Originally posted by: lghosh
I love this Sandy! Very well written and you gave the same instances of Azeez in the story that I cited! 😃 Yes, Azeez is that humor factor in the story that makes it light-hearted from being all serious. And yet his character maintains that thin line between a prankster and a loyal, dedicated and responsible lad. 😃
Haan, apna Kuki achha daaon maari hai! 😉😆
Loved the reasoning for Durga as well! Even I thought she was the female protagonist when the story started only to realise she will be no more and it is Heera who is the female lead. Heera is a little subdued and quiet but Durga came out justifying her name with full spirit, courage, enthusiasm and liveliness!
But I know and can feel if AMK had met Durga he would have felt immense respect for her but not love. He would have fell for quiet and intelligent Heera because he prefers that quietude to sprightliness. 😃 I can see while talking to Durga he would have known Heera is checking him out through her veil with a hint of a smile playing on her lips. And suddenly he would just look straight at her for a moment conveying so before turning away again! 😃
If he was walking through the corridor with Durga followed by Heera behind them he would have stopped at the two paintings looked at them but this time his eyes would be for Heera's one and there would have been a slight sideglance at her while Heera would feel and know that it is her He is watching!!
Okay, oh my gosh, I start with my imaginary rambling again! I better stop! 😃