HOLA ALL
WHAT AN AMAZINGLY MIND BLOWING CHAPTER THIS WAS LASHY 😲😲
BUT BEFORE WRITING ANYTHING ELSE, I HAVE SOME SERIOUS ADVICE FOR YOU
WRITING ACTION (AND/OR THRILL) IS ONE OF THE TOUGHEST GENRES OF WRITING AND YOU HAVE ACED THE SCENE AND LEFT ALL YOU READERS IN AWE 😲 YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY THINK ABOUT WRITING PROFESSIONALLY. YOUR STORY WRITING IS PHENOMENAL, NO DOUBT, BUT YOU CAN SERIOUSLY THINK ABOUT SCREENPLAY AND MOVIE SCRIPT WRITING...DO GIVE SOME THOUGHT
SO GETTING BACK TO THE CHAPTER...
I LOVED READING THROUGH ALL THE REVIEWS - VATHSY, JAMES, KRUTHIK AUNTY, SELVI...SUPERB 👏
SANDHYA YOUR DESCRIPTION OF THE DUEL AND YOUR ANALYSIS OF THE SWINE WERE FANTASTIC ⭐️ YOU HAVE DELVED DEEP AND PUT FORTH SUPERB POINTS 👏
AND I TOO AGREE WITH YOU IN TOTO - KUNWAR'S MISPLACED SENSE OF PRIDE WAS HIS ULTIMATE UNDOING, AND, AS LASHY CORRECTLY SAYS, WHAT A SAD WASTE OF A LIFE THERE ARE INNUMERABLE EXAMPLES IN HISTORY OF ROYALS WHO FACE A SIMILAR STATE...AND YET SOME OF THEM NEVER LEARN
THE LADY IN THE BLUE VEIL 😉 WE HAVE ALREADY RECEIVED A W&W FROM LASHY SAHIBA 😉 😕 BESIDES WHICH, I HAVE LITTLE FAITH IN THESE WOMEN FROM THE EARLIER TEASER I COULD NOT MAKE OUT WHETHER SHEHZAADI WAS A FRIEND OR A FOE...AND LOOK AT THE HAVOC SHE WREAKED ON HEERA AND US ON APPEARING 😡 SANDHYA HAS GIVEN THIS SOME THOUGHT AND HER SCENARIOS ARE HILARIOUS 😆 SHE COULD INDEED BE SAHIB'S MOTHER, AND AS SANDHYA RIGHTLY SAYS, IF WHATEVER SHE HAS BEEN PLANNING BEARS FRUITION THEN SHE WOULD GET A CHANCE TO ATONE FOR HURTING HER SON, AND THE PERSON WHO LOVED HER IMMENSELY 😭 THERE COULD VERY WELL BE A SITUATION THAT THE NEXT DUEL GETS CANCELLED 😕 I AM EXCITED AT THIS DEVELOPMENT...
THE BEST THING ABOUT YOUR WRITING, LASHY, IS THAT IT IS ALWAYS UNEXPECTED..I HAVE OF COURSE SAID IT A MILLION TIMES...😉 EVEN THOUGH I KNEW WELL ENOUGH THAT THERE WOULD BE DUEL IN THIS CHAPTER...I COULD HAVE NEVER IMAGINED IT TO PLAY OUT THUS...YOUR MODUS OPERANDI IS JUST MIND BLOWING ⭐️ GRADUALLY UNFOLDING THE SCENES...THE LONG DESCRIPTION OF THE ARENA, WITH EACH COLOR EXPLAINED IN DETAIL...CHACHAJAAN'S GUT WRENCHING LAMENT...HIS DILEMMA ABOUT WITNESSING THE DUEL...HIS DECISION OF STAY AND WATCH 😭 SAHIB'S MEN...WORRIED ABOUT HIM AND DISGUSTED AT THE HUZOOR...
THE SHEHZAADE...GOSH...SO MANY THOUGHTS...👏 BUT OVERPOWERING ALL OF THEM, HIS STUBBORN REFUSAL TO LISTEN TO HIS HEART 😡
SHEHZAADI BANO...WORRIED ABOUT HER HUSBAND AND YET PROUD TO EVEN GIVE A SECOND THOUGHT TO HEERA'S SUGGESTION...BUT I GUESS THE POOR WOMEN DARE NOT...IF SHE VALUES HER POSITION
WHERE IS FS??? I SWEAR IF HE IS AIDING KHALIL IN SOME WAY OR JEOPARDISING SAHIB IS ANY WAY 😡 I AM GOING BACK IN HISTORY TO STRANGLE HIM WITH MY BARE HANDS...BUT BEING MORE ASTUTE THAN HUZOOR...COULD IT BE THAT HE MIGHT HAVE MADE A HASTY RUN...
HEERA...SUCH A SAD AND DEPLORABLE STATE...😭
THEN SUDDENLY THE LADY IN THE BLUE VEIL...DARE WE OR DAREN'T WE HOPE..
MAHENDER...WORRIED AND TRYING TO JUSTIFY THE MESS HE HAS GOTTEN HIMSELF INTO...
SUDDENLY WE MOVE TO THE ACTUAL DUEL...AN ABSOLUTE EDGE OF THE SEAT THRILL RIDE...EVEN THOUGH ITS PACE WAS SLOW AND ITS SETTING PLACID...
SWINE LIVED UPTO HIS NAME BY GETTING A POISON LACED KATAAR 😡 WONDER WHAT KHALIL WILL GET...
DURGA FINALLY GETTING AVENGED...I GUESS SHE CAN REST IN PEACE NOW...I WAS MORE ASTONISHED THAT MOHAN BANNA ECHOED THESE SENTIMENTS...SINCE THIS WAS NEVER OPENLY MENTIONED, I HAD KIND OF FORGOTTEN THAT SAHIBS MEN AND PARNAGARHIS MUST HAVE EXCHANGED SEVERAL DETAILS AND FILLED EACH OTHER IN...
CHACHAJAAN'S LOUD WHOOP OF JOY...
BUT ACCORDING TO ME THE MASTERSTROKE OF THIS CHAPTER WAS CHOTA ZAYAAN 😉 KUKU'S AZEEZ HAS A NEW REASON TO LIVE😉
WOW WOW WOW ⭐️ THANKS FOR THIS MAGICAL TREAT
P.S. I TOO FELT THAT THE RED LINES APPEARED TOO SOON...SO TELL US...IS C58 +EPILOGUE GOING TO BE THE FINAL COUNT OR WILL IT BE 59+EPILOGUE??
P.P.S I DID NOT THINK THE EDIT WAS FIGURATIVE AT ALL...A TAD MISLEADING, MAY BE...
Edited by Sabdabhala - 6 years ago
No Ayooo. No paavam!
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