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selvi1275

@selvi1275

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: lashy

Lashy..I did a...Hop...Read...Hop ...Read...Hop Hop...and I like C53...

Now ...will go Read properly...😳

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Oh my goddd Chellam.. Mwah... Thank you Thank you so much for this chapter... It meant a lot... I was so restless and excited as If I'm part of this game with Ustaad's men and Parnagarhies... OMG... I could still feel my heart beat... It's pure brilliance that you put better use of their own unique talents.. OMG this stupid grin on my face.. 😃 Hope it will take sometime for me to be normal...

Uff as those pretty fumigators spreading the smoke, yes you successfully spread the positivity throughout the chapter... And the connection from past chapters... Uff hats off Chellam.. The medicine that specially Heera prepared for Mohan Banna is the one going to help Khan Sahib now.. And everyone's uniqueness in better use. Even the Ratan Kaka in the picture to dictate the scroll.. and you didn't even miss the Sayyid appearance.. Uff what a master planner you are, Chellam!! 👏 👏 👏

And Chellam when Gauri consoling Heera and then when IM putting some sense to the enraged group, I felt as if they are talking to me... putting some sense and guiding me through what's next. Really this is much needed chapter.. I wanted it very badly.. Now I think I can go and read C52 again and write something about it..

Thank you, Chellam.. My spirits are so high... that my hands and mind are feeling like 'Thuru thuru' as if I'm going to do something.. 😆

What a plot.. I'm in awe.. This chapter is something else together.. ⭐️ 👏

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Lashy..I did a...Hop...Read...Hop ...Read...Hop Hop...and I like C53...
Now ...will go Read properly...😳

Appadi na? 🤔

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
Thank you so much for keeping your word , Sahiba. 🤗

C53 brought the first rays of hope, all right, by way of all Ustaad's and Heera's innermost circle of comrades banding together to embark on a near impossible task to save their Sahib and Sahiba.👍🏼
>>>I'm totally '' and '' and sad 'Here we come!!'
It has begun to shine upon the couple with Heera gaining renewed strength from Gauri's inspiring words and seeking Ma's intervention to help her husband- what a deeply moving prayer it was.
>>>

The novel is at its one of its most thrilling phases-here begins the mission of all missions to keep us gripped to our seats in absolute awe and wonderment at how the author is going to weave her wand ..I mean ..pen to leave us breathless.😃
>>>Yes this mission is something else!!

And it has started with how they decoded Ustaad's clues and how they planned to execute what needed to be done.👍🏼
>>>Yes I'm in still in ''

I wouldn't be wrong to say the girls stole the show- Dhani, Bindiya and Gauri-a high-five to you three Sahibas!👏
>>>Of course!! ⭐️
What a throw by Gauri and what a catch by Azeez!👏
>>>Salute to them!! 👏
Lashy Sahiba, you have absolutely no right to keep us hanging on for 20 days.😊

Our leads are running out of time, time is of the essence, so get cracking like how the leads' men and women have done.🤗
>>>Yes!! 😭

Fumigators with incense burners - most of the baisas had guessed the picture that you posted to be of an incense burner to put the guards to sleep but holy smoke , they were mostly for the mozzies and almost every kind of ailment . 😆What a ploy and will it get better with the entry of a few khwaja seras?😉
>>>Ahem ahem!! Is there any specified entry you're waiting for.. 😉😆

Took about an hour to read the chapter ;thought it was short but as I scrolled down again, it dawned on me that it was indeed quite a long one-which only proves that when you lose yourself in the magic of the words , no matter how long the update it is never long enough.
>>>Very true, Rose!! It took almost 2 hours for me.. But I was like 'What? Finished? That quick?' 😆

Congrats on the new thread , Sahibas!

Edited by Kalgi22 - 6 years ago

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Chapter 53

Ray of hope...hope that everything will be fine soon... Khan sahib's men and parnagrahis try their best to help to Khan sahib and heera...no matter what.

Thrilling and exciting update...apart from starting.

This is the time for Khan sahib s men and parnagrahis to pay back what their sahib and sahiba did for them .

Mere and simple maids putting their life for their sahib and sahiba...that's Khan sahib and heera achievement which their enemies never going to achieve .

Each and every one trying their best...Bindiya, Dhani, gauri, Ratan kaka...everyone trying their level best to make them helpful.

I am so proud of everyone...how they united and working their best...without loosing their patience.

Wow...they crack Khan sahib's codes ...Bindiya and dhani reached to heera and bring help for Khan sahib.

Heera used Khan sahib's unique knot ...

Lashy di I just love the way you connect each and everything.

'Khuda...' His trembling fingers tried joining together parts of the Sahib's collar that had been torn, but in vain. 'He ensured we men got out, free... and ended up facing the wrath of our Huzoor, alone... a wrath that was possibly triggered by my brash display in court! Forgive me, Ustaad Sahib!'

This is so 😭 😭 😭

It brings tear in my eyes ...

But below paragraph bring smile in my face. 😊

This only you can do it in very single chapter. 😳

Azeez turned to Sayyid thereafter, a grin plastered on his cheek.

'The 'unique' knot - we've got it!'

'Yes, we have!'

Lashy di 🤗

What a update...take a bow for it.

