bhawani.
But still they all strongly supporting each other and following Khan sahib's instructions .

Heera... so true... no body understand her and her situation.
Just now she lost her only family member and now one person who is her world, her sahib, her life , her everything...her husband life is in sake...only some miracle could save him and their people.
If only she knew her medicines does miracle and Maa Bhawani blessed her and her sahib.

Gauri trying her best to encourage her best friend... they doesn't have time for emotional breakdown ...rather to used it on praying to Maa Bhawani.
She is amazing moral support system for Heera.

Everyone is hanging there for miracle with hope and faith... hope everything is alright, shehzaade might forgive their sahib and most important everyone has faith in their Lord.

I like the way shehzaade views explained... and his thoughts on Khalil , mahendra and Ustaad.
What a unpredictable personality and complex character ... disagree with his own thoughts ... and so proud of his decision.

This duel affected each and every one...especially the shehzaade himself... for the first time his sharpe eyes ignore something... embroidering of his kerchief ...this proved how much he is restless.
Quite calculative personality...just like Khan sahib ... already figuring out further moves and always thinking about benefits.
Duel bring money and popularity nodoubt on it but it's also going to remove some thorns of shehzaade.
Simple but interesting eye conversation between shehzaade and his wife.

What a irony... he understand love !

Mahendra and Tejraj... touching scene.

I like mahendra confession and message to his family... after all he did everything for Manswar and for his Rajput community... but he choose very very wrong way... young blood ...just 18 years old... wanted to achieve so much by hook or by crook.
He did big mistake and top of that his big ego always overpowered him and his thinking.

I really felt bad for Manswar , Mahendra's parents and his young new wife... who just started her new life with him.
He messed everyone's life and put Manswar honour in risk by taking some foolish decision ... how could he forgot many life depends on him.
He was future of Manswar... many expectations with him ... obviously he didn't want to meet his father who came for his son only... how could face anyone.
Long ago he knows that he went wrong...if only he understand.
Power and fame blind him so much .
Like he always claimed he was doing everything for Rajput community ... but if only he realised true meaning of it.
What a pity... he never able to expressed himself to anyone... he always had to put mask to hide his true self.

What a waste of life...

But in the end he was free from all the mental torture and most important free from his own conscious .
Relief he felt in the end... he was suffering... pain of losing his identity was must unbearable... sleepless nights he spent...now atleast he free from everything !
Durga thoughts and images doesn't left him during his last breath also... guilt was his main enemy.
What he did to Durga was just unforgettable...
Known enemy is always better than unknown .
Most of us hate Mahendra more than Khalil... personally I really do. But because of his ending...so many lifes going to change...that's painful.

Duel... superbly presented!

Glad to read ... both participants showed their skills and tricks equally.
Duel was not one man show... both were equally participated.

I like the fact that mahendra was no fool... he was best swordsman... and he utilise it but only to impressed everyone. He was so image conscious... fighting for impressing other...

What a irony...

Khan sahib is so so different ... if only other people's views matter to him then he was never in this situation... if he wants power and fame... it would kissed his leg every day.
With unpredictable way and very calculatively and patiently he handled the duel... he wants justice so he used his every skill ,physical ability and power to won the duel in very mature way.
His entry was quite but his action speak louder than anything.
So much that shehzaade himself forget everything and get carried away ...enjoy Ustaad's victory...
But as usual he cover up with something else only to satisfy his ego.

Yup finally finally finally time has come...Ustaad won over Mahendra and bring back Heera pride and honour ...
Gosh... felt so happy to read heera reaction ...especially her crown of pride... as a wife she is top of the world but at a same time worried for Khan sahib after all he is hurt ... we just couldn't underestimate Khalil and his dirty plots...who knows what he plans...

Yup parnagrahis and Khan sahib's men also celebrating their sahib victory with the revelation of not so spiteful guard name... chota zayaan!
No doubt he reminds heera's of Azeez so much...
Let's see how Azeez and his bond grow!

The Lady in the blue silk veil... in the ending also she increases our curiosity level... who is she ?
Who knows she related to Khan sahib or not ?
His mother, his step sister's or half sister?
So many questions...
Waiting for the next chapter for the answers .

Lashy di
Amazing chapter... beautifully you balanced everyone emotions!
It shows how much effort you put on it.
So thank you so much for this chapter !
One more thing...
I tried my best to write on this chapter... sorry if it not very expressive and it's lengthy.
And
I promise I will be here in the last journey of this beautiful novel so I am here.
But I can't promise to regular here just like I used to... commitments and priorities are change.
Just to let you know... I doesn't left you in the ending of this journey... I never will .

Thank you for your love and support!

Thank you each one of HBAS family members!




Edited by karkuzhali - 6 years ago

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