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Rashmi Singh

@Rashmisingh9151

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#141

Lashy didu 🤗

intriguing prologue😉

but it didn't make me

understand much 😆

so Modern story on our

oh so-loving Akheera

you know I got to know bout it

day before but couldn't get to to read it 😭

but now I did after getting Pm by you

always the late Lateef 😆

Okay it's so me I always do I mean whenever I get to

help someone and he don't react 😳 and I am like

huh the Person didn't even smile back in gratitude forget

about thanking how rude 😆

by watching her real self he couldn't spoke😆 but by seeing her

pic in cell he did thought she is pretty😉 and it was first time he did

use this for girl inwardly though interesting Lashy didu 😳

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Vmanoh

@Vmanoh

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: lashy

Wow Lashy - A fabulous Part two it was !!! The way you are able to connect the dots always amazes me.⭐️👏 Not sure how & where you hatch these idea's - but we are glad you decided to share it with us ! So here's my take of the two part.

She:

In a land foreign, waiting alone in the menacing night, she was not one to whimper,

A stranger is in need, you'll not lose if you helped out she heard her heart whisper!

An act of kindness she told herself, was reciprocated and denied it was a short fling,

My life treading these tracks, owes thanks to elders who took me under their wing.

Commitment to my betrothed is still too new as the ring I wear, cries out my heart!

But why does it not contain the flames rising within me and stay still until I depart?

He:

He thought her heart was locked and the keys were kept safely somewhere,

Still he could not reign in his own while it wailed, you are digging deep, beware!

After fate played it's part and gave a chance for him to repay her good deed,

His heart refused to obey and blurted a truth about her eyes, it's Amber indeed!

Errant his heart had behaved, but surely regrets he had none for having indulged,

In a brief encounter that would change his life forever, when truth was divulged.

Both:

Life's not been the same since that fateful day, they impart in unison,

To say that we went through hell and back still pales in comparison!

'Race and religion does not matter in this modern era' sadly is still a myth!

But we overcame the barriers to claim 'Love triumphs' as the universal truth!

PS: We'll pester you after HBAS to come back and give us a conclusion to 'their' story! 😉

Edited by Vmanoh - 6 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
She never writes but when she writes, she will make sure to send us -> ''

Never writes aaa😲

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Rashmi Singh

@Rashmisingh9151

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#144

Part one Lashy didu 🤗

wish to go back to past and live your carefree childhood again

get done with every task you have on your plate never left 😊

so engage with the person who is being to good to be true

make me already doubt on him 😆

no care about tomorrow just go with the flow of life

face whatever may come it's not like you have choice😉

with this inwardly vow our heroine get on station and wait for her

train to reach safely to her destination which is hotel for time being 😆

but who knew our real hero will take entry at the same place frustrated

worried sick because he forget his cell 😆 and he was in need of it very badly 😊

and he got help by our heroine 😉 as she loan him her cell for time being

which turn out to be good for him and later eventually for her 😉

the detail of each emotion make me crave more and more '

and knowing it's two shot only I take very long time to get

don even with first chappy 😳

very Beautiful Chappy Didu it's outstanding👏👏

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: lashy

Never writes aaa😲

It's about Manu and she writing reviews...😆

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

It's about Manu and she writing reviews...😆

😛😛

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

She:

In a land foreign, waiting alone in the menacing night, she was not one to whimper,

A stranger is in need, you'll not lose if you helped out she heard her heart whisper!

An act of kindness she told herself, was reciprocated and denied it was a short fling,

My life treading these tracks, owes thanks to elders who took me under their wing.

Commitment to my betrothed is still too new as the ring I wear, cries out my heart!

But why does it not contain the flames rising within me and stay still until I depart?

He:
He thought her heart was locked and the keys were kept safely somewhere,
Still he could not reign in his own while it wailed, you are digging deep, beware!
After fate played it's part and gave a chance for him to repay her good deed,
His heart refused to obey and blurted a truth about her eyes, it's Amber indeed!
Errant his heart had behaved, but surely regrets he had none for having indulged,
In a brief encounter that would change his life forever, when truth was divulged.

Both:
Life's not been the same since that fateful day, they impart in unison,
To say that we went through hell and back still pales in comparison!
'Race and religion does not matter in this modern era' sadly is still a myth!
But we overcame the barriers to claim 'Love triumphs' as the universal truth!

PS: We'll pester you after HBAS to come back and give us a conclusion to 'their' story! 😉

This is so beautiful, Vathsy! ❤️

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Rashmi Singh

@Rashmisingh9151

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#148

Part 2 Lashy didu 🤗

the start of chappy are always so lovely that I

could say nothing but send you a hug 😆

Mr Midnight blue 😆what a nick name of our

so dashing Stranger 😎

okay so our Mr Stranger thought our heroine have not idea about her

stop😆 so he ask and let her know and got to know she got to figure it

out herself not bad start of their conversation 😉

way to deal with those irksome troublemakers 😳

that so called Alpha lad were no match front of our

Dashing hero 😎 so he had to leave without creating any fuss 😆

okay so you love to get our lead even no matter what isn't it 😆

first she help him by offering her cell 😉

and he help her by getting rid of those so called boys 😉

and with this we can[t forget the sweet moment when

he alerted her about wide gap 😆 and now this sharing water

not sure about getting them even but you love to make us go

on dreamy world by your wonderful writing

uff this Piggy will never change even after 100 years huh 😡

back in HBAS he was after girls for their land and now their

wealth 😡

but no worries in both place he got kicked out of our heroine life 😆

and reason none either than Our Dashing cool hero 😎

But I want more Lashy didu please one more part do turn this

into Three shot if you can please please please 😳

it was so beautiful but it's not enough for me 😆

so have mercy on us and write more 😉

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

She:

In a land foreign, waiting alone in the menacing night, she was not one to whimper,

A stranger is in need, you'll not lose if you helped out she heard her heart whisper!

An act of kindness she told herself, was reciprocated and denied it was a short fling,

My life treading these tracks, owes thanks to elders who took me under their wing.

Commitment to my betrothed is still too new as the ring I wear, cries out my heart!

But why does it not contain the flames rising within me and stay still until I depart?

He:
He thought her heart was locked and the keys were kept safely somewhere,
Still he could not reign in his own while it wailed, you are digging deep, beware!
After fate played it's part and gave a chance for him to repay her good deed,
His heart refused to obey and blurted a truth about her eyes, it's Amber indeed!
Errant his heart had behaved, but surely regrets he had none for having indulged,
In a brief encounter that would change his life forever, when truth was divulged.

Both:
Life's not been the same since that fateful day, they impart in unison,
To say that we went through hell and back still pales in comparison!
'Race and religion does not matter in this modern era' sadly is still a myth!
But we overcame the barriers to claim 'Love triumphs' as the universal truth!

PS: We'll pester you after HBAS to come back and give us a conclusion to 'their' story! 😉