Each chapter expressed so much...it shows us how much effort you put in it...lots of thinking...connecting each and every single things. ...giving importance to each character's...wow just wow.👏

I feel honour to read your work di.

Do you have any idea you are a true magician...visibility doesn't show that much emotions which shows your write up.

Love you so much! 🤗

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: lashy

Appadi na? 🤔

I think she just skimmed through.. Now only going to read it thoroughly.. 😆

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
Chapter 53

Heera used Khan sahib's unique knot ...
Lashy di I just love the way you connect each and everything.

Each chapter expressed so much...it shows us how much effort you put in it...lots of thinking...connecting each and every single things. ...giving importance to each character's...wow just wow.👏
I feel honour to read your work di.
Do you have any idea you are a true magician...visibility doesn't show that much emotions which shows your write up.
Love you so much! 🤗

Bindu I cannot agree anymore... 👏 👏 👏

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
restless and excited as If I'm part of this game with Ustaad's men and Parnagarhies...
OMG... I could still feel my heart beat...

you put better use of their own unique talents..

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
This is the time for Khan sahib s men and parnagrahis to pay back what their sahib and sahiba did for them .
Mere and simple maids putting their life for their sahib and sahiba...that's Khan sahib and heera achievement which their enemies never going to achieve .

I was waitinggg to see if this would be picked on, and it was!

This is what it is all about!

All those close to Heera and Khan Sahib using their own little unique skills to strengths to pay back their dues to two true leaders!

Skills even as small as Dhani being a pretty flirt, Gauri being a strong woman, Azeez playing those market games with Chota Faizan while eating naan-e-tanuri...t hat unique knot and more

And yes Ma Bhavani too ... this is what it meant in end of last chapter -that her cries were so touching even Ma Bhavani couldn't ignore them anymore!

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

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Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

HIDING BEHIND
A
STRANGER
( A Historical Romance by Lashy)
( Abridged)

Part 1. The Tornado

Chapter 6.

The Melting Moments..

Ethereal beauty Heera
At the terrace...

😳
[Journey continues]

👏 👏 👏Periyamma, how timely is this update. Azeez's formidable reflexive skills again came to the fore in C53.👍🏼

Reading the story again this way brings back all the warm sensations felt when it was read for the first time.

Impressive paintings to embellish the update, Periyamma.🤗

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
Thank you so much for keeping your word , Sahiba. 🤗
C53 brought the first rays of hope, all right, by way of all Ustaad's and Heera's innermost circle of comrades banding together to embark on a near impossible task to save their Sahib and Sahiba.👍🏼
It has begun to shine upon the couple with Heera gaining renewed strength from Gauri's inspiring words and seeking Ma's intervention to help her husband- what a deeply moving prayer it was.
The novel is at its one of its most thrilling phases-here begins the mission of all missions to keep us gripped to our seats in absolute awe and wonderment at how the author is going to weave her wand ..I mean ..pen to leave us breathless.😃
And it has started with how they decoded Ustaad's clues and how they planned to execute what needed to be done.👍🏼
I wouldn't be wrong to say the girls stole the show- Dhani, Bindiya and Gauri-a high-five to you three Sahibas!👏
What a throw by Gauri and what a catch by Azeez!👏
Lashy Sahiba, you have absolutely no right to keep us hanging on for 20 days.😊
Our leads are running out of time, time is of the essence, so get cracking like how the leads' men and women have done.🤗
Fumigators with incense burners - most of the baisas had guessed the picture that you posted to be of an incense burner to put the guards to sleep but holy smoke , they were mostly for the mozzies and almost every kind of ailment . 😆What a ploy and will it get better with the entry of a few khwaja seras?😉
Took about an hour to read the chapter ;thought it was short but as I scrolled down again, it dawned on me that it was indeed quite a long one-which only proves that when you lose yourself in the magic of the words , no matter how long the update it is never long enough.
Congrats on the new thread , Sahibas!

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Oh my goddd Chellam.. Mwah... Thank you Thank you so much for this chapter... It meant a lot... I was so restless and excited as If I'm part of this game with Ustaad's men and Parnagarhies... OMG... I could still feel my heart beat... It's pure brilliance that you put better use of their own unique talents.. OMG this stupid grin on my face.. 😃 Hope it will take sometime for me to be normal...

Uff as those pretty fumigators spreading the smoke, yes you successfully spread the positivity throughout the chapter... And the connection from past chapters... Uff hats off Chellam.. The medicine that specially Heera prepared for Mohan Banna is the one going to help Khan Sahib now.. And everyone's uniqueness in better use. Even the Ratan Kaka in the picture to dictate the scroll.. and you didn't even miss the Sayyid appearance.. Uff what a master planner you are, Chellam!! 👏 👏 👏

And Chellam when Gauri consoling Heera and then when IM putting some sense to the enraged group, I felt as if they are talking to me... putting some sense and guiding me through what's next. Really this is much needed chapter.. I wanted it very badly.. Now I think I can go and read C52 again and write something about it..

Thank you, Chellam.. My spirits are so high... that my hands and mind are feeling like 'Thuru thuru' as if I'm going to do something.. 😆

What a plot.. I'm in awe.. This chapter is something else together.. ⭐️ 👏

Bold...very very well said! 👏

I so love reading your both post ! 😳

After reading Chapter 53 everyone is so excited!