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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 6 years ago

#71

Originally posted by lashy

You know... I've completed 10,000 words and there's still an entire 2500 word scene left ... it's a mammoth of a chapter... and not able to write more than 500 words per day... so... it's so tough... and there's so many things happening at home, one after another...

Lashy,

I suggest you split the 12 500 words and make it as 2 chapters 57 and 58, each with about 7000 -8000 words.. So that we can linger on with HBAS more time..

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Originally posted by lashy

You know... I've completed 10,000 words and there's still an entire 2500 word scene left ... it's a mammoth of a chapter... and not able to write more than 500 words per day... so... it's so tough... and there's so many things happening at home, one after another...

Lashy,
I suggest you split the 12 500 words and make it as 2 chapters 57 and 58, each with about 7000 -8000 words.. So that we can linger on with HBAS more time..

I was approaching a similar conclusion🤔... while not exactly split that way.. because of how it plays... not going to make this the Gargantuan-length one I originally intended it to be

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Testmytest

You know I am just teasing you. No worries at all. Like I said we will continue to do what we are doing now and I am reading the previous chapters in the mean time.

Hayoo... even if you weren't teasing me... I'd love it... it is after all, your questions that keep me going!

How beautifully you have written, every scene depicts so much emotion. The characters come alive with your writing...

Thank you so so so much🤗

Don't stress yourself on the update, it will come...

God knows how you are managing house, 3 munchkin, us and the update!!!

Take your time dear, we are here!! Bigger the chapter, better for us anyway 😉

Read my suggestion above! Btw, did you read that snippet on the purple valleys?

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#74

Good Morning my dear Children!

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Testmytest

@Testmytest

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: lashy

Read my suggestion above! Btw, did you read that snippet on the purple valleys?

I sure did, will reply to that later tonight. Want to say few things on that!!! I read 5 times already 😳

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#76

A Tete-a tete between Baby, Babloo and grandma..

( Baby Sarasa and Bablookutty are seriously discussing about Lashy's story..They have so many doubts in their minds.. so many unanswered koshchens!))

Babloo: What is an 'pdate, Baby'kka?

Baby: What are you asking ?

Babloo: Grandma looks into the computer whenever she is awake and always says 'it has not come, it has not come'..What is it ? Is it something 'feshal'?

Baby: mmm? Babloo..I really don't know what it is.. We'll ask grandma.. she is coming..

( Grandma comes.)

G'ma: Hey kutties, what are you doing instead of going to bed..?

Babloo: Grandma.. we want a new story..

Baby: Yes grandma.. We want to know if Akbar uncle is free from the prison..

Babloo: 'kka.. Grandma showed me Akbar uncle's picher.. He is dressed as a soldier . He has a bi...g sword in his hand..He must be going to war..

Baby: Then he must be free..

Babloo: In 'nother picher, Heera'kka also goes with him.. But she doesn't carry any bag..

Baby: Why should anyone carry bag to the war , you silly boy!..

Babloo: Did you forget Baby'kka? Jodha'kka carried a bag full of red powder.. With that Jalal uncle killed all his enemies..

G'ma: Shhh... Now.. what do you want to know..?

Babloo: What is an 'pdate grandma?

Baby: What is Akbar uncle going to do?

Babloo: Is he going to the war with Heera'kka? Does she know sword fight?

Baby: No Babloo.. grandma said that she is just learning arrow aiming from Akbar uncle..

Babloo: Have they come out of the prison..?

G'ma: ( sighs) Hmm.. I am also eagerly waiting for the good news..

Baby: Is that why you are looking at the laptop always?

Babloo: Ohh.. Baby'kka.. I know it now..! 'pdate is good news!

G'ma: I am not very sure kutties.. Akbar must have to meet Khalil and Mahendar in a sword fight and defeat them..

Baby: Mahenar? Oh.. The prince?

Babloo: Prince? But his name is Shehzaade Baby'kka..

G'ma: No kutty.. Shehzaade is Moghul prince.. Mahendar is..is..

Babloo: Ah.. now I remember.. Sandhya'kka gave him 'nother name..Swine! Why has she given him such a name grandma?

Baby: Because grandma once said that Lashy'kka wrote that he drank too much of wine!

G'ma: ( Laughs)..Swine means 'pig'.. Sandhya wants to roast him over the fire just as a pig..

Babloo: Why?

Baby: Because he is a bad guy..

Babloo: Is he even badder than badboy Khalil?

G'ma; Both are equally bad in scheming against Akbar..Mahendar is a handsome bad guy..But Khlail is an ugly bad guy..

Babloo: How can any bad guy be handsome? In all the fairy tale cartoons, bad guys look only ugly ..

Baby: Babloo.. grandma didn't say handmany.. she only said handsome! 😆

Babloo: No'kka.. He is only handnothing!😡

Edited by karkuzhali - 6 years ago

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Sabdabhala

@Sabdabhala

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good Morning my dear Children!

