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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: lashy

You like Bride and Prejudice so much?😆
Manu 🤗

Nooo...😛

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rs_fun2

@rs_fun2

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#132

Hey Lashy,

What an amazing Two-shot! You have a real gift of portraying emotions and keeping us on the edge... how beautifully you sketched the characters of the leads and the flurries within them on their first meeting...

The way u got the thorn out of their way was simply a master stroke 👏

Hope you can take us through this new world Akbar and Heera story and let this beginning not be the end

Take a bow author-sahiba, you have outdone yourself yet another time 🤗

Edited by rs_fun2 - 6 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

I was wondering after reading the first shot as to how she is going to get rid of that idiot abheer without offending her foster parents and akbar turned out to be her knight in shining armour.
Awww... thankyou Divya🤗

Would love to read how these soulmates meet again and in what situation. So you see you have scope to write few more shots😃
I wont mind if you continue this story lashy dear😳.

Nahiii... I can barely keep up with one! 😆
Thanks a ton for dropping in with your comments dearie 🤗

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
What a beautiful tale u hv created musanifa sahiba ...😃
Missing Jiya!

That touches the heart with ease & send readers into beautiful euphoria...😳😳

Really?🤗
With elation we pursue it , relish it & will remember it .
A divine beauteous girl travelling towards her destination when she meets her midnight blue , right from the derby black leather shoes to his voice...so manlier & he'd have the face to match that voice, who would've thought?
☺️ Ufffo Manu!
who would've thought?
without setting eyes on that kind in real yet u can feel so mesmerized
Achaaa?
but something tells me its the magic of someone's hands & this someone is quite superlative in creating surprises , magic is in her writing . any project she takes , blooms...a mind so lovely & lovelier is its imaginations...❤️
Dhattt!☺️ Manu tum bhi na...
Thanks a ton sweetie... 🤗

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Rani16

@Rani16

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#135

OMG!!!

Thank you for the PM...I was soo excited when I saw it!!

This is such a refreshing tale!!!⭐️👏

I could feel a connection to HBAS while I was reading it...her limited vision, being engaged, ...but when i read their names, I was grinning from ear to ear😃...this is them in this century...☺️❤️

I thoroughly enjoyed it, please give us more updates on this beginning..

Love and Regards!! 🤗

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#136

Uff! Almost 40 chapters condensed into half a chapter, yet with the same thrills, same tingles and same fervent anticipation of what next though the same had happened almost 400 years ago. 😆

Shayad ise kehte hain janam janam ka saath. It is them now. And in a different country but with the same attraction care and protective and passionate feelings for each other. ☺️ How easily you transcend from a historic setting to a modern day setting and retain the same aura and feel about the characters Sahiba!👏

Abheer swine Raichand...you'll be the same even after 400 years.😡 Using marriage as a ticket to laying hands on a lady's wealth. 😡

And Khan Sahib...welcome to the 21st century.🥳

Whether you are in your metallic blue tunic or midnight blue tailored suit, on Bahadur or in your Porsche you'll be the same enigmatic charming heart-beat quickener.😳

And Heera Sahiba, your vision impairment and di heartbreak continue through the ages, but no worries, Khan Sahib is always there to protect you and heal your aches and save you from swines.😳

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#137

Beginning -kku appuram enna achu?

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: lashy

Chicken little😆

It's so cute.. 😆 😆

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
What a beautiful tale u hv created musanifa sahiba ...😃
That touches the heart with ease & send readers into beautiful euphoria...😳😳

With elation we pursue it , relish it & will remember it .
A divine beauteous girl travelling towards her destination when she meets her midnight blue , right from the derby black leather shoes to his voice...so manlier & he'd have the face to match that voice, who would've thought?

who would've thought?
without setting eyes on that kind in real yet u can feel so mesmerized but something tells me its the magic of someone's hands & this someone is quite superlative in creating surprises , magic is in her writing . any project she takes , blooms...a mind so lovely & lovelier is its imaginations...❤️

She never writes but when she writes, she will make sure to send us -> ''

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Abheer swine Raichand...you'll be the same even after 400 years.😡 Using marriage as a ticket to laying hands on a lady's wealth. 😡
>>>🤣 🤣 🤣
And Khan Sahib...welcome to the 21st century.🥳

Whether you are in your metallic blue tunic or midnight blue tailored suit, on Bahadur or in your Porsche you'll be the same enigmatic charming heart-beat quickener.😳
>>>☺️ 👍🏼 ☺️

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
Beginning -kku appuram enna achu?

Yeah we know It's Christmas season. 😆 😆

@Bindu, superb view, dear!! 👍🏼

@Rose, That was suda suda reaction of coming to reality from the dreamland. 😉 😆 and that's ROSE-LICIOUS take!! 😉

Edited by Kalgi22 - 6 years ago

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
What a beautiful tale u hv created musanifa sahiba ... 😃

That touches the heart with ease & send readers into beautiful euphoria...😳😳

With elation we pursue it , relish it & will remember it .
A divine beauteous girl travelling towards her destination when she meets her midnight blue , right from the derby black leather shoes to his voice...so manlier & he'd have the face to match that voice, who would've thought?

who would've thought?
without setting eyes on that kind in real yet u can feel so mesmerized but something tells me its the magic of someone's hands & this someone is quite superlative in creating surprises , magic is in her writing . any project she takes , blooms...a mind so lovely & lovelier is its imaginations...❤️

Beautiful choice of word's , Manu!

Lovely review! 👏

Rose and Sandhya di...beautiful beautiful reviews! 👏 👏

Thank you , My kal di! 🤗