GOOD MORNING AUNTY BAISAS AND JAMES

SUPERB MESSAGE AUNTY👏 HBAS HAS TOO MANY CHARACTERS WHO ARE DOERS, THOSE OF RECOGNIZE CHALLENGES AND DO SOMETHING

LETS START WITH DURGA BAISA WHO WAS BRAVE. SHE FOUGHT WITH THE MIGHTY KHALIL AND NEVER COWERED IN FRIGHT

HEERA BAISA, LIKEWISE, FACED EVEN MORE CHALLENGES. SHE TOO NEVER BACKED DOWN. HER STRONG MIND CAME TO HER AID TO FACE ALL ODDS. EVEN WHILE IN PRISON SHE KEPT THINKING AND MAKING PLANS AND EXECUTED THEM

AZEEZ IBRAHIM SAYYID ALL PERFECTLY TRAINED MEN AND SOLDIERS DID THEIR DUTIES DILIGENTLY. THEIR SENSE OF LOYALTY AND DEVOTION AND GRATITUDE SETS THEM APART

MOHAN BANNA RATAN KAKASA BAJRANG, ALL LOYAL WARRIORS. THEIR BAISA IS THEIR PRIDE AND PURPOSE IN LIFE. HOW ENDEARING IT IS TOO SEE THEM ACCEPTING SAHIB N HIS MEN WHOLE HEARTEDLY AND WORKING IN TANDEM WITH OTHERS FOR THE COMMON GOAL

BINDIYA DHANI N GAURI TOO SHOW IMMENSE STRENGTH WHEN REQUIRED. THEIR DEVOTION TO THEIR BAISA AND SAHIB IS EXEMPLARY

CHACHAJAAN THE BRAVEST OF THEM ALL. HIS LOVE FOR AKBAR AND LOYALTY FOR THE FAMILY MADE HIM TAKE HUGE RISKS, WITHOUT ONCE BOTHERING ABOUT HIS OWN COMFORT

KHAN SAHIB.. WHAT MORE CAN WE SAY ABOUT HIM. WE HAVE SPENT THE LADT MANY MANY MONTHS PRAISING HIS PROWESS AS A SOLIDER, A SPY, A PHANTOM ARCHER, A LEADER, A MENTOR, A DEDICATED DEPUTY, AND MOST OF ALL AN OUT OF THIS WORLD HUSBAND

OF COURSE LETS NOT FORGET SOME OTHERS WHO MIGHT NOT BE AS BRAVE BUT STILL ARE - MAHADEV RAI SAHIB, KUNWAR TEJRAJ, NSS GUARD, SAHIB'S AND HEERA/DURGA'S OTHER MEN WHO GAVE THEIR LIVES

AND I ALSO INCLUDE LASHY SAHIBA IN THE LIST OF ACHIEVERS - THE ONE WHO CREATED THIS AWESOME WORLD WHERE WE CAN LOSE OURSELVES INNUMERABLE TIMES. HER WEB OF WORDS ARE WHAT LEGENDS ARE MADE OF ⭐️👏

AND OF COURSE ALL OF US BAISAS IMMENSELY TALENTED IN OUR OWN WAYS WHO COME TOGETHER TO PARTAKE OF THIS LOVELY RENDITION, AND OUR CHIEF WHICH IS YOU, AUNTY, SO CREATIVE AND SO WONDERFUL!!!

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Sabdabhala

@Sabdabhala

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

A Tete-a tete between Baby, Babloo and grandma..

( Baby Sarasa and Bablookutty are seriously discussing about Lashy's story..They have so many doubts in their minds.. so many unanswered koshchens!))

Babloo: What is an 'pdate, Baby'kka?
Baby: What are you asking ?
Babloo: Grandma looks into the computer whenever she is awake and always says 'it has not come, it has not come'..What is it ? Is it something 'feshal'?
Baby: mmm? Babloo..I really don't know what it is.. We'll ask grandma.. she is coming..
( Grandma comes.)
G'ma: Hey kutties, what are you doing instead of going to bed..?
Babloo: Grandma.. we want a new story..
Baby: Yes grandma.. We want to know if Akbar uncle is free from the prison..
Babloo: 'kka.. Grandma showed me Akbar uncle's picher.. He is dressed as a soldier . He has a bi...g sword in his hand..He must be going to war..
Baby: Then he must be free..
Babloo: In 'nother picher, Heera'kka also goes with him.. But she doesn't carry any bag..
Baby: Why should anyone carry bag to the war , you silly boy!..
Babloo: Did you forget Baby'kka? Jodha'kka carried a bag full of red powder.. With that Jalal uncle killed all his enemies..
G'ma: Shhh... Now.. what do you want to know..?
Babloo: What is an 'pdate grandma?
Baby: What is Akbar uncle going to do?
Babloo: Is he going to the war with Heera'kka? Does she know sword fight?
Baby: No Babloo.. grandma said that she is just learning arrow aiming from Akbar uncle..

Babloo: Have they come out of the prison..?
G'ma: ( sighs) Hmm.. I am also eagerly waiting for the good news..
Baby: Is that why you are looking at the laptop always?
Babloo: Ohh.. Baby'kka.. I know it now..! 'pdate is good news!
G'ma: I am not very sure kutties.. Akbar must have to meet Khalil and Mahendar in a sword fight and defeat them..
Baby: Mahenar? Oh.. The prince?
Babloo: Prince? But his name is Shehzaade Baby'kka..
G'ma: No kutty.. Shehzaade is Moghul prince.. Mahendar is..is..
Babloo: Ah.. now I remember.. Sandhya'kka gave him 'nother name..Swine! Why has she given him such a name grandma?
Baby: Because grandma once said that Lashy'kka wrote that he drank too much of wine!
G'ma: ( Laughs)..Swine means 'pig'.. Sandhya wants to roast him over the fire just as a pig..
Babloo: Why?
Baby: Because he is a bad guy..
Babloo: Is he even badder than badboy Khalil?
G'ma; Both are equally bad in scheming against Akbar..Mahendar is a handsome bad guy..But Khlail is an ugly bad guy..
Babloo: How can any bad guy be handsome? In all the fairy tale cartoons, bad guys look only ugly ..
Baby: Babloo.. grandma didn't say handmany.. she only said handsome! 😆

Babloo: No'kka.. He is only handnothing!